This is my first story guys so I'd like constructive criticism.
?-POV
I bolted awake after hearing the lumbering yell of the huge beast that's been chasing after me for the past week. you may be wondering who I am well my name is Drake,Drake Knight and I found out a week ago that I am a demigod who my father is i don't know he supposedly died in a car accident when I was young.
Back to the problem at hand i woke my friend hunter who was a satyr, basically he had the upper body of a man and the hindquarters of a goat. After i woke Hunter I pulled out my weapon that my mother gave me before I was told to run to a place in Long Island called Camp Half-Blood, my weapon was a scythe that appeared to be made of some kind of iron and the staff was six feet in length, and the blade was four feet. I told Hunter to run while i held off the beast which was twelve feet tall with one large eye in the middle of his forehead.
I blocked a swing from the monsters club and cut his thigh, while he was down I ran. Hunter said we were almost to the camps told me to get past a pine tree on the top of the hill we were on and I was almost there when i tripped and my scythe flew out of my hands but I knew somehow it would return as a ring on my finger.
The monster was about to smash me when suddenly a guy that seemed to be 18 jumped in front of me and stabbed the beast in the chest with a bronze sword and pulled it out to which the monster dissolved into gold dust. the boy turned around and helped me to my feet and said "I'm Percy Jackson, son of Poseidon god of the sea."
What do you guys think good, bad, suggestions for the story let me know in reviews and a shout out to my friend Dexter for beta reading and helping co-write.
