Ok. This next story follows the basic idea of 'Mako Mermaids' the one with the mermen. However, the plot changes a bit. Ok, a lot. All OCs belong to me.


Our stories begins underwater, near an island off the coast of a small town. We see the coral reef, full of brightly colored fish. But there's one fish that's different. We see a head pop out from behind the coral. Her long blond hair is fanning our around her head.

This girl swims out and we see she has a tail! A mermaid tail, to be more precise. She swims into a small underwater cave. She comes up in a pool that looks like it's inside a volcano. There are two other mermaids there. One has long blond hair, like the first.

The other one has brown hair. "All clear," Said the first mermaid, "No land people in sight." The first mermaid sat beside her friends. "Good. The ceremony's about to start," the brown haired mermaid informed them. "I know that, Reef," The first mermaid said.

"I can't wait to get my moon ring," said the second blond mermaid. "Me either, Emily," said the first mermaid, "Then we can finally be with the pod during the full moon." The three girls chatted for a minute before they stopped. "Bella! It's time to start! Shh!" Reef told the first mermaid.

Meanwhile, on the island, three boys were hiking in the woods. One had a yellow shirt, blue pants, and three pieces of hair that stuck strait up. He was the shortest. Another had short orange-red hair, a green jacket over a red-and-white striped shirt, and blue pants. The last one had a black cap, a red shirt, and black pants.

"We shouldn't be doing this so late, Eddy," The boy with a cap said the the short boy. "Ah, quit worrying, Double D," The boy called Eddy said. (The boy's real name was Edd) "Yeah, Double D! We can see cool stuff at night!" The boy with the green jacket said.

"Exactly, Ed," Eddy said. The three boys walked for a while before they came across a cave. By now, the full moon was high in the sky. They entered they cave, and saw a shape carved on the wall. It was a trident, but it was glowing. "Cool!" Ed said, reaching out to touch it.

As soon as his finger reached the shape, the floor disappeared, and the three boys fell into the pool where the mermaids were. Lucky, the boys fell unconscious, so they didn't see the girls were mermaids. However, the splash surprised the mermaids, and they gaped at the boys.

The water was bubbling, and it started to glow. As soon as the moon left the hole at the top, the water became still.


We then see the three boys on the beach. It is now day time, and when they woke up, they were very confused. "What happened last night?" Eddy asked. "The last thing remember is entering that cave," Edd answered.


Back with the mermaids, they were talking nervously. "How did they even get in here?" Emily asked. "I don't know. They just fell," Reef said. "How?" Bella asked, looking up, "It's solid rock up there." Reef and Emily shrugged. "I don't know," Reef said, "But we have to tell the pod."

"Why?" Emily asked. "Emily. Three land people fell into the moon pool on a full moon," Bella explained, "Who knows what'll happen?" The three mermaids swam outside to tell the pod.

"Let me get this strait," said a mermaid with blond hair done up in shells, "You let not one, not two, but three lands boys into the moon pool?!" Bella put a hand on her shoulder. "Calm down, Aqua," she said. "We have to tell the mermaid council," Aqua said.

Aqua swam off, and Bella, Emily, and Reef returned to the moon pool. When Aqua appeared an hour later, she looked sad. "Well? What are we gonna do?" Reef asked. "The pod's leaving Mako," Aqua said. "But where we go?" Bella asked. "You don't get it," Aqua said, tears in her eyes, "You've all been cast out. None of you may follow."

They all looked devastated, but none more than Bella. "But...Aqua, you're my sister!" She said, "You can't leave me!" Aqua put a hand on her sister's shoulder. "Here. Take this to remember me by," Aqua said. She took a ring off her finger and gave it to Bella. "Your moon ring?" Bella asked.

"Yes. Take it," Aqua said. "But...it'll take you forever to earn another one!" Bella pointed out. "Goodbye, Bella," Aqua said. And with that, she swam off. "Aqua! Wait!" Bella cried, following her. But it was too late. The pod had already left. Bella came back in with tears in her eyes.

"It's ok, Bella," Emily said, hugging her.


Sorry for the short first chapter. The next one will be longer. I promise.