Hey guys! This is my first fanfic, so review! I was inspired to do this by a bunch of the other stories I've read about Adventure Time, and by some of the friends I've made on this site, so before hand, I want to thank them!

I do not own Adventure Time, or any of its characters, themes, etc. Pendelton Ward does…. Fricking, lucky ass genius that he is… Without further adeux, I give you – Visitor


Visitor

The boat lurched as it slowed to a stop. My hand was cramped from holding onto the rudder so long. I tied my little boat to a strange, fun looking dock – Not only was it creaky, with rotten wood falling around everywhere, it had guillotines, rings of fire, large swinging logs, and much more. I wanted to run through the obstacle course, but I had business to attend to – exploring this strange continent. I'd never been here before, but apparently my king had. He had friends in the different kingdoms here. Hearing his tales, I thought it might be fun to see what all the fuss was about.

I jumped out of my little boat and onto the beach. I was going to walk over to a small, green hill in the distance, to see if I could find this "Candy Kingdom" I'd heard so much about, when I heard a loud scream. I dashed in the direction of the sound to see a giant attacking a little boy and his dog. I couldn't make them out very well, but the boy seemed to be of a different race than I. "Oh no! Don't worry, I'll save you, man!" I unsheathed my two daggers – Yin and Yang, one forged of Ivory with an onyx hilt, the other forged of iron with an Ivory hilt – and charged the demon.

But when I got there… The boy was standing on the giant, unsheathing a sword from its chest. I could see him clearly now. He was… I don't know, some species… I couldn't tell, I'd never seen anything like him. His skin was like that of a peach, his small yet muscular stature a bit alien to me. His head was topped with a white hat with… bear ears? Cool… But… did he really have ears there? Or were they fake?

He looked over at me, a suspicious gleam in his eye. "You!" he called, pointing his yellow/gold sword at me. "Who are you, weird fox-eared dude?" I reached up and fingered my blue fox ears with silver tips. This also made me conscious of my bushy, navy blue tail. It too resembled that of a fox, I suppose. It matched my ears in the sense that it too had silver tip. "I… My name is Roark." I said, "And I'm looking for the two people I've heard so much about – Finn the Adventurer and Princess Bonnibelle. Do you know where I can find these two?" The boy smiled. "Oh, well you've come to the right place, bud! This guy here? He's Finn the Adventurer, and I'm his older brother, Jake the Magic Dog.", said the golden retriever with bulbous black eyes.

At this, my face lit up. "You are the one who has slain the evil Lich? The one who constantly saves every person in the land? The person who is spoken about by the Legendary Billy?" I say, excitement working its way into my voice. I'd heard that Billy dude give DOZENS of stories, SPEECHES even, about how this guy inspired him, every time he comes to my country. "Oh my God! I have so many questions!" Finn blushed at being recognized. "Billy talks about me?" he asked. "Fo' sho', dude! He lumpin' loves you!" F. "Wow, I don't know what to say!" Jake just chuckled. "So Roark... Umm, what are you anyways? You're not a candy person, and I'm sure I woulda seen a radical adventuring dude like you before." "OH!" I gasped. "Sorry, I realize I'm only the second person of my kind to ever visit y'all. I'm a Neko - a race which is basically a descendant of those old humans mixed with some sort of mammal - usually a cat or fox. It's kind of cool, really, because I can see both of my ancestors roaming the land - or I used to, anyways. Now that the humans are all gone. If only we could have stopped that evil demon..." Finn looked like he had seen a ghost. "You alright, Finn?"

I think he was about to reply, but our conversation was interrupted by an evil cackle in the distance. A man in blue flew over a hill towards a mountain of ice. He seemed to be holding a woman… dressed in pink. "Oh man…" Finn looked about ready to cry, but his sadness switched to a hard expression in a heartbeat. "PB!" he screamed in a shrill voice. There was a deafening, low roar. I covered my ears. When I pulled them away and looked at them, they were stained with purple - my blood. The blue man was followed by... a blue dragon? It swooped down into a large opening in the mountain. "Princess..." Finn mumbled. He glanced at me. "I hope you can fight, Roark. We might need a little extra 'oomph' on this one." He jumped on the dog, and beckoned me to join him. Puzzled, I hopped on.

Jake the Dog grew to 30 times his size. I laughed with delight. "What time is it, Jake?" Finn yelled. "Adventure Time!" Jake bellowed.

Some 20 minutes later, we'd arrived in the Ice Kingdom. "AAAAHAHAHA!" I looked up. A small triangular window, which kind of gave the mountain a face. The Ice King looked down at us from the window. "Ice King! Give PB back!" yelled the boy, who had tugged on a pink sweater "You! Finn! Get out of here! I don't need you trying to Princess block me again!" he yelled. "Let the princess go or I'll come up and kick you're frosty ass!" Finn yelled. "Zap!" A blue lightning bolt shot at Finn. "NO!" I jumped in front of the bolt and slashed at it with Yin, with the Ivory blade. The bolt dissipated, but not without leaving a large chunk of ice on my weapon. "What? Who are you?" yelled the Ice King. "My name," I began, smashing the ice against a pointed rock, "you ugly piece of shit, is Prince Roark. I'm the adventurer entrusted with the country of York, off in the west."


Alright, so it was a little short I guess, but I'll update soon. So what'd you think? REVIEW PLEASE!