The burning day, and Burning Order

by Burning order

Burning Order, an Alicorn living in the Everfree forest with his adoptive mother, Ifrit, has never seen life outside the forest. But when Burning finds a sunny land filled with other ponies, the adventure begins. My first Fanfic, so go easy on the reviews.

Living in the Everfree forest. Some say it would be crazy. scratch that, EVERYPONY would say its crazy.

But not Burning Order.

Who's Burning Order? He's a red pony with falcon like wings, an orange and red mane, red eyes, and a blue tail. Burning Order lived in there for so many years he lost count. Let's just say it's about 450 years.

"About 450 years? Shouldn't he be dead?" you ask? It's quite simple, really. But really, if you ask any one, please ask me before Burning Order.

You see Burning Order (I'm calling him Burn) would call it a curse. He's actually an alicorn. Despite that he has the looks and personality of a ten year old pony. (Don't ask). In reality, He's 500 years old.

His only friends are some of the young creatures that live in the Everfree, and Ifrit. Who is Ifrit you ask? Yes Ifrit is an ifrit, but a good one. Although Burn blames her for being 500 years old, Ifrit has nothing to do with it. Despite this Ifrit is like a mother to Burn, and Burn cares for her as well.

Right now, Burn's happy with his life. He never left the Everfree forest, only because he was told about the horrors to be faced outside from Ifrit.

He listens to the creature's warnings, but Burn is curious about what goes on outside the forest. But, who knows? Maybe, someday, Burn will see what's outside Everfree.

In fact, I see that day coming very soon.

Me: How's that for an intro, huh? My first fanfic sounds good to me.
But, please. If you review my story, make it light criticism. It's my first fic, and I need helpful reviews, not ones that will scar me for life. (Yes, I'm sarcastic). Burning Order and Ifrit are my OC's, (or OP's, if you get what I mean) so if you want to use them,ask permission first. More info can be found on my home page. Well until then, see you next cha-

Ifrit: Now just a minute!

Me: What now Ifrit?

Ifrit: How come Burning Order and I don't speak in this chapter?

Me: You're speaking now. And besides, it's the prologue. You two will get to speak in the next chapter.

Burn: Yeah, Ifrit. Be glad that you can even speak now.

Me: Uh, why are you speaking, Burn?

Burn: Uh... I'll go now (walks off)

Me: Ifrit?

Ifrit: Fine, I'm going! sheesh

Me: Well anyway, as I was saying before I was rudely interrupted, see you next chapter!