Hey everyone this is mine and my sisters first fanfic so gives us feedback on how we are doing

~3 blackestheart4ever~

POV(Nymphadora)

As I started to get ready for the death eater ball at the Malfoy Manor, I was looking for something to impress a certain someone. I'm definitely not try try to impress Lord Voldemort. Once I noticed that didn't have anything for the ball,

I screamed out to my empty apartment ,"Fuck, I don't have anything to wear. Damn this pressure, I'm am going to get fabrics to make my own dress."

I ran quickly to the fabric store. When I entered the store I found this beautiful black fabric that would make a fantastic dress. I noticed a lady who worked there and asked her if she would take my measurements so I could make the dress

She gave me a simple answer of "Not a problem Ma am,"

"Thank you," I said to the lady and I tried to pay her for the fabrics.

She refused to take the money and said "No Dear today these fabrics are on the house from me to you."

"Thank you so much Ma am," I said as I ran out of the store and across the street to my apartment building. I ran into my apartment to my sewing machine and started to get to work quickly. I had only two hours until the ball. I finished with about 30 minutes until the ball started. As I slid the dress on it fit perfectly, or otherwise I was so fucked and would had to of wore a hot pink fluffy, frilly dress. That is so not good for a death eater ball.