Okay! My first post breaths quickly This poem was actually written a year ago when I thought Elricest was...interesting. Now I'm...obessed, damn it! LOL! Anyway this poem was inspired by one of the ending songs of the anime (I'm not sure which one. It's the one where Ed and Al are standing in a snowstorm outside some building.) Anyway, these are Ed's throughts, in my opinion, oh what he's thinking. Okay, now I'm blabbing! Enjoy!
Snowflakes
It's cold here.
My breath puffs white, visibleā¦and warm
against the winter air.
I fell you eyes watching, but I don't turn around.
I hold up my prosthetic hand.
It feels nothing, and the snow clumps upon it like snow upon the ground.
Void of human warmth.
Void of life.
I notice the contrast between real and manufactured hands.
The snow falls around us still.
Do you notice the cold?
Can't you feel?
Then I realize my selfish sorrows.
Cringing in guilt I turn to face you
,the hallow armor.
My little brother.
The snow falls upon your metal body ,but it doesn't melt.
Did I mention I'm not an English major? LOL! I know I'm not perfect with grammer and spelling. Please comment!
-BlackbirdSage
