My first fanfic besides ff7! I'm doing Love Hina which is one of my
favorite anime the plot probably sucks cause it was kinda hard to think of
an original idea so and it's not that original but..read it anyway plz and
tell me what u think. ~thought~ /dream/
Chapter One: To live in a nightmare
"Damn that had to hurt!"
Stephen watched the end of the Love Hina episode as Keitaro was sent flying through the air.
"Poor Keitaro always getting beat maybe if he wasn't so clumsy he could dodge some of the attacks I mean he is strong enough to survive em"
Shaking his head slightly Stephen turned off the DVD thinking to himself.
~But still I would kill for his life I'd say if he could just learn to be strong he would have a perfect life if I were him I'd do things differently~
Stephen looked a lot like Keitaro and Seta sort of a combination between the two. So what happened as Stephen fell asleep was only natural.
/Stephen felt a surge of energy flow through him as if the whole world couldn't stand up to him and was surrounded in a light blue light. As he flew through a tunnel of beautiful gold and blue light he noticed a red light pass him for a while he continued to go through on a complete high with the energy he received until finally he seemed to land in an ocean and all turned black/
~Wow what a great dream wait a minute why can't I breath!?!~
Stephen immediately woke up to find himself drenched he was wearing a towel and nothing else around his waist and it was kinda hard to see but not very as he rubbed his eyes his 20/20 vision was still in tact and he seemed to be aware of all his senses.
~Where am I?~
Stephen wondered in amazement as he stared at the area it was covered with water and rock and the area seemed to be consisting of what seemed like a hot spring over further inspection Stephen realized exactly where he was.
~No way there is no way that I'm here I can't be~
~I'm in hintasou!~
"Yes!"
Stephen was ecstatic by this as he started to swim around in the area felling the relaxing warmth of the hot springs.
~But wait how did this happen. . .aw who cares I'm really here~
Stephen finally calmed down to hear the door open he looked gently as his face turned to that of fear and excitement as Narusegawa walked gently down the steps into the hot spring
~My god it's really her she's...really hot!~
Stephen drooled slightly at the sight of Naru in nothing but a towel. She stared at him for a moment and winked.
"Hi"
~Wow she is really cute~
Stephen started to cry anime style and realized it
~Wait I'm an anime character now that mean I can do all sorts of stuff I couldn't do I'll have to remember that later~ Stephen listened to her talk ~AND I CAN UNDERSTAND JAPANESE!!!!!!!~
"And you know recently my breast have been getting bigger, but there nowhere near yours lets give em a squeeze"
That snapped Stephen back to reality as the blood rushed into his lower region fear struck in his eyes as Naru began to realize what it really was she was holding
~Oh crap I must be in the first episode! That means-~
Naru screamed dragging Stephen by his area as she screamed calling him pervert Stephen found himself saying exactly what Keitaro had said in this case just before he crashed into the rock.
"Ow"
~Wait if I don't stand up to apologize I won't get killed from the in between the chest thing maybe if I act like Keitaro without the clumsiness I can survive.~
"I'm sorry I didn't know this was the women's bath. . .I just came to see my grandma for a place to stay that's all."
Stephen gently began to walk away not facing Naru until she caught up to him and grabbed his shoulder causing him to slip and land exactly where he was trying to avoid no matter how nice it was he was still sent flying through a wall before he had a chance to defend himself.
~Ow how does Keitaro deal with this anyway speaking of which where is he?~
Stephen managed to avoid stealing Kitsune's underwear but she still managed to find a reason to chance him after talking to Naru.
~God what have I gotten my self into?~
Stephen did not forget his reflexes and immediately dodged Naru's flying kick as she came in contact with the tree knocking it in half.
Stephen found himself in a sort of crying state like Keitaro had been and started to run
"HOW THE HELL CAN SHE DO THAT!"
Going back through the entrance Stephen had completely forgotten about Su which led to him stepping on one of her tank's.
"Ah your big monster face the wrath of the Hinta Defense Squad!"
~oh crap~
Stephen had no time to react as the explosions sent him flying after a laughing Su.
Stephen didn't even bother getting up for he knew right there and then he was doomed.
So what u thing tell me please and I'll write more I just want one review if any.
Chapter One: To live in a nightmare
"Damn that had to hurt!"
Stephen watched the end of the Love Hina episode as Keitaro was sent flying through the air.
"Poor Keitaro always getting beat maybe if he wasn't so clumsy he could dodge some of the attacks I mean he is strong enough to survive em"
Shaking his head slightly Stephen turned off the DVD thinking to himself.
~But still I would kill for his life I'd say if he could just learn to be strong he would have a perfect life if I were him I'd do things differently~
Stephen looked a lot like Keitaro and Seta sort of a combination between the two. So what happened as Stephen fell asleep was only natural.
/Stephen felt a surge of energy flow through him as if the whole world couldn't stand up to him and was surrounded in a light blue light. As he flew through a tunnel of beautiful gold and blue light he noticed a red light pass him for a while he continued to go through on a complete high with the energy he received until finally he seemed to land in an ocean and all turned black/
~Wow what a great dream wait a minute why can't I breath!?!~
Stephen immediately woke up to find himself drenched he was wearing a towel and nothing else around his waist and it was kinda hard to see but not very as he rubbed his eyes his 20/20 vision was still in tact and he seemed to be aware of all his senses.
~Where am I?~
Stephen wondered in amazement as he stared at the area it was covered with water and rock and the area seemed to be consisting of what seemed like a hot spring over further inspection Stephen realized exactly where he was.
~No way there is no way that I'm here I can't be~
~I'm in hintasou!~
"Yes!"
Stephen was ecstatic by this as he started to swim around in the area felling the relaxing warmth of the hot springs.
~But wait how did this happen. . .aw who cares I'm really here~
Stephen finally calmed down to hear the door open he looked gently as his face turned to that of fear and excitement as Narusegawa walked gently down the steps into the hot spring
~My god it's really her she's...really hot!~
Stephen drooled slightly at the sight of Naru in nothing but a towel. She stared at him for a moment and winked.
"Hi"
~Wow she is really cute~
Stephen started to cry anime style and realized it
~Wait I'm an anime character now that mean I can do all sorts of stuff I couldn't do I'll have to remember that later~ Stephen listened to her talk ~AND I CAN UNDERSTAND JAPANESE!!!!!!!~
"And you know recently my breast have been getting bigger, but there nowhere near yours lets give em a squeeze"
That snapped Stephen back to reality as the blood rushed into his lower region fear struck in his eyes as Naru began to realize what it really was she was holding
~Oh crap I must be in the first episode! That means-~
Naru screamed dragging Stephen by his area as she screamed calling him pervert Stephen found himself saying exactly what Keitaro had said in this case just before he crashed into the rock.
"Ow"
~Wait if I don't stand up to apologize I won't get killed from the in between the chest thing maybe if I act like Keitaro without the clumsiness I can survive.~
"I'm sorry I didn't know this was the women's bath. . .I just came to see my grandma for a place to stay that's all."
Stephen gently began to walk away not facing Naru until she caught up to him and grabbed his shoulder causing him to slip and land exactly where he was trying to avoid no matter how nice it was he was still sent flying through a wall before he had a chance to defend himself.
~Ow how does Keitaro deal with this anyway speaking of which where is he?~
Stephen managed to avoid stealing Kitsune's underwear but she still managed to find a reason to chance him after talking to Naru.
~God what have I gotten my self into?~
Stephen did not forget his reflexes and immediately dodged Naru's flying kick as she came in contact with the tree knocking it in half.
Stephen found himself in a sort of crying state like Keitaro had been and started to run
"HOW THE HELL CAN SHE DO THAT!"
Going back through the entrance Stephen had completely forgotten about Su which led to him stepping on one of her tank's.
"Ah your big monster face the wrath of the Hinta Defense Squad!"
~oh crap~
Stephen had no time to react as the explosions sent him flying after a laughing Su.
Stephen didn't even bother getting up for he knew right there and then he was doomed.
So what u thing tell me please and I'll write more I just want one review if any.