Sakura's and Syaoran's song

This is about their past, present, and future. Yes it's another Taylor Swift song, but its my last one for a while. I don't own the anime or the song. (Mary's song (Oh, my, my, my))

She said, I was seven and you were nine

Sakura and Syaoran are waving at the camera

I looked at you like the stars that shined
In the sky, the pretty lights

They were staring at the night sky then Sakura turns to look at Syaoran with the same look in her eyes

And our daddies used to joke about the two of us
Growing up and falling in love and our mamas smiled
And rolled their eyes and said oh my my my

Each of their family's were at a BBQ at a park while the fathers were joking around and the mom's were talking while Sakura and Syaoran were playing tag.

Take me back to the house in the backyard tree
Said you'd beat me up, you were bigger than me
You never did, you never did

Syaoran was running after Sakura because she accidently threw her spigettie on him. After a while he stopped and accepted her appology.

Take me back when our world was one block wide
I dared you to kiss me and ran when you tried
Just two kids, you and I...
Oh my my my my

They went to sleep in Sakura's bed.

I was sixteen when suddenly
I wasn't that little girl you used to see
But your eyes still shined like pretty lights

A older Sakura was running up to an older Syaoran and he was aw struck at the way she looked but he still looked at her the way he always has.

And our daddies used to joke about the two of us
They never believed we'd really fall in love

"Will you go out with me?" asked Syaoran.

"Yes!!" scremed Sakura.

And our mamas smiled and rolled their eyes
And said oh my my my...

Take me back to the creek beds we turned up
Two A.M. riding in your truck and all I need is you next to me

Sakura was leaning on Syoaran while they looked up at the stars.

Take me back to the time we had our very first fight
The slamming of doors instead of kissing goodnight
You stayed outside til the morning light

Sakura opened her door to see Syaoran sleeping there. When he saw her he apoligized for what he did.

Oh my my my my

A few years had gone and come around
We were sitting at our favorite spot in town
And you looked at me, got down on one knee

Sakura muttered "I love you." then Syaoran proposed. (You could hear a "YES!!!!" all over the city.)

Take me back to the time when we walked down the aisle
Our whole town came and our mamas cried
You said I do and I did too

Their marriage cermony was just as they imagined, even who they were with.

Take me home where we met so many years before
We'll rock our babies on that very front porch
After all this time, you and I

Older Sakura was closing a picture album after showing it to her grand-daughter.

I'll be eighty-seven; you'll be eighty-nine
I'll still look at you like the stars that shine
In the sky, oh my my my...

I'm just wondering if that's okay. Was it? Or should there by more memories? Please tell me what you think about it.