Hola! I know a lot of people have already done Fours POV for Divergent, but i wanted to to my own rendition of it, so TA-DA! ;) I'm going to need Names that sound Dauntless if that makes sense for the second chapter, so if you could either send me a PM or review that'd be great! please review and tell me what you think. This is my first Divergent fanfic so I hope It's not disappointing! ;) enjoy! XD
~Slightly Afraid
I wish you knew...
I stood at the bottom of the net looking up at the bright sky and its blazing sun with Lauren at my side.
"Who d'you think the first jumper will be Four?" She asks excitedly.
"Probably some smart ass Ertrude. Maybe a Candor. Has been for the last 4 years anyway." I reply smirking. Lauren smiles and looks up to the top of the net. "Guess we're gonna find out." I follow her gaze and see a small figure standing by the mouth of the hole. They undo the jacket the wear, (but I can't see the colour because of the sun) and toss it to the ground. The slight what I presumed to be female looks back once more and jumps forward. I watch her as she falls and am completely taken aback when I see that she wears Gray. Abnegation.
She crawls over to where I stand but when she tries to climb down the steps she almost falls so I offer her my hand. She reminds me a lot of myself on my first day of initiation. Frightened maybe, but fascinated. She smiles and takes my hand in her tiny, but powerful grip. "Thanks." She replies politely.
"Can't believe it!" Says Lauren from behind me slapping my shoulder "A Stiff, first to jump? Unheard of!" I smiled. "That's the reason why she left them Lauren," I turn to the girl. "What's your name?" She chews her lip "Umm..." She stops herself, obviously not liking the name she currently holds. "Think about it. You don't get to pick again." I smile reassuringly at her. She returns the smile and my heart flutters at the simple gesture. "Tris." She says happily. It suits her. "Tris," says Lauren echoing her. "Make the announcement Four." I turn to face the near invisible members of Dauntless. "First jumper, Tris." They cheer and pound their fists into the air and suddenly morph into the light, but even their deafening applause can't cover up the unmistakable sound of a falling, screaming female initiate. The crowd suddenly start laughing but they soon return to their raucous cheering. I extend a hand out to Tris and she slips her hand into mine shaking it- the Dauntless greeting. I smile at her, my eyes shining as I take in her figure. "Welcome to Dauntless."
