Hey guys, this is my first fanfiction and it would be really great if some people reviewed on it(I doubt some of you will) anyway this is sort of a oneshot, and I don't understand all these buttons it's like aggghhhhh! So sorry. I'm a pretty young fanfic writer, but I try! How you like it!
Ps: Elsa is an immortal just like Jack, and the reason is she tried to save her sister from the sword that Hans was about to hit her with. She thought the sword was meant for Anna, not her
Enjoy :3
Elsa's POV
I couldn't really understand why I was told to be here. I was invisible nobody could see me. I guess this is my punishment. I looked out of my window and saw the sun rise slowly, pictures of red and pink splotches came into view.
Another day of loneliness.
I put on a long blue gown, adorned with snowflake patterns. I created a little cloud in the palm of my hand and blew on it softly. I will go and see the children I thought, and that is just what I did.
I loved the children, they reminded me of my sister before I died and became spirit. I usually didn't come out of my castle on the winter seasons, I was afraid that I could hurt someone maybe KILL. I would blow a snowstorm and give a snow day every then and now, but that wouldn't be today.
I watched the children play in my snow. They really enjoyed playing in the winter very much. But then I heard screaming and shouting. I didn't know what for, but then I heard them say
" JACKS BACK, JACKS BACK!
All of a sudden a boy in a peacock blue hoodie holding a staff flew down. He could fly? He had a silver white hair and I noticed how he started to play with the children. I hid behind a nearby tree and watched the mysterious white headed boy made snowballs appear with his staff.
The kids and the mysterious boy started playing a very intense game of a snowball fight,when a snowball hit me square in the face where I was hiding. I fell back onto the snow, and I could no longer hear the kids laughing or shouting. It had gotten silent, too quick and too fast.
I sit up on the snow, only to see a pair of frost blue eyes look at me.
"Who are you?" The mysterious boy asked.
"E-Elsa. And may I ask who you are?" I squeaked.
"Jack, who are you talking to?" One of the boys couldn't see me.
"They can't see you?" Jack asked. I shook my head silently.
He looked at the kids and says "I'll be right back." But before he could turn his head back at me, I left.
I ran up the mountain and into my ice castle, where everything would be safe. I wouldn't hurt anyone, or talk to anyone. Everyone would be safe from me.
So, Whaddya think? Pwease review!
Pps: yeah bad grammar, woot woot.
