This is my very first story so please tell me what you think. It takes please it the future and alot of things happen. PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!! and I don't own the TMNT but I've been writing to Santa since New Year LOL.
"Person talking" 'person thinking'
It started out as a normal day in 2105 for the turtles.
"Ha ha you should have seen the look on your face." moked a red clad ninja turtle known as Raphael or Raph.
"That wasn't funny Raph". Said an orange clad ninja turtle known as Michelangelo or Mikey.
The turtles were in a battle simulator and Mikey just got his shell kicked.
"You know it was you got tossed in the mud by elves!"
"Knock it off you two." Said a blue clad turtle, known as Leonardo or Leo.
"Hey come on you guys, I'm hungry let's go get a hot dog or something." Said a purple clad turtle known as Donatello or Donny.
They all nodded and left to eat.
"Hey Cody you what to join us?" asked Donny.
Cody was a boy who had red hair and had aqua eyes. He wore a dark blue looking coat, black pants, and black shoes.
"No thanks guys I'm working on something, you guys just go ahead without me."
"All right see you later!" Donny said as he ran to catch up with his brothers.
"He coming?" asked Leo.
"No, he said to go on without him."
"Okay let's go."
"I call shot gun!" said Mikey.
"No way Mikey." Raph said as the two raced off to the hover shell.
'Those two will never stop.' Leo thought to himself with a smile.
~~~~~~~~~~At the hot dog place~~~~~~~~~
The guys were eating or wolfing down hotdogs when they heard a crash and people screaming.
"What the shell was that?" Raph asked.
"I don't know but let's go find out." Leo said.
"But the hot dogs." Mikey wined.
"Forget the hotdogs Mikey let's go!" Leo ordered
When they went to the scene they saw Triple threat destroying everything. What shocked them was his appearance. Besides him having three heads and being really big, he was glowing green and three times bigger than his usual size.
Triple threat was destroying everything in sight.
"Donny, what the shell is wrong with him?"Leo asked.
"I don't know it looks like a mutation."
"Come on lets bash some skulls!" Raph said.
"Alright!" Mikey yelled.
"Wait I don't think we should fight just yet, just look at him!" Donny said pointing to the big threat
"There's no time to lose, Don get Cody we need back up."
Leo said as he attacked. When his foot made contact with his head it was like hitting a cement wall. Don, Mikey, and Raph attacked as well but with no luck.
"How do you beat something that's as hard as steel?" Raph questioned.
"I don't know, but we have to keep him busy until the police come." Leo said.
They all attacked again but were all knocked down with a simple swing if his arm.
Don was on the ground when Triple threat walked up to him and lifted his foot so he could crush him.
"Say good-bye to your friend turtles!"
"NOOOOOOO!!!" Leo yelled.
Then out of nowhere Raph jumped in and pushed Don out of the way; then Triple threat's giant foot came down.
Triple threat stared at them with an evil grin on his face, but then he somehow was push by some unknown force. The turtles then attacked again with all their might, then Cody came along in his battle suit.
"Need help?!"
"Cody let us handle this, get Raph and see if he's okay!"Leo ordered.
"Okay!"
Cody went to get Raph but all he found was his mask. Then they all heard police sirens.
"Let's get out of here!" Leo said.
Cody went to join the guys as they fled.
"Where's Raph?" Mikey asked Cody
Cody just showed him the masked as they fled.
~~~~~~~~~~Back at Cody's place~~~~~~~~~~
The guys all walked into the living room all looking down at the ground, a sad look on all their faces. A grey rat in a kimono known as Master Splinter saw his sons and Cody came in but when he saw their sad faces and that Raphael was not with them he became worried.
"My sons what is the matter, and where is Raphael?"
As he said that Mikey fell to his knees, hand over his face. Don kneeled down to comfort him then Leo said
"Master Splinter….we were fighting….and then Don was about to be crushed….but Raph-"
"He saved my life." Don said.
Cody walked up to Master Splinter and handed him Raphael's red mask, with tears in his eyes.
"This cannot be….THIS CANNOT BE HAPPENING!!!" Master Splinter yelled, he felt like had been hit in the heart with a bullet.
The turtles and Cody all looked at Splinter who had tears rolling down his furry face.
"How did this happen…and where is Raphael?"
He said holding Raph's mask close.
Don, being the only one to really be able to talk spoke up.
"We were……..."
As Donny explained what happened Raphael regained consciousness.
~~~~~~~~~Somewhere else~~~~~~~~~~
'Where am I?' Raph thought to himself
Raphael looked around and saw he was in a bed. He was in a small room that didn't have a lot of light and had plenty of medical supplies in it. He looked at himself and saw that his right leg was in a cast, as well as left arm, and his chest and head were bandaged up.
"I see you're finally awake." Said a female voice.
Raph looked at the corner where the female voice came from.
"Who are you?"
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