Just a short mini-chapter introducing my first story. Please review if you think it sounds half decent. And if you have ideas you can put that in your review. Once I have 5 reviews i will start on my next chapter.


A small child that appears to be around seven years old lay on her bed, talking to someone that doesn't really exist. An attractive young adult, around 16, sits at her mirror messing with hair that is already perfect. And a 14 year old girl cries in the bathroom, making excuses for someone that has never deserved them.

All of these girls, although sisters, believe they have nothing in common. One wants to grow up, one wants to turn back time, and one believes that age is an illusion. One knows she is beautiful, one believes she is ugly, and one couldn't care less. But they all have more in common than anyone could ever guess, even the gods themselves. For the gods can't read minds. They may be able to hear what goes on inside soundproof rooms, and peak into the lives of those that wish to stay hidden, but they cannot see what is most important; the thoughts of those who put up walls to keep them out.