Divergent fanfiction (AN: no war)

Chapter 1

Mar's POV

Today's the day… choosing ceremony. I grab my boyfriend, Jake's hand as we settle down in the train waiting to get out. Jake was my best friend bout it escalated to much more. I love the way his blonde hair falls in his face or the way his eyes are a warm dark brown. I snuggle into his chest, he stiffens but quickly relaxes.

"What's wrong?" I ask him, he just shakes his head and looks away, I frown at him. I'm about to ask him something but it's time to go. I jump off the train not looking at Jake… My boyfriend for the past 7 months, my hope, my best friend, my… love. I shake it off and walk into the building ahead. When we get in there I see my mom and dad already in the crowd, I smile at them. Then go to my spot, the ceremony starts. They say the same thing every year. I zone out till I hear my name.

"Marina Eaton!" The announcer bellows. I walk down taking the knife in my hand I raise my hand the knife on my palm. I think hard… Erudite or Dauntless… not competition there. My hand goes over the dauntless bowl. I feel the blood trickle down my palm. I am officially dauntless.

I walk over to where all the new dauntless initiates are. Right now it's just me and an erudite transfer. I look up when they call Jake's name. Jake walks forward and hold the knife to his palm his hand goes over the dauntless bowl but he doesn't cut it. He hand then quickly goes over the erudite bowl his blood mixing with the rest.

He is no longer dauntless… my boyfriend transferred to erudite. He left me.

(AN: next chapters will be longer)