This the rewrite I promised my nonexistent audience.

"I knew this wasn't going to end well," Yellow said to Blue. The girls were fleeing through the Viridian forest in the darkness of night. Suddenly Yellow's foot caught a tree root and she fell. Spraining her heel. "Ahhh!" she screamed.

Blue spun around and hurried to help her but, was instantly hit by a strange blast of energy turning her to stone.

Yellow stared as her pursuers caught up to her. One of them was a tall man and the other was a average redhead.

"Well, well what have we here?" The man said to Yellow.

She sat there and glared at him.

"Did you really think you could stop us?" He sneered. "You two are pathetic, you couldn't even escape." he mocked.

Suddenly something smacked the man in the face, and he recoiled in pain. The woman looks at the object, realizing it's a grenade she shouts in alarm. Then suddenly the grenade explodes with blinding flash and loud bang.

The man and woman were stumbling around disoriented, suddenly a spear attached to a rope smashes into the stunned man.

"Gah! What the fuck!" he curses out loud.

Then the rope is yanked and simultaneously a male voice shouts "GET THE FUCK OVER HERE!" Then the man disappears into the darkness.

Yellow and the red head freeze as they hear the man is screaming in terror. Then they here low thud and the man stops screaming.

Suddenly the unconscious bulk of the man flies through the air knocking the redhead to the ground.

Then out of the surrounding brush a man steps out wearing a pair of black combat boots and black pants as well as a dark black chest piece with crisscrossing pouches and an ammo belt, and a dark brown duster. On his head sat could only be described as steel helmet with a gas mask that had glowing red eye holes. Holstered on his right thigh was a large black revolver.

"Are you Amarillo de Verde" the man asks the stunned girl. "Y-yes" she stutters unnerved and confused by this odd man.

He turns his head to the red head who had pushed her still unconscious companion off of herself but, still sat on the ground too terrified to move. Suddenly the man draws his gun and approaches the terrified red head.

"Who are you and why were you chasing her?" He barks to the woman while pointing the barrel of the gun in her face. The woman just stares mouth agape too terrified to answer. The man pulls the hammer back on his gun with his thumb and adds "Do not make me repeat myself."