EDIT (2013):
I know, you can all kill me. I rose from the dead and don't mind being killed again because of the guilt. I'm very sorry that I left this story alone for years... YEARS... (sobs) So much happened in my life that I didn't have time. But now I do have some, and hopefully I can finally finish this! I hope that the readers in the past who were faithful followers of this story would continue to read this. I need to give you all presents if you are still hooked into reading this (sobs again). Like me, maybe rereading it from the beginning might help in catching up to the newer chapters.
So, I made some adjustments and small changes with the story. It's not much, but the revisions of each chapter was to fix the holes of some of the meanings and background behind the story. Also wanted to look back on all the mistakes I could spot through all the chapters and correct them. All the Dolls have already been revealed, except for one.
I found that all the chapters for the rest of the story already have outlines for the plot, and are ready to be written out as a full chapters. I calculated the story would only last for about 25 chapters, 26 if your include the prologue. So practically the story is done and planned out thoroughly. But I warn you that they will be unexpected surprises, unless you can read my mind in how it works. Go a head and keep guessing the Host and Doll Pair of the First Child, and also the Black Sage. There are many guess I believe you would make, and they may or may not be correct... (maniacal laugh).
Since I'm a little behind on the Naruto series, there won't be any new indications to recent events, or no new characters to appear that you may recognize. I only read the mangas up to the events when Nagato dies... (cough spoiler for those who are also behind the times like me cough)... yeah behind with the times...
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Summery: Nothing will ever be the same, once he signed his name on a contract when he was bored. Who would have thought that Uchiha Sasuke would be thrown into a whole new world that he has never known before? Plus, he has been forced to be a servant to a doll?
AN: This idea came to me while I was reading the manga, Rozen Maiden. My best friend introduced it to me. Seeing how the doll (to me) almost resembled Naruto in looks, I drew him as a doll! Then the idea came to my head! Oh, don't worry, the storyline won't be the same as the manga/anime, but the concept will almost resemble it. Please give it a try!
Pairings: SasuNaru (Other pairings are only hints and will not be very focused on unlike SasuNaru)
Warnings: Shounen-ai, AU, OOC-ness, maybe hints of shoujo-ai, and all the usual warnings I have with my other fics. I'm guessing you got a hint of where this fic will lead to… sigh…
Disclaimers: Don't own Naruto. It's as simple as that.
ANYWAYS On with the Story!
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The original creator of the Dolls of Eden was a great and powerful Sage of 'Light' who controlled all elements. The dolls were for his sick wife, who was once known throughout the lands, that lost a child from her previous marriage. The first doll was the "replacement" of her dead child, but was taken away by someone who was once close to the Sage, a Sage of 'Darkness' that discovered the powers within the doll. The wife was devastated, after losing another child. Then the Sage made three more dolls to keep his sick wife company, acting like the woman's children. She was content, but inwardly mourned for the lost of her first two children.
Then devastating wars came, and the Sage built two more dolls, to protect his wife, and the village. The dolls then fell. One was taken away, two stopped moving, and another got lost and never was found. There was only one doll left standing, and devastation built up in his wife for loosing more of her children.
A miracle happened years later, and the wife gave birth to a beautiful son. The Sage created a doll for his son to play and grow up with, along with the only remaining doll. As their son grew, the boy had an interest in creating dolls like his father, and made one with help from the Sage. When their son began to make his first doll on his own, the parents lost their son in another war, leaving an unfinished doll behind. The Sage finished it for him, creating it to look like his dead son. But the doll was never able to open its eyes to see the sun, as it was stolen, and hidden away. It never got to know its creators nor its brothers and sisters.
After the Sage's wife died, he left a task to the dolls, before he followed his wife. All the dolls were to search and gather together, to destroy the first doll, so that evil will not abuse the power it had, and find the last doll sleeping away, hidden from everyone. When all nine dolls are gathered, they would be able to return Home to their Father, Mother and Brother. After every two decades, the dolls were revived to search for their brothers and sisters, just to be able to finally return Home. But every two decades, each doll was not able to do as their Father wished, for the first doll was still chained to evil, and the last doll was left in an eternal slumber. No one could find the last doll, nor free the first one.
As years passed, these searches became a competition, and then dolls started to battle one another. These fights between the dolls became known as the Blossom Wars. It became a game to see who was the strongest and who could make it back Home first to Father, and Mother. Only eight dolls would be active, as the last one hid away, lost forever. Only a few people, with special characteristics have known of the on going War between the mythical Sage's creations. And these people were the ones who were able to play host and acquire the powers of the dolls, to aid it on its life long mission: to reach Home and come out on top. After time, these chosen people started to believe that if the doll they host was able to return home, they may be able to be granted anything from its creator.
So the battles were fought, the sole purpose for the dolls was slowly being lost to the greed of the Hosts. Soon other people who heard of the legends wanted one of these dolls, and fought the Hosts to acquire their powers. The Blossom Wars lead to the use of the dolls as tools for power, and the dolls soon forgot about going home. The Dolls started to believe that whoever wins the war will be able to become the one thing they now most desire: being human.
In present times, this entire story about the Dolls of Eden was like a myth. How can there be a powerful Sage like this man? There can't be an evil and revengeful Sage either. There was no such things as these 'living dolls' with powers. No one could possibly be that greedy to get non-existent power to destroy the world. It was probably a fantasy tale to entertain people on legends of the ordinary porcelain dolls.
But it really wasn't any fantasy tale, for the dolls will be resurrected again, as twenty years has passed from the last time they were revived. The War was continuing, and the Sage and his wife were still waiting for their children to come Home. They mourned for their lost children, who forgotten, and were still forgetting. The people's greed has blinded them, and they fought one another until a victor comes out on top. Time was running out for the dolls, as the spirit of the evil Sage will come and have his revenge on the world.
Saddened and angered that the dolls forgot their purpose in living, and fearing for the future of the world, the lost doll would at last be awakened to finally put an end to the Blossom War…
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Hana Taisen
Act Zero: The Game Begins
By: Datenshi no Uzumaki
Bloom now, beautiful Roses,
Father is calling.
Mother weeps for thee Roses,
Fear for their falling.
Find each other now Roses,
Father and Mother beckon you Home.
Come now together Roses,
One cannot go alone.
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He stared out the window, ignoring the lectures that the teacher was giving. He may not show it, but he was bored. Very bored. He's always been bored. It was the same everyday, for him. Wake up, go to school, come home, and do it all over again. Of course there were those usual other routines that came between, but it was always the same. He hated it. He hated how monotonous his life was. Sure he was respected in his school, looked up by many because of his looks, and his name, but he was sick of it all, and has grown tired of the dullness of his plain life.
He sighed, and glanced up at the clock. Great… another thirty minutes left before lunch. He shifted in his seat, and then looked up as he felt a slight gust of wind in front of him. He looked down to see a single piece of paper slide on his desk towards him. He frowned, already guessing it was a stupid letter from one of his stupid fangirls.
He blinked his eyes when he saw no hearts, or those curly and bubbly hand writings. It was clean, and typed almost formally. Raising a brow, he glanced around the room, to see that everyone was paying attention to their teacher (or snoozing to some cases), writing down the notes that were on the board. There was most likely going to be a quiz on the lecture that would be announced for tomorrow.
He picked up the paper, and read it.
On the other side is a different life that you would not expect. Dreams may come true. Change will occur. New memories shall be created. All will be revealed in the Blossom War.
Are you willing to play?
(please circle one answer)
Yes No
Please Sign Here
He raised a brow. 'Blossom War? What a stupid name, and it sounds girly…' He shrugged and picked up his pencil. 'Better than being bored…' Narrowing his eyes slightly, he circled his answer, and scribbled his name on the line.
Uchiha Sasuke
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This prologue is the background of the whole story, like a history of the ones called the Dolls of Eden. Who of the characters in Naruto are dolls? You'll just have to find out and see what is to come! I hope you will leave some positive and nice reviews/comments to motivate me in continuing this!
EDIT: Rewriting the whole thing. Reconstructing some of the story, but the plot is still the same. Tried hard to fix the spelling and grammar mistakes, but I really need a beta reader. Even after years, I'm still weak in writing properly =3=
