Ok! So this is my first story EVER. Please do not be harsh because I am just learning how to work this site . Anyway this is my version of 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader' It is centered around Lucy's and Caspian's feeling for each other. Please enjoy and comment. I do take constructive criticism.

Ages

Lucy:15

Caspian:20

Edmund:17

Eustace: 14

Peter:20

Susan:19

Lucy's POV:

As I storm into our current home, I immediately head into the kitchen. "Lucy, please don't be mad." Edmund said as he followed after me. I halt "How am I not suppose to be mad?" I exclaimed. "You were going to leave me." I could feel the tears coming to my eyes as I said this. We had went to the market to pick up something for me to cook tonight. I was picking up the chicken from the deli, turned around and Edmund was gone. After I checked out the groceries I went to find him and I did. He was registering for the war.

"I know" he signed "I'm sorry, I just couldn't stand the thought of coming to this awful place anymore."He said referring to our current place of residence. Edmund and I have moved into our aunt and uncles home until our family got situated. Mom and Dad took Peter and Susan to America to look for a home. I don't want to move to America but I know it would best. The American Government will pay for us to live there as a result of dad fighting in the war. Unfortunately Edmund and I have to stay here with uncle and aunt Alberta until they did find a place.

"I know Edmund, I understand" I said softly "Your not even 18 how was that going to work out?" I laughed. "Hey, it never hurts to try" He said with a big grin. "Well you can go upstairs, I'll just put the chicken in the oven and come find you after." I told him. Edmund and I haven't been spending a lot of time together. Between school, work, and dealing with our awful aunt, uncle, and cousin we barley see each other."OK, I'll see you upstairs." he said disappearing "Hhmm" I signed starting on the chicken.


"Do you think I look anything like Susan?" I asked Edmund as he lay on his bed. He signed and ignored me which I did not appreciate. I have gotten taller over the past the years. I got my curves and my breast has grown quite a lot. I was very flat chested last year, with the body of a teen boy. As this year started my curves and breast came in making me very happy. I still do not think I am pretty, not like Susan at least. All the men flaunt over her and completely ignore me.

"Lucy, why do you worry about those things. You look fine." I heard Edmund say to me but I wasn't completely tuned in. I was too busy staring and the painting on his bedroom wall. It looks so much like Narnia waters. "Doesn't this painting look very Narnia like?" I asked him. "Yes, that's what I always thought." "You two pansy's still going on with this fairy tale stuff" We both quickly turned our heads to the door where our cousin Eustace stand talking. "It's not fairy tales it is very true." Edmund replied back to Eustace. The two was arguing but I wasn't really paying attention. I was looking at the painting that seemed to be moving. "Edmund, the painting is moving." I said but he didn't hear me. He and Eustace were still arguing and fighting. "EDMUND, THE PAINTING IS MOVING." I shouted.

They both turned to the picture. Edmund was smiling while Eustace has a look of pure shock. The water started coming out, first a little drizzle than a water fountain. "YOU TWO STOP THIS OR I WILL TELL MOTHER!" Eustace shouted over the water. "I MEAN IT, STOP IT RIGHT NOW!" He continued on. "WELL I'LL JUST SMASH DARN THING." He took the picture off the wall while Edmund and I shouted at him. "NO!" "PUT IT DOWN!"

Taking it off the wall only made the water come out more. Soon the water is filled up to my waist. Everything around us starting floating and drifting higher to the ceiling. Soon we are swimming up to the top but I know the room isn't up at the surface anymore. I emerged and looked around frantically. I seen Edmund and Eustace emerge a few feet away from me. I looked up and seen a huge ship, and as soon as I seen the flag I knew where we were "EDMUND" I shouted out. "WERE IN NARNIA!"