hi people, i just wanted to let you know i only own the story ideas and stuff, and the characters and stuff belong to Tom and whoever else! I love SoN and i wanted to share my opinion on parts of the story. You'll see alot of changes and WOW moments but i hope you enjoy!
Chapter 1:
Ashley's Pov:
"THEN JUST DECIDE" Her words where filled with anger and saddness. I remeber the look on her face, her eyes filled with tears that shed because of somthing stupid I had did. I remeber...screaming her name when they started shooting then Aiden grabed me and pulled me down to the ground. I kept thinking what was going to happen to her. When the shots stopped I got up to look for her but instead I realized Aiden was bleeding. I held him while putting pressure on his chest where the bleeding was, when Kyla came over.
"Ashley, OM MOY GOD ARE YOU OKAY?DO YOU NEED HELP?" Kyla asked frantically, before i even got to answer she was talking more. "WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN? HAVE YOU SEEN.."
I couldnt take her talking anymore, I was pissed, emotional, and trying to save a life and she just kept asking questions. "KYLA SHUT THE HELL UP AND JUST GET SOME DAMN HELP." She looked at me for a second but finally got up and called over a paramedic. One of them had the nerve to ask who I was to Aiden because I wanted to ride with them, but before I could think I said, "his girlfriend".
WHAT THE HELL WAS I THINKING? Oh yea I wan't, I was responding once agin with just my mouth. By the time we got to the hospitial his heart rate was 50/50.
I put my fingers through my hair in frustration and looked around the room. I saw chealsea, Clay, Sean, Boz, Madison, Kyla and Glen. But no Spencer. My heart started to worry, mii blood was boiling. But the world seemed to go into slow motion when the paramedics rushed in with a bloody unconius Spencer Carlin......
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