Author's note: This is my first fanfiction, so if you could please give me constructive criticism , that would be great. Oh, and I don't own Twilight.
Lily POV
"Edward, Edward, listen to me, please don't go, please" I cried, "You can't die, you can't, I love you"
It was true. I loved him more than anything else in this universe, and now he was dying of the Spanish Influenza. I will do whatever I can to save him. His parent's are already dead, so we get married and live far away from here, if he wold just wake up.
I saw the doctor come in, and I nearly ran to him. He was quite good looking, but not as good looking as my Edward. He looked at me with a sad look on his face,and told me that he was gone.
I stood there in shock. He was gone. Forever. I felt the tears come, and I let them take over me. If he was gone, there was no point for me. There was no point for anything.I looked at Edward one more time,and told him,"Soon we will be together, my love, soon."
I left the hospital soon afterwards. I as thinking of ways to kill myself. There were so many. As I was crying, and thinking, a women came up to me.
"I can help you with your problems, dearie. I understand the love of your life just left us,and I can help you be with him." I sniffled and looked at her. She was beautiful. She had pale skin, topaz eyes, and these weird purple bruises under her eyes. But that wasn't what made her different. The doctor looked as if he could be her brother. No, it was her hair. It was bright orange, it almost hurt to look at. She seemed nice, so I agreed.
"Excellent, darling. If you could follow me, I don't want to seem to horrible by doing this in front of a hospital." She smiled and started to walk, I followed. She lead me into a dark alley. I couldn't see a thing. Maybe this was a good thing. Maybe this was what Edward saw before he died.
I was curious though about one thing."Miss," I asked her," What's your name?"
I think she smiled and said "Victoria, darling" and then I felt a pain being shot though my neck and then nothing.
A/n : Like I said, first fan fiction, constructive criticism, and please, review.