Surely i shouldn't have to dimine your intelligence by saying i don't own doctor who, if i did don't you think this would be an episode or audio series, and not on Fanfiction? see get it FANfiction, clues in the title people! Anyway here is a quick summary, better than the first one because i'm not limitied with the number of words i can use.

Summary

The doctor and Amy arrive on the Planet of Calay, where strange things are happening. When Amy gets kiddnapped the doctor must save her from the jaws of the Whispers of the night,

but can he save himself from the dangers that have engulfed the once beautiful planet?

Prologue

Maria crept behind a high brick wall, a gun held in her hands. Her breathing was shallow as she moved, she couldn't she what was behind the wall, but she could guess. She was alone, her friends and family had already been captured, or killed. To be honest she wished they had been killed, to spare them the pain that would come with being captured. She examined her watch, that had a radar on it and detected movements. Their were at least six of them coming this way.

She reloaded her gun, preparing for the fight that would come. She would go out fighting. Her brown hair hung in knots over her shoulder, it was a time of war, not of looking good. Her green gaze was fixed in front of her, she was primed and in peak physical condition. She heard a series of howls and barking. She shot as several dog like creatures surrounded her, she could hear their growls in her head. Her shots seemed useless, she shook in terror as they jumped at her, their jaws gripped her. She felt the poison of their bite seeping into her body. She fell unconscious.


The Tardis shock as it crashed onto a planet of some sorts, causing the doctor and Amy to be thrown backwards. The doctor wasn't as cheery as he usual was, he felt hollow inside after what happened to Rory, and what would happen if what he found in the crack came to tell the future. Of course he didn't show this to Amy she wouldn't know why. She had forgotten about Rory, and that had caused the Doctor more pain. He couldn't shake the thought that it was his fault that Rory died. After all if he had just gone in the tardis and not explored the crack then Rory would have survived. Time can be rewritten.

He looked towards the door as Amy strode out, he glanced at the ground.

"So where are we?" Amy's voice rung in his head bringing him back to the present. He played about with some random controls, before replying.

"The planet Calay, the year 40, 0000, the start of Kee's rain. Very peaceful and wonderful last time I checked." He answered grinning at Amy.

"Cool, so you coming then?" She asked an once of concern in her voice.

"Yeah, just got to deal with some stuff here, only take a sec, I'll catch you up" He said ignoring her concern. He turned back towards the control panel hearing Amy leave the Tardis. He grabbed her engagement ring the Rory had left in the tardis, and squeezed it into his impossible big pocket. Sighing, he decided to follow Amy, ignoring the pain within.

He felt strange as he stepped down from the door of the Tardis, the ground seemed to shake slightly, the air was cool and crisp. It felt like he had just swam underwater and resurfaced but his senses had been left in the water. Something was wrong here, maybe not wrong but defiantly not right. His body itched with curiosity wanting to explore the unusual world where he had landed. He observed the rocky hills, where tall buildings were peppered around the place. A lake ran down from the hills, it shone in the intense white light that engulfed the planet. It looked as if it was made out of crystals. He could see the splash as what looked like fish jumped out of the water. It was beautiful, but one thing was missing. He looked around, no sign of Amy.

He spun around, was she playing a trick on him? Now he thought about, Amy wasn't the only thing here that was missing. This was a widely populated planet, so where was everyone? The whole area was seemingly deserted, that leaves another question. If there was no one here what could have taken Amy? He broke into a sudden unexplained spring in the direction of the nearest building. He jumped over many obstacles, a couple of fences, some abandoned equipment. It seemed like many people had been here, but had quickly left without care for their possessions. Something bad happened here.

He approached the building slowing down into a jog until he reached the door. He was panting now, as he attempted to budge the metallic door. It was like something from a film, a metal building with spaceship like doors. It wouldn't move. He reached into his inside pocket and pulled out his sonic screwdriver. He glanced around before scanning the door, the blue light beeped on and off the buzzing spread throughout the area. He smiled as the door slid opened, he quickly slipped in before it closed again.

It was dark and it took a while for his eyes to adjust. He could make out an outline of a desk, with a large supercomputer piled with post stick notes. He raised an eyebrow interested. He approached unafraid of what else could be waited in the shadows. He bathed it in the blue light from the sonic, and jumped back as it suddenly came on with a loud chime. He grinned. He tapped on the keyboard, countless numbers of windows came up, the doctor read all of them in a matter of minutes. He grin turned into a frown as he realised what they meant.

He rushed out of the building calling Amy's name as if she would suddenly appear from behind a bush and laugh and tell him he was so gullible for believing her little joke. If only. He raced towards the Tardis still calling her name. He raised his sonic screwdriver in the air looking for a trace of where she had disappeared to. He was unaware of the danger that he was in. There was a loud bang as a shot was fired, narrowly missing the doctor. He turned, two amber eyes were watching him from the shadows. They were fixed on him, a gun held expertly in the persons hand.

Another shot came from behind, it scraped across his leg. He fell backwards and inspected the wound, it wasn't a bullet that had been shot at him. That was good, at least they weren't trying to kill him, yet. He got back up and held his hands up.

"I don't want to hurt you! Let me find my friend and I'll go!" He exclaimed staring the person in the eye. They didn't even hesitate but shoot again, this time hitting him in the arm. He yowled in pain, pulling out a pointed dart like thing. His vision blurred as he tried to remain standing, normally he could stay fine with a tranquiliser dart, but this was more powerful. It was like poison pulsing through him, burning him from the outside numbing his muscles. He felt like the world was spinning as he clung to the Tardis trying to stay upright. He felt like he did when he had the trouble with the dream lord. He couldn't fight it anymore, but he had too. He searched his pocket for the Tardis key, gripping it he pulled it out in one quick motion and into the locked door. He quickly opened it, and got in. Another wave of shoots came, another one hitting him. He quickly closed the door, and fell. He let sleep overtake him, unable to move his body.


Amy struggled in an attempt to free herself from her captives. She couldn't see their face, they wore masks over their face. She would bet that they wouldn't be humans though, their strength was far past that of any see had seen on earth. Still she struggled furiously, maybe they would slip up. However it would be useless, she could see that they were loaded with many weapons that would stop her before she got anywhere. They had jumped on her, and covered her mouth so she couldn't alert the doctor to what was happening. She was currently being dragged down a corridor witch had little light. She could see many doors with little windows, she has accidentally looked into one and seen a prison cell. It had held at least ten people, all asleep. Alive, but dormant as if they were in a coma.

She had heard what sounded like gun shots and was worried about the doctor as well as her self. She knew that he would have noticed her disappearance, he was properly looking for her. She was terrified if she was honest, but she wouldn't show it. They had stopped and one of them was pushing the buttons on a cell door, she knew that it meant she was going in there, whether she liked it or not. As the door slide open, she was thrown in. She turned to see one of them standing over her with what looked like a gun, she shut her eyes. Pain shot through her as a dart entered the skin of her leg. She had barely pulled it out before she fell unconscious.

Okay, like the chapter? I'll upload once i get three reviews. Anyway, do you think the chapters should be shorter or longer or just like they are now? Also did i get the charecters okay? Yeah i know, everyone falls asleep! AHHH!