The Return of Echo

( I do not own star wars or any of its characters)

my first time writing a fan fiction so please only constructive criticism please. The next chapter will be about what I would like to think happens to Echo after he gets blown up

Chapter 1

*During the battle of the citadel*

POV- Echo

" We have to get out of here! We're pinned down! " I yell to Rex and Fives. I fire back towards the droids as blaster bolts fly over our heads.

I see a shuttle on the landing pad and see a commando droid getting on a turret. I make a quick decision and roll to the side and pick up a plasma shield, firing through it " Cover me! " I start running towards the shuttle

" Echo what are you doing?! " Fives yells into the comlink. I continue to run firing when I realize my mistake to late as I head up the ramp of the shuttle and the turret fires into the shuttle.

A massive explosion lifts me off my feet, my helmet buffering the sound of the explosion to protect my hearing. I feel the full impact of it as hot shrapnel penetrates my armor and into my body. I hit the ground hard and feel my helmet fly away. My vision is dark and all sound is fading.

"Echo!" is the last thing I hear before the I black out and the darkness washes over me