Hi guys. So I love the Divergent series and nothing against Veronica Roth but the ending to allegiant broke my heart :'( SO! Here is my ending!

Tris' POV

I wake up with beeping sounds all around me and a mad headache. I try to open my eyes but they seem to be glued shut. I can hear someone beside seem to be nervous because they keep shifting and are breathing loud. I can't feel one of my hands but I can feel someone holding my other one.

I finally manage to open my eyes but all I see are bright lights. I can hear the person next to me start to talk.

"Can't you do anything? She's not moving, she's barely breathing and she hasn't woken up in days." His voice is deep, calming and very familiar.

Another, female voice replies, "we've done everything we can, I'm sorry. I don't know when she will wake up or if she ever will."

The man starts talking again, "So you're telling me, she might die and there's nothing you are going to do about it?"

"I didn't say-"

"Look lady. You obviously don't care about her but Tris means a lot to a lot of people," That's when I realize.

"Tobias,"I say in barely a whisper. He doesn't hear me. "Tobias," I squeeze his hand softly.

He turns to me. "Tris!" I try to squint at him but the lights are too bright.

"Tobias, where am I? What's going on?" I try to turn to him but immediately cry out in pain.

"Don't try to move," He says. "You were shot."

"Where?"

"Your arm, your stomach, your leg, your back and your head."

"My head? But-"

"It just skimmed you. Tris I'm so sorry. I should have been there, with you. I should have known you would-"

I bite my lip, "Tobias, I'm sorry but I had to do it I had to go in. I couldn't-"

"I'm going to have to ask you to leave," The nurse interrupts.

"No! I'm not-" Tobias starts but the nurse cuts him off.

"We have to work on her immediately now that she's awake."

Someone must have turned off the bright lights because I can see fine now. I look up at Tobias pleadingly. I don't want him to leave me with the nurses. I want him to stay.

"I don't care. I'm staying."

The nurse sighs but seems to give up. She turns to me, "How do you feel?"

I try to think of the best answer that will get me out of this room the fastest. "I feel really good actually."

The nurse frowns and turns to the other doctors.

Tobias looks at me and in a low voice says, "Tris."

I don't want him to worry so I say, "Really, I do," and push myself up into a sitting position with my uninjured arm, trying to make myself look less weak but end up just groaning.

The nurse turns back to me, "And your head?"

I try to shrug, "Nothing."

The nurse doesn't seem convinced, "We are going to have to do some tests."

I nod and she takes out a needle. She plunges into the inside of my elbow on my uninjured arm. She does this with four more and then leaves without a word. The other doctors follow.

Once there gone Tobias turns to me, "Okay I don't care that you lied to them but don't lie to me."

I sigh, "I feel horrible. I can't feel my arm, it hurts to breath and my head," I sink back into the pillows. "My head feels awful."

He nods.

"Tobias," I say, "How did I get here?"

"When we got back from the city Caleb was waiting outside. He said you had gone into the weapons lab and still hadn't come out. Me, Christina and him ran to find the doors open but you weren't in there. We went into the next room. We killed David but Tris I thought you were dead, I thought." He shakes his head. "We brought you back here and luckily you hadn't released the memory serum yet. Davids dead so it won't be released on the city but Christina and Caleb are keeping an eye on the security cameras just in case anyone gets any ideas."

"Tobias," I start, "I'm sorry but-"

"No Tris, I should have known. I'm sorry. I shouldn't have left you."

"No. I said you could trust me. I lied. I'm sorry." I feel my eyes start to tear up and Tobias squeezes my hand.

"Tris, don't cry. You're okay now. We're okay."