Hey guys! I am BACK! Alrighty, so, this is Incomplete REDONE! The original was too jumbled up and crazy and I didn't like it AT ALL.

So... Here is the new story! YAY!

I have changed a LOT of things, so it may be a little weird.

Disclaimer (for the whole story, by the way): I DO NOT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE!

And also: the whole story will either be Bethany's, Max's, or Third point of view. But most of it will be Beth's.

ENJOY!


My breath puffed out in misty clouds in the cold night air. Twigs snapped and leaves crunched under my bare feet as I ran. Tangled blonde hair whipped out behind me, the rough tree branches reaching out and snagging their spindly claws in it. The raggedy white gown I was wearing billowed out behind me. My head was pounding. I could hardly hear myself think over the loud howls of the Executioners. I gulped. They were closer.

I quickly peeked behind me. The large, shadowy outlines of their wolfish features were barely visible to me. But they slowly got clearer and clearer. Huge guns were either resting on their shoulders or pointed directly at me. I bit my lip and quickly dodged a tree.

I had lived in the Lab for all of my life. Well, most of my life. When I was about two, me and my twin brother were sold to the Lab. Yep, that's right. Sold. By our own mother. Anyways, she had been planning it since we were in the womb.

My brother, Fang, and I were five when he was taken from me by the Executioners. No matter how much we kicked, punched, and bit, they were just too strong for us. They took him in another room, with some other mutants. I was left alone, to suffer by myself.

A few years later, there was a major breakout. One of the Whitecoats, Jeb Batchelder, had helped this girl named Maximum Ride and her 'flock' escape from the Lab. He took them to a safe house, took care of them, gave them love. And just guess who was with this so-called flock?

Yes, that is right, ladies and gentlemen. My brother.

Yeah, sure, I'm really happy that he escaped safely. But... Why not take me? Why did I deserve to be left there at the Lab, where they ran awful tests on me day and night? What did I do wrong?

Nothing, of course. I guess he just forgot about his twin sister.

But that sadness didn't stop me from trying to escape. I'm not gonna go into detail, but let's just say that a lot of blood was shed. I can be a fierce fighter, you know. Even is I am a girl.

And that left me here, running for my life.

Finally, I came to a stand-still at the edge of a cliff. Pebbles and rocks leaped off the edge as I skidded to a stop. I looked down and gulped. It looked like a never-ending, dark abyss. I couldn't see anything. Guns clicked and Executioners howled behind me.

My olive-colored feet balanced on the edge.

I took a deep, deep breath.

I looked over my shoulder again.

They were so close I could smell their rotten breath.

Looking across the long distance to the other side, not even daring to look down again, I spread out my black and white speckled wings.

Yes, wings.

Thinking of rising high above the earth, away from the Executioners and the Lab, feeling the wind rushing through my hair, caressing my face, lifting me higher and higher until I was only a speck in the sky.

And then, I jumped. I didn't really know what to do, considering I hadn't done this before, so I flapped furiously up and down with my huge wings. The air seemed to push me upwards as I beat down. My tan legs dangled uselessly beneath me. My arms pulled on my hair as it whipped around my face, momentarily blinding me.

The Executioners roared in rage as I wobbily flapped away. Bullets zipped through the air. One went right through the skirt of my gown. I scowled down at them, turning in the air, and flipped up my middle finger. Some laughed at me. Some shot more bullets. Either way, I was zipping away from them as fast as I could.

I was going to find my brother.

Even if it killed me.


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