This is my revised version thanks to hw- the blue dog (plus please review if you like it, because I'm not sure I'm going to continue)
This is my first story so here it goes. This is after Max and also after The Last Olympian. The First Chapter will be kind of short. I hope you enjoy it!
Chapter 1: Christmas
Max POV
"So, who wants to go first" I said.
"I do," says Angel and hands Fang and me the same present.
"I wonder what it is." I open it and find a receipt of a hotel in New York. "Thanks
Angel."
"I wanted you and Fang to go to New York and take a break from us." said Angel.
"Yeah we'll go." said Me"Ok, well you guys kind of have to leave now." said Angel
"Let's go then." said Fang.
"Angel who is going to watch you guys while we are gone?" said Me
"I called Jeb." said Angel, "He'll be here in two hours."
"Well I guess you'll be ok, right?" said Me
"Yes we will," said the Flock in unison.
"Ok, here we go." said Fang. We jump off the deck letting out our wings and flying over
the canyon.
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