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Goodbye, my Alice.

I thought as I scrunched myself up in the dirt. I remembered her soft face, the way her smile could light up a room. My Ally, my true love, my talented little pixie that no one understood... no one, but me. I had been sitting by her gave for what seemed like hours now. The funeral was this morning. I clung to the mud surrounding where they'd chose as her resting place. It was as close as I could be to her. We'd never spent a day apart till now. She was my best friend, as well as my girlfriend. "Dylan, sweetheart, are you coming?" My mother cooed, for what seemed like the tenth time. She meant well, but I'd never hated her so much in my life. No one had any right to talk to me now. Only Alice could break me from this trance like misery. I ran my fingers over her name, carved into the stone.

Mary Alice Brandon
1901-1916
Beloved daughter, and treasured friend.

She was more than that. More than a simple sentence, Ally was never simple. Even as a child. She has...had a gift. She thought it was a punishment for a past life, some cruel misdeed she couldn't recall. I knew the truth; it was because only she could show the world how it was meant to be. The torturous acts they would commit, the deeds that should never be done. Alice's visions weren't all bad, but most were. Some were preventable, some weren't, but all that she saw she was blamed for. A possessed child, a demon within. That's what they had called her. Alice could never be evil; she was too pure and kind for that.

Obviously my Mother had given in. The church courtyard was eerily quiet and terribly still. The wind in the trees the only movement to be seen. Yet I could still feel her presence, on this most terrible of days; I could still feel the warm glow of her optimistic attitude. Alice believed there was always a Brightside, where there's a will, threes a way. That's what she used to say. Oh Alice, what I wouldn't give to hold you in my arms just one last time; to tell you its all going to be ok. My strong willed little Ally. My world died the day you did. I refuse to live without you, there is no point. The future we planned will never happen now and I don't want any other. If we can't be together in life, I shall be with you in death. My dearest Alice, I'll be with you soon. I swear it.


Did I kill it then? :D