My first Fan Fic, I hope you like it! It's just the way I kinda want the story to go down, but I have about 12 more chapters I want to add. Reviews would be nice, I want to know how I did!
"Who's that up ahead?" Alek wonders. Short, blond hair, an inch or two taller than alek. Dylan!
"Dylan!" Alek yells down the corridor aboard the Leviathan.
Dylan swivels on his heel, so as to face the prince running towards him.
"Ah, Alek, just who I was looking for."
"And why is that, Dylan?"
"I…have something to tell you. A secret"
"Sure Dylan. After this, will there be any more secrets between us?"
"No, this is my last secret. But first you need to promise not to tell. Let's go to my middy cabin, I don't want anybody else hearing this."
"Okay Dylan, I promise you can trust me with your secret."
"Are you sure?"
"I'm sure, Dylan!"
"Then stop calling me Dylan!"
"Is that your secret? Okay then, I won't call you that…?
"Deryn. I'm Deryn Sharp."
"Deryn, so you have a proper Scottish name, as any Scotsman should."
"I'm no Scotsman though."
"How were you born and raised in Glasgow Scotland and not be a Scotsman?"
"Can you not put the pieces together, your Arch-Dukeness? I'm a Scotswoman. Deryn's a girl's name!"
"What? How could you…hide this from me?"
"Trust me it was hard! Barking spiders, do you know how many times I've wanted to tell you?" She says, on the brink of tears.
"But…you didn't, Deryn!"
"But I wanted to, you don't know how much I like you!" Deryn exclaims, the tears rolling down her face.
"Apparently, not enough to tell me."
"It was so hard not to tell you before!"
"So you trust the count more than me?"
"No! The count guessed, said my fencing said it. Clever boots, sneaky beak count!"
"If you wanted to be a boy, use boy posture! How can you be such a Dommkopf, Deryn?"
"I'm the Dommkopf? You're the one who couldn't piece together that I'm a girl!"
"Excuse me for not accusing my best friend of being the opposite gender!"
"Alek, I know you're mad, but can we still be…friends?"
"Why should I be? While I thought you were being a traitor against the Leviathan for me, you were really being a treacherous frend."
"Alek…I'm…sorry." Deryn manages between sobs
"BYE, Deryn."
"Alek…don't go…please!" She says while the sobs continue
Alek storms out of the midshipman's cabin, headed back to the engine pods.
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