Don't die-the remake
I do not own Ben 10
The original story of don't die has basically always and still is my most successful story. So I decided to make a remake for it. I hope you like it…=)
Ben and Gwen were walking in the vine filled room looking for Azmuth, when all of a sudden…
"Wild vines!" yelled Ben as the vines came to life and attacked them. Ben began to shoot the vines with his laser gun. One of them came close to him and was about to eat him.
"Ben, look out!" cried his cousin Gwen, pushing him out of the way and making the vine take her instead. She knew she doomed. But she knew it was worth it if it would save Ben and the universe…
When Ben got up and saw his cousin was in trouble he cried out:
"Gwen! Goin' hero!" he said as he span the dial of the omintrix as Myax said:
"Ben no! The self destruct will accelerate!"
"I-DON'T-CARE!!" yelled Ben as he slammed down the dial of the omnitrix, desparate to save his cousin from death. He ran towards the escaping vines…
"Ben!..." cried out Gwen in distress.
"Hang on! I'm comin'!" the vines have just gone into the hatch in the ground with Gwen inside…
"NO!" yelled Ben as four arms as the vines released him and he ran towards the hatch trying to break it open… after a few seconds of struggling, four arms managed to creek open the hatch. He flung it open and seemed to be stuck that way. He got into the small underground room and saw something that would scare him for the rest of his life:
The dammed vine was 'chewing' over Gwen's body…
"Why you little… SON OF A BITCH!..." yelled for arms as he grabbed the vine, and rubbed the red spike sticking out of his elbow and scarped it against the vine, trying to tear it off. After about a minute of struggling, Ben managed to cut it off and he grabbed it as the vine fell off its own neck. Ben grabbed the jaw and opened it. inside he saw Gwen badly injured… she was full of blood, scratches, bruises, wounds and one arm was broken…
"oh Gwen…" sighed Ben as he took her body out of the vine's jaw and dropped it on the floor. Next her climbed out through the hole of where the hatch was and once outside, he gently laid her on the ground as the watch finaly timed out…
Ben looked at his dying cousin with pain, sorrow, loss and fear in his eyes… he was afraid that his cousin was dying… and it made him feel terrible… but why did it make feel so bad? He and Gwen hated each other… then again they had their good times though… like when she taught him how to dance a mere week earlier… oh that was so fun… he said it was gross to him… it wasn't; he lying. Lying to avoid telling her the truth. The truth about how he felt about her… he didn't only like her or love her as a friend or cousin… no… he had a much stronger feeling within him. Greater than any other he ever felt… he always asked himself what it was… but now that Gwen was dying or maybe even already dead, he now knew what that feeling was… it was a feeling of love… not just cousin love… it was romance love… he now also realized that he had this feeling within him for a very long time. As far as he can remember actually… but now it was too late to confess… because she's gone forever… he decided to do one more thing with her: he decided to kiss her… so he leant closer and closer towards her lips and laid a soft passionate kiss on them and once done Ben whispered into her ears;
"I love you Gwen… I always did and I always will… I will never forget you and I will always treasure and cherish our relationship and happy memories… I'm just sorry I didn't get a chance to tell you this sooner… I love you Gwen…" said Ben as he laid one more kiss on Gwen's lips and then detached his lips from hers and straightened out and sat there looking at her… he felt the tears beginning to rise to his eyes and they suddenly burst out without any control whatsoever…
"Gwen… ohoohhh Gwen… why did you leave me?... I love you too much… what did I do to deserve this?... whhahhahht…" sobbed Ben into his palms as he continued to cry… little did he know that one of his tears dripped onto Gwen's shirt and landed right where the center of her heart was… once it got soaked into her shirt and skin, a miracle happened… Gwen was waking up! She sat up and looked at her crying cousin… she felt happy and sad at the same time… she felt happy because she was now alive again and that Ben was actually crying because of her demise and that he actually cared for her. Another thing that made her happy, was that he actually loved her… she too had loved him but did not have the guts to tell him. But now he did and she had to do the same… she embraced him in a warm and loving and thankful hug and kissed him on the cheek and whispered with great emotion of happiness, love and relief:
"thank you Ben… sigh… thank you so much… for what you did… I love you too Ben… I love you with all my heart and I will never stop loving you no matter what… you are the love of my life Ben…" she finished and kissed him on the cheek again, while all of this caught Ben off guard.
"Gwen! You're alive!... what happened?'
"I heard your little speech and it really touched me… and when your tear drop dropped right into my heart and was what was needed to bring my soul back into my body… you saved my life Ben…" said Gwen and sighed happily as Ben sighed as well…
"I'm glad to hear that Gwen… and I'm so glad to hear you love me back…" said Ben happily.
"You're very welcome Ben. You're very welcome…"
To be continued…
Well there you have it a remake to don't die. Did you like it did you did like? Did you like it even more?
Please tell me what you think on your reviews on your way out…
Thank you…
