Ummmm I really have been in a bored slump and decided to re-wright this because i found it boring and the chapters too short... I mean after all I don't read fanfics unless it's a minimum of around 2000 per chapter and i don't want to be a hypocrite!

Ummm also I don't really get disclaimers because after all don't we have to agree to not make money off it and what ever? but anyway I own nothing and if I did I must be a genius because I'm only just 15... and i'm not Chinese!

Oooh and I'm keeping up all the former chapters untill ive gotten up to 10,000 words or some thing.


He rushed down the stairs earlier than usual wondering why Ezart was so crazy about being early or even on time today, after all this was Ezart and he was always called a 'delinquent' by the teachers not that he knew what that meant but he assumed it was insulting, though he did think it was strange that when he told Ezart he didn't seem to mind at all.

He quickly swallowed the toast and went round the corner hoping that Ezart hadn't already left him "Ezart! Ezart!" he shouted hoping to stop him as he walked away before running to catch up with him and in a very Daren like way failing to notice how embarrassed he looked from Daren shouting to him, Ezart unconsciously wondered whether he would ever be able to get a girl friend with the little hyper moyashi* following him around and lowering his coolness, though not knowing that it was that thought that often plagued Avery's mind.

"Daren why where you so late?" Ezart questioned angrily after Daren had caught up and was half walk-skipping besides him much to his annoyance"I told you to be early" oh yes Daren remembered Ezart had told him to be early but why? "Sorry Ezart I forgot" he murmured only to be ignored and for Ezart to walk even faster making Daren wonder exactly what was going on to excite Ezart this much... It was obviously to do with fighting because it was Ezart but what?

Finally with the school gates coming into view Ezart strolled in with Daren hopping and jumping around him and getting to their classroom. The hallways and rooms were littered in posters which confused Daren though, showing strange beasts in a wild land battling off giant wolf people and humans with strangely pointed ears "Eeeezart" he called making Ezart jump "What's this?"just as Ezart was taking a breath to answer the teacher walked in and shouted "QUIETEN DOWN AND GET TO YOUR DESKS YOU NOISY LOT!" causing Ezart to scowl angrily at him and make him to stop fearfully "Well class today all the work we are doing is practicals, all the people with avatars in the fighting program will be entered in a competition!" this announcement brought varied emotions across the class, some of which cheered at the chance to win the competition while on the other hand many cursed as they had yet to set up an avatar and thought it would have been smarter to get one when they were better at fighting.

"Hey, hey Ezart!" Daren moaned whilst pouting "Ezart Is this why i had to be early?"

"Of course Moyoshi* when have I ever rushed for school" It's a big deal then, well if Ezart is happy about it so should I Daren thought maybe there will be some betterfighters today. As Ezart stalked off Daren ran off to the bathroom to change into his 'Dark sun' outfit before rushing to the battle simulator, annoying many people by jumping on their heads and knocking them over because he couldn't find a path to walk down, and anyway if he had walked there he would have been crushed by fans and people trying to find out who was underneath the visor. He then jumped into the large doors and into the hall greeting the wizened old man and asking him for his usual weapons a simple old fashioned pair of hand guns and instead of the usual throwing knives decided to ask for some kunai, after all it was some sort of special competition right?

He saw the new field for battle and was startled. why was it a forest and at that the strangest forest he'd ever seen or heard off, which was lodes considering the fact that he had wikipedia for a brain, It was sparkling new and fresh unlike anything around now-a-days maybe even natural looking-an impossibility as humans had no true and free wild places like this anymore- what exactly made this battle so special?

He stepped in-between the lush forests trees reveling in the atmosphere gave off before noticing why wasn't anyone here, shouldn't everyone be wanting to win the seeminglyawesome prize that will apparently be given? He then thought back to the crowd in front of the doors of the battle simulator, wasn't it too big for a competition? shouldn't they all be entering for the chance to win? "Hmm, what where they put off by... there wasn't a limit." Oh well if they weren't going to go to him he was going to have to come to them!

After deciding to go in a straight line and hope he'd see someone he hopped into one of the giant trees and began to hop between trees before falling out off a tree at he booming "HELLO PLAYER!" wringing out across his mind "Whaa?" he murmured using his awesome ninja like cyborg powers to flip and land on his feet creating a small dent in the ground because of his weight* "WELCOME TO SL'S BATTLE SCHOOLS COMPETITION" ahhh I've finally got it's name! and the voice said schools so that means more opponents! "YOU HAVE BEEN PLACED IN WORLD 7/10 THE STAR CITY FOREST MODE!" suddenly fanfair sounded out "AND ONCE YOU HAVE CHOSEN YOUR RACE YOU CAN GO,GO,GO!" race what's that?

"Mr voice"Daren uttered much like Dark sun and calmly questioned"How do I-"

"YOU SHOUT RACE!"

Ok then I have to shout race then "Race" he said and in front of him appeared in stead of the forest he had grown accustomed to, was a large seemingly unending white tiled room. He walked up to the car sized floating strangely shaped orb intrigued about what it was and walked around it only to see a that it was in fact a large cushioned chair with a sleeping figure inside it. He took the time to inspect the figure she-for it was a she- was wearing a short skirt and figure fitting low neck top along with a helmet with two large wires coming out of it covering her hair. He walked up to the figure and said "Hello" deciding she had been sleeping long enough befor uttering louder "Hello" and she was startled awake.

"Oh yes the competition, Hi I'll just get the options out" She muttered absentmindedly, And before Daren appeared strange people a wolfman, angel, elf and tree? "Yup just decide which one you like the look of"she appeared to still be drowsy.

"Will it affect how i'll fight?"

"Wha? no, nope"

"Ok i'll see my self as a human." and a mirror image of himself popped up, he nodded it was all he needed and anyway the wolf was to big, the angel and the elf too slight and the tree too... tree. "How do I leave?" he asked the girl who still had not brought her head up to see him and right beside him a large gate appeared, he thanked the girl and walked out as he was when he came in only with some sort of medieval leather clothing and cloak instead of his usual outfit.


*hehe couldn't help the man reference and i'm reading some man fanfics at the moment but anyway moyoshi means beansprout.

*wow simulations are accurate to real life in the future!

Wow this chapter was surprisingly hard to write and spell check mainly because i cant spell competition and it's said sooo many times this is how i spell it -compotition!