this is my first fan fic so i hope all u readers enjoy chapter 1 i want some feed back plz

Pinkie looked up from her bed to the window. It was a beautiful day. Well, at least for her. Then,she saw shadow, a hedgehog with black fur with red stripes. He came with the others. except, he was different. He didn't like to smile, didn't like to have fun and didn't like anything in general. Pinkie pie was fascinated by shadow, and wanted to make him smile. Plus pinkie was attracted to him for some reason. She blushed slightly and went down to the bakery. "Pinkie, can you pass out these cupcakes for every pony?" said . "OK." said pinkie pie with her big smile. Outside, Shadow saw pinkie coming out. "Oh no." he groaned. Shadow ran and hid behind the crowd. Unlucky, pinkie got to him. "Here you go shadow!" she said. "Thanks." shadow grumbled. pinkie giggled and trotted off.

shadow went to his favorite place; the everfree forest. "hey zecora." he said. "hello my friend." said zecora. shadow felt most comfortable around her. she was only one of shadows friends in ponyville. "i don't get pinkie pie." shadow said. "well, that's who pinkie is. you cant change her." she said. "i know." shadow said. "i gotta go." "OK" said zecora.

Pinkie pie sighed. how is shadow gonna smile? then pinkie had an idea. "Shadow can i show you something?" she asked him. "fine." shadow said. shadow fallowed pinkie to her room. they went through a secret door to a small room. shadow saw a picture of her and some grey ponies. " this is my family." pinkie said. shadows eyes widened. "most ponies know that." she said. "But they don't know this." she ponied to a picture with an adoption center and her mom carrying her out. shadow gasped. "im not the only one like you u know." shadow was speechless. "I" he said. "i know. its hard." pinkie took his hand by her hoof. shadow and pinkie blushed. "good to know" shadow said and gave the first smile in ponyville. "i knew you whould smile." pinkie said. "can... we be... friends?" shadow said. pinkie pie almost fainted! "yes!"pinkie hugged shadow. shadow blushed deeper and they both came out. and shadow went home.

to be continued...