Chapter 1: Grey Brothers vs. Steele Sisters
Loosely based on the 1999 movie "10 things I hate about you". I highly recommend you to watch it if you haven't. This is a fan fiction that is centred on the teenage lives of Anastasia Steele and Christian Grey alongside their friends and family. This is my first fan fiction that I am determined to finish and I would very much like you to enjoy this journey with me. Enjoy and don't forget to follow, favourite and review (FFR) :)
This chapter will be in 3rd person, but the rest will be in 1st person. But if you prefer 3rd POV then let me know.
Seattle High buzzed with the excitement of the beginning of the academic New Year. A prestigious school in Bellevue, Seattle High was the school for the future rich and famous. The old and new flooded the hallways, but it was the two new additions that had caused quite a stir.
Christian and Elliott Grey.
Two fine specimens of men, both Grey brothers were chiselled to perfection. Strong jaw lines, pouty lips, straight noses and bodies carved from stone; these men were the definitions of perfection.
The older of the two, Christian Grey was by far the most intriguing. His soft copper brown curls sat messily his head, yet effortlessly. His piercing grey eyes with tinges of green mesmerised the hungry girls of Seattle High. Head to toe he reeked dominance from the way he carried himself, to how he leaned against his locker, Christian Grey was the ultimate bad boy persona.
Elliott Grey was different. There was a sure difference between both brothers, Elliott being a blonde with short wavy hair and blue eyes. His boyish grin and kind eyes painted him as the all-round American boy that any girl would be lucky to introduce as their boyfriend. Elliott had this charm and aura around him, which captivated any female.
The Grey Brothers had just started at Seattle High, Christian being a senior at 17, while Elliott a junior at 16, both could easily pass as at least 20, which was a bonus for their wild parties they held all summer consisting of alcohol and endless supplies of pussy. Yet at the moment, neither Christian nor Elliott were interested in anyone. None of these prissy girls flaunting their breast and knee-high socks were catching the attention of the brothers. They had soon realised that the year was going to be a drab, and that they would have to make do with their right hand.
But then the air changed.
As if he had been electrocuted, Christian's skin buzzed alive and like a lion, he was hyper aware of his surroundings. He turned to the entrance of the school to see two goddesses walk down the hall. Elliott had also become aware of the shift in mood. He saw how people starred at these two women. Girls with jealousy and boys with need, these sirens could lure an unfortunate being and rip them to sheds. The Grey brothers were intrigued and followed the unknown vixens moves like wolves stalking their prey.
But these women were anything but prey.
The women stopped opposite to the Grey brothers, chatting away in their own world, oblivious to the attention they had gained. That was when the brothers could properly see these beauties. Much like Christian and Elliot, these two women were opposites. While one was dressed in ripped jeans and canvas shoes, the other was cladded in a burgundy dress and heels. One was dressed casually in a black bomber jacket and a white v neck top displaying her toned stomach while the other was dressed elegantly in accessories that sparkled in the morning light. Their figures were indescribable. The casual girl had an hourglass figure with breast that rivalled Kim Kardashian and her ass wasn't far off too. In contrast the other girl was much more slim, with a boyish cut and curves in the right places. Both girls were stunning, but the thing most intriguing about them both were their faces. Their big pouty red lips and button noses were a clear indication that they were somewhat related, while their eyes told a different story. The girl in the dress had vivid green eyes that shined with adoration and kindness. She had caught the attention of the younger Grey. But it was the clear ocean blue eyes of the other girl that mesmerized Christian. Her eyes told a story and sucked him in. He wanted her, to get to know her and he would do anything to make the goddess his.
Christian and Elliot had attended their respected lessons with the two unknown women on their minds. It was now lunch, and their new friends they had acquired over summer vacation surrounded them.
Jason, Ethan, Ryan and Luke were the boys that had made the Grey brothers cry with laughter. They happen to also be the group of boys that made the ladies panties wet with want and need. Let just say these men alongside the Grey Brothers were going to break hearts.
Popping a grape in his mouth with grace, Christian bit the bullet and asked "What's the deal with those two girls?" nodding towards the goddesses sitting on the other side of the cafeteria.
Luke Sawyer answered as he followed Christian's gaze, "They're Steele Sisters. The one who in ripped jeans and jacket is Anastasia the older one of the two and the preppy princess is Liza. Either way both are hot as fuck"
Jason Taylor grunted in agreement, "Too bad about what their dad's stupid rule" he mused as he swallowed his BLT
The Grey brothers were intrigued by this piece of information. Elliott spoke up for the two of them.
"What do you mean? What's did their dad say?"
Ethan sighed, "Liza isn't allowed to date if Ana doesn't have a boyfriend. Something about him worried about Liza getting pregnant. Anyhow that won't happen any time because Ana is shrewd and a bitch"
Bitch? Christian thought. She didn't look like one; in fact she looked more like a fallen angel waiting for the right person. Christian was even more intrigued and would do anything to gain the attention of this vixen.
Meanwhile Elliott was crestfallen. If anything his friends were saying was consolation, then he didn't stand a chance.
Ryan added his two cents into the discussion about the Steele Sisters, "Shame for Jax, he'd do anything to get into Liza's panties."
Elliott fumed with rage, "Jax? Who the fuck is that?"
"The rich kid of the school, he thinks he's some god and shit. Jackass. Anyway he's been trying to date Liza, with little success, she isn't putting out because Anastasia hasn't got a boyfriend." Jason stated.
Good! Elliott thought. No one was going to go after his girl. But he needed to deal with the one thing that was preventing him from courting Liza; Anastasia Steele. He knew just what to do. With a slide glance at his older brother, he knew Christian was smitten with the other Steele Sister and after all his brother owed him for taking the blame for one of Christian's drunken mishap of shattering a $150,000 vase of their mother's. With a new found of urgency, Elliott whipped out his phone to text his brother.
*Christiannnnnnn*
*What? *
*Remember when I saved you from getting your ass whooped by mom*
*How could I forget? My asshole is still intact thank you very much. What do you want? *
*Well I was thinking, maybe you could, y'know, district this Anastasia chick while I woo her hot sister*
*Woo? Dickhead you mean you want to fuck her?*
*Nah bro, she's different. I want to do the whole love shit. Wine and dine, meet the folks. I want that with her*
*PUSSY WHIPPED! LMFAO*
*Shut the fuck up. Don't act like you haven't been making those nauseating eyes at Anastasia. Will you do this for me? Pleassssseeee*
*I wasn't making any type of eyes. Fine. You're lucky she's hot*
*Thanks bro*
*Shut up*
Elliott grinned with triumph. He was one step closer to getting the girl of his dream, while hopping the alluring Anastasia Steele would tie down his brother too.
Christian tried to not show it, but he was jumping for joy at this new mission. He would die trying to get Anastasia Steele's attention.
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