A LONG TIME AGO IN A GALAXY FAR AWAY........
STAR WARS EPISODE 6: DARTH MAUL'S REVENGE!!
It is a very bad time for the INTERGALACTIC SENATE. It is ten years since the REBELS blew up the DEATH STAR and killed DARTH VADER and the EVIL EMPEROR. But a new threat is arising. The EVIL EMPIRE has a mysterious new leader and is making more battle droids to overthrow the senate.....
It was a bright and sunny day on the planet of Corusent. Beneath all the flying cars was the Rebel Palace. Next to the Palace was a small store with a sign that read SKYWALKER'S JEDI CANDY STORE. The front door opened and out came the owner, Luke Skywalker, and he closed the door again and breathed an exhausted sigh. It had been a busy day. Ever since the Evil Empire had been overthrown he hadn't seen much action, so he decided to go into business for himself and open a candy store. It sold everything from Light Saber Lollipops to Padawan Popcorn. Every kid on Corusent wanted to try them, and also meet the hero who had killed the evil Darth Vader. Luke's work assistant rolled next to him. "Oh, hello R2D2" said Luke. "Biddle-di-beep" said R2D2. "What?" said Luke. "Brip-bloop-Bip' said R2D2. "The President wants to see me?" said Luke. "Beep" said R2D2. And Luke ran off to meet President Palpatine.
After the Evil Emperor was killed and the Rebels restored power, they decided to appoint Palpatine, former leader of the old republic, as the new President. Leia Skywalker, who used to lead the Rebels, had settled down with her husband Han Solo. They even had a son, Qui-Gon, named after Ben Kenobi's master, and legendary hero of the Clone Wars. The two year old had started to show force powers, and Luke one day hoped to train him. Luke entered Palpatine's office.Hello Luke" said Palpatine. "You wanted to see me, your majesty?" said Luke. "Our intelligence agency says that there is a spy in the Senate. I want you to find him" said Palpatine. "Don't worry your majesty, you can count on me!" said Luke, and walked off.
When Luke had left the building, he heard a voice behind him. "Beware the Dark Side, Luke." He turned around and saw the ghost of Ben Kenobi. He was joined by the ghosts of Yoda, Anikin and Jar Jar Binks. "An old foe is going to return" said Ben Kenobi. "What? Who?" said Luke. "Tell, we cannot. Moves in mysterious ways, the future does" said Yoda. Suddenly C3PO came around the corner and the ghosts all disappeared as quickly as they had appeared. "Master Luke! Master Luke! Leia's in trouble!" said C3PO. "Oh no!" said Luke, and ran off to Leia's house to help her without even asking what sort of trouble she was in.
Princess Leia was glad she had retired. She could spend more time with her son Qui-Gon, and besides, now she was able to watch more of her favourite hologram TV show, Intergalactic Cooking With Zurga The Hutt, when suddenly there was a loud noise and the window had shattered. Up flew a black figure with a nightmarish face, hovering with a jetpack. He was holding a type of light saber that Leia had never seen before. It had two blades on each side. "Years ago, your father killed me" said the stranger. "But my new master has given me new life." "Who is your master?" asked Leia, terrified. Darth Maul grinned evilly. "There is no time for that. Now I must kill you." He raised his light saber, about to strike. But suddenly, Luke and R2D2 burst through the back door. "Don't move!!" said Luke with his light saber raised. Darth Maul lowed his own light saber, and stepped away from Leia. Suddenly, he started charging towards Luke. Before he could strike, R2D2 opened up his secret hidden missile compartment and fired a missile. It hit Darth Maul and sent him flying out the window. On the way out he hit his jet pack on the top of the window, and it fell off his back, and once more, he fell to his death.
After Luke, Leia and R2D2 had recovered from the shock, Han burst through the door carrying his son. "Leia! Thank goodness you're safe! We were at the zoo when we were attacked by Boba Fett!" said Han. "But... Boba Fett's dead!" said Luke. "We were attacked too" said Luke. "I don't know who he was, but he looked strangely familiar... I'll inform the President!"
Luke logged on to Leia's hologram computer and connected to the GalacticWeb. He began to type a G-Mail message to Palpatine, when a new message popped up.
You may have won this round, but it isn't over yet. I will kill you all!!!!!1
-Darth Sidious
"That's impossible!" said Leia. "Darth Sidious died before we were even born!" "It must be a hoax" said Luke. "You can't come back from the dead." "Beep-0Nerf-FDdfiopDSKP" said R2D2. "R2D2's right" said Luke. "I have a feeling that this is only just the beginning." "Oh dear!" said C3PO "When this is over, we could all do with a long vacation on Alderaan..." said Han.
TO BE CONTINUED......
Well that's my first Star Wars fanFiction story. I haven't seen all the movies yet but I thought I did really well!! Please tell me what you think and if I should continue the story.
STAR WARS EPISODE 6: DARTH MAUL'S REVENGE!!
It is a very bad time for the INTERGALACTIC SENATE. It is ten years since the REBELS blew up the DEATH STAR and killed DARTH VADER and the EVIL EMPEROR. But a new threat is arising. The EVIL EMPIRE has a mysterious new leader and is making more battle droids to overthrow the senate.....
It was a bright and sunny day on the planet of Corusent. Beneath all the flying cars was the Rebel Palace. Next to the Palace was a small store with a sign that read SKYWALKER'S JEDI CANDY STORE. The front door opened and out came the owner, Luke Skywalker, and he closed the door again and breathed an exhausted sigh. It had been a busy day. Ever since the Evil Empire had been overthrown he hadn't seen much action, so he decided to go into business for himself and open a candy store. It sold everything from Light Saber Lollipops to Padawan Popcorn. Every kid on Corusent wanted to try them, and also meet the hero who had killed the evil Darth Vader. Luke's work assistant rolled next to him. "Oh, hello R2D2" said Luke. "Biddle-di-beep" said R2D2. "What?" said Luke. "Brip-bloop-Bip' said R2D2. "The President wants to see me?" said Luke. "Beep" said R2D2. And Luke ran off to meet President Palpatine.
After the Evil Emperor was killed and the Rebels restored power, they decided to appoint Palpatine, former leader of the old republic, as the new President. Leia Skywalker, who used to lead the Rebels, had settled down with her husband Han Solo. They even had a son, Qui-Gon, named after Ben Kenobi's master, and legendary hero of the Clone Wars. The two year old had started to show force powers, and Luke one day hoped to train him. Luke entered Palpatine's office.Hello Luke" said Palpatine. "You wanted to see me, your majesty?" said Luke. "Our intelligence agency says that there is a spy in the Senate. I want you to find him" said Palpatine. "Don't worry your majesty, you can count on me!" said Luke, and walked off.
When Luke had left the building, he heard a voice behind him. "Beware the Dark Side, Luke." He turned around and saw the ghost of Ben Kenobi. He was joined by the ghosts of Yoda, Anikin and Jar Jar Binks. "An old foe is going to return" said Ben Kenobi. "What? Who?" said Luke. "Tell, we cannot. Moves in mysterious ways, the future does" said Yoda. Suddenly C3PO came around the corner and the ghosts all disappeared as quickly as they had appeared. "Master Luke! Master Luke! Leia's in trouble!" said C3PO. "Oh no!" said Luke, and ran off to Leia's house to help her without even asking what sort of trouble she was in.
Princess Leia was glad she had retired. She could spend more time with her son Qui-Gon, and besides, now she was able to watch more of her favourite hologram TV show, Intergalactic Cooking With Zurga The Hutt, when suddenly there was a loud noise and the window had shattered. Up flew a black figure with a nightmarish face, hovering with a jetpack. He was holding a type of light saber that Leia had never seen before. It had two blades on each side. "Years ago, your father killed me" said the stranger. "But my new master has given me new life." "Who is your master?" asked Leia, terrified. Darth Maul grinned evilly. "There is no time for that. Now I must kill you." He raised his light saber, about to strike. But suddenly, Luke and R2D2 burst through the back door. "Don't move!!" said Luke with his light saber raised. Darth Maul lowed his own light saber, and stepped away from Leia. Suddenly, he started charging towards Luke. Before he could strike, R2D2 opened up his secret hidden missile compartment and fired a missile. It hit Darth Maul and sent him flying out the window. On the way out he hit his jet pack on the top of the window, and it fell off his back, and once more, he fell to his death.
After Luke, Leia and R2D2 had recovered from the shock, Han burst through the door carrying his son. "Leia! Thank goodness you're safe! We were at the zoo when we were attacked by Boba Fett!" said Han. "But... Boba Fett's dead!" said Luke. "We were attacked too" said Luke. "I don't know who he was, but he looked strangely familiar... I'll inform the President!"
Luke logged on to Leia's hologram computer and connected to the GalacticWeb. He began to type a G-Mail message to Palpatine, when a new message popped up.
You may have won this round, but it isn't over yet. I will kill you all!!!!!1
-Darth Sidious
"That's impossible!" said Leia. "Darth Sidious died before we were even born!" "It must be a hoax" said Luke. "You can't come back from the dead." "Beep-0Nerf-FDdfiopDSKP" said R2D2. "R2D2's right" said Luke. "I have a feeling that this is only just the beginning." "Oh dear!" said C3PO "When this is over, we could all do with a long vacation on Alderaan..." said Han.
TO BE CONTINUED......
Well that's my first Star Wars fanFiction story. I haven't seen all the movies yet but I thought I did really well!! Please tell me what you think and if I should continue the story.
