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Prologue

Hello, I'm Sasuke Uchiha and I was once part of the Fire Nation. I was in the village called the Leaf Village. It has been three years since I left. I went to Orochimaru for power, so I can kill my older brother. My older brother was named Itachi Uchiha. At one time I didn't hate him so much. But ever since that day I have always hated him. I left the village in the leaf because I needed power to kill him. But there is one thing I never knew that Itachi had.

On one day, Orochimaru had taken me to a village called Eclipser. Eclipser was a powerful village that was special to Orochimaru because he ruled it. So I'm amusing he was searching for a new student. Well I was almost correct. But not really. This was very shocking. Anyways as we entered the village I notice that this village had many young ninjas that were interesting. Some were pretty pathetic in my opinion. But others were very interesting that caught my eye and Orochimaru's.

As we entered into the training ground area of Eclipser Village, I saw one young girl that was very talented. She had bright blue blues eyes yet they were dark at the same time. Then there was her ivory skin. It was very beautiful for a girl that was a ninja. Usually saw young girls that had terrible ugly skin. But this girl was actually very pretty. Anyways the girl had long dark brown hair. She had a pink and black hairclip on the right side of her hair. She was wearing a summer blue short-sleeve top with a black vest. She also wore a tanned skirt with shorts under it. I'm assuming. She also had black military boots. But she was also wearing black eye liner under her eye lid. She had dark blue eye shadow on as well.

Anyways as we entered the area I saw this girl practicing her fighting techniques with a teacher. The teacher was known as Kimoushi. Kimoushi served Orochimaru in the past before he joined this village. Kimoushi was a great ninja. But of course he retired from serving Orochimaru. Anyways, This girl that he was training was very fast and quick. She strikes him so well that she almost perfected the technique. But she didn't because she was still not paying attention to her sensi's movements. Kimouri saw her weakeness and quickly makes his move. First he blocked her attack and secondly he flipped on the ground and lastly she hit the ground hard.

"BAM!"

" Kira you are still not watching my movements. You need to concentrate more on that. Take a break while I speak to Orochimau." Kimouri told her with disappointment.

The girl that was named Kira looked at her sensi and just nodded. She then looked at Orochimaru and I. She glared at the both of us for some reason. I didn't understand why. But oh well.

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" Its good to see Kimouri. I see you're a sensi to a talented girl." Orochimaru said with a smirked. Kimouri turned to look at Orochimaru. "Why are you here?" He asked as he approached us. Orochimaru chuckled evilly. "Well this is my village and I'm searching for a new student that could learn from Sasuke and I." He explained with a wide smile as he eyes Kimouri's student. That's when Kimouri turned everything down. This was foolish.

"You can't have her. You can't and won't have Kira." Kimouri told him. Orochimaru chuckled. "Its not your choice. She is in my village. Give us a good reason why I shouldn't take her." Kimouri hesitated as he looked at us. But more at me than anything. He sighed lowly. "Well… I have a good reason." He said.

"What reason?"

" This girl that you think you want is Jennifer Jenner and Itachi Uchiha's daughter." He announced.

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