This is my second story and it didn't start off about Maximum Ride. It was for a homework in year 5 and I had to write an opening for a story about anything you want and this is sort of what I got. It's a bit different, the charecters names have changed and the descriptuon of Max has aswell. Also, in this story, Ella's older than Max and Ari's normal and still alive. Max's parents are, of course, Dr.M and Jeb. I don't know what colour hair Ella has so if you know, can you tell me. I don't really want to search the whole Maximum Ride series just to find out what colour hair she has. Hope you enjoy reading this. (Also not very long. Soz!)Monday Corridor Time: before school starts
The Corridors are alive with people rushing this way and that trying to get to homeroom before the late bell rang. My name is Maximum Ride. (I know. And odd name, right. Most people call me Max though.) I'm an average sized girl who is overly sarcastic. Although I may be a sarci, all of the guys love me. With my slightly waved blond hair (no, I'm not a bimbo) with a pink streak, beautifully styled. Well not styled exactly, I just let it grow. And chocolate coloured eyes, its no wonder they all love me. But the guy I like, I want, already has a girlfriend!
His name is Nick. He has shaggy black hair that covers his eyes and beautiful deep brown eyes that look black at times. You could easily get lost looking into those eyes. They're hypnotising. Nobody knows much about him. (Not even his girlfriend I might add!) Only that he is HOT! And from what I've heard, he's an amazing singer, he plays the guitar, the piano and the drums, he can swim and basketball player. How dreamy is that?! But his girlfriend, well, its clear that he doesn't like girls who try to impress him!
Her name is Ella Martinez. And she is the complete opposite to me. She is in no way sarcastic! She is always saying exactly how she feels, even if it hurts the people around her. She's also really girly whereas I'm more into sports and stuff like that. (I have a hobby that I can't tell you yet. Maybe that's why he likes her? Because she's REALLY girly!) Anyway, she has short, straight deep brown hair and eyes the colour of grass. There is one similarity though. We share a certain amount of D.N.A!!!
Oh! How I wish I could be her for just one day. To hang out with Nick for a day. And besides, she doesn't deserve a guy like him. She doesn't even like boys like that. At least, she didn't use to. And he's popular and she's sooo not! (She's like the geekest girl in school.)
Uh Oh! Gotta go. Late bell just rang and I don't want to get detention on the first day of the new school year!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW! It would make me SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Happy and I like being happy.
I have edited this! I didn't realize that I had kept the same description that I had used for the original. This is how I imagened Max. I forget to change it. Sorry!
