Hello Everyone my name is Zeon Chaotic and this is my first story to be made. I want to thank Storm-Saber for his help with editing my story. i hope you all enjoy the refixed story.
Mobius 18 years ago
Mobius was a peaceful place inhabited by anthropomorphic creatures known as Mobians, but are story begins out by Station Square park. Where we see a blue hedgehog wearing white gloves, and red sneakers with a white strap. Along with a pink hedgehog wearing a red dress, white gloves, and red boots. They are Sonic and Amy, but they are not alone they are with two hedgehogs a boy indigo wearing white gloves, and red sneakers his name is Swift and his sister Alexa. A sky blue hedgehog wearing a red shirt, blue shorts, white gloves, and white sneakers. Both Swift and Alexa were playing around.
"Come on Swift I'll race you to the playground and back." Alexa said.
Swift smiles and gets in his running stance. "You're on Alexa, prepare to lose." Swift said.
Alexa got in her running stance as well. They counted down to one, as soon as they hit one they took off faster than the speed of sound. Both of them were neck and neck. They dodge people and try not to bump into anyone as they touch the play structure they turn and ran back. As they ran back Swift notice something a green hedgehog with light blue streaks on his quills, wearing white gloves, below the gloves were silver rings on his wrist, and black boots with a red trim on the side. This hedgehog was lying by a tree by himself. Swift and Alexa made it back to their parents in a tie.
"Dang it! It's a tie again." Alexa said as she crossed her arms.
"Hey, Alexa do you know who that person is?" Swift asked as he points to the strange hedgehog.
"No sorry I haven't seen him before. Why don't you go talk to him?" Alexa said.
Swift nods and walks over the the hedgehog as he got close he taps the hedgehog's shoulder.
"Um excuse me. Hi I'm Swift the hedgehog, who might you be?" Swift asked.
The hedgehog looked at swift and smiled. "I'm Zeon the hedgehog, it's a pleasure to meet you Swift." Zeon said as he sat up.
"Likewise Zeon, so where are your parents?" Swift asked.
"Over there talking about missions like always." Zeon said as he points to a black hedgehog with red streaks in his quills wearing white gloves, below the gloves were gold rings on his wrist, and red and black rocket shoes. The creature beside the hedgehog was a white bat, wearing white gloves, a black jumpsuit with a pink heart in the middle, and white boots with a heart at the tip.
"Your father is Shadow the hedgehog and your mother is Rouge the bat?" Swift asked.
"Yep, my parents are agents of G.U.N and they train me to become strong." Zeon said.
"Wow so why you here by yourself?" Swift asked.
"Well I don't really have any friends and when I try everyone gets scared of me." Zeon replied.
Swift looked at Zeon and smiled. "Hey, I'll be your friend." Swift said.
"Really, you want to be my friend?" Zeon asked shocked.
"Yeah, it could be fun." Swift said.
Zeon smiles "okay we'll be friends and nothing can separate that from us." Zeon said.
And from that day forth Zeon and Swift became close friends. They would do everything together, play video games, race each other, and even protect kids from bullies. Everything was going well until one faithful day. A SuperNova hit Mobius causing destruction and devastation all the Mobians fled in terror. Knuckles the Echidna used the Chaos Emeralds and the Master Emerald to open a portal to different dimensions. Swift, Zeon and Alexa enter a different portal, this separates them from their parents, but before the portal closes Sonic and Shadow throws wrist communicators toward their children so they can stay in contact with them at all times.
"Swift! Alexa! Keep these with you! We'll contact you on the other side!" said Sonic.
"But dad!" Swift cried.
"Listen to your father kids! I know your father, when he makes a promise...he keeps it!" Amy then hugs her children and kisses them on their foreheads.
Zeon looks at his parents, his mother Rouge gives him a hug and kiss as well. He looks over to Shadow, his father looks back. Before jumping through the portal, he smiles at his son. Suddenly the world begins to shake as the nova's shockwave grows closer and closer to Mobius. Everyone enters the portals, but the shockwave hits the planet, those who don't reach the portals perish in the planet's destruction…
Equestria 7 years ago
Much time has passed since Mobius' destruction. When Zeon, Swift, and Alexa first arrived in the magical land, they felt like fish out of water. But the Equestrian Ponies soon accepted them. As they lived in Equestria and made new friends like a hyperactive pink Pony with pink puffy mane and tail named Pinkie Pie, as well as a orange cowgirl pony with yellow mane and tail wearing a cowgirl hat named Applejack, a white unicorn with purple mane and tail named Rarity, a yellow Pegasus with pink mane and tail named Fluttershy, a cyan Pegasus with rainbow mane and tail named Rainbow Dash, and finally a lavender alicorn with purple mane and tail named Twilight Sparkle. They all had so many adventures like fighting Discord, King Sombra, Queen Chrysalis, and Tirek. Yet after all those adventure Swift and Alexa don't miss home, but Zeon, he never felt like he belonged in Equestria, he felt that somewhere out there is a different world he can call home.
Equestria 20 years later
At the Tree of Harmony, Zeon stood there looking at the tree.
"Why do I have a feeling that something is going to happen and it involves the Elements of Harmony?" Zeon thought.
As he went through his mind Swift ran up to him and tackled Zeon.
"Got you Zeon." Swift said.
Zeon smirks and kicks Swift off him and pins him on his stomach. "I'm sorry who got who now?" Zeon said as he holds Swift's arm behind his back.
"Okay, okay you win. So what are you doing here Zeon?" Swift asked.
"I'm looking at the Elements of Harmony, trying to figure out my destiny." Zeon said.
(Beep! Beep!) Zeon's wrist communicator went off Zeon answer the call and a hologram of Shadow and Sonic appears.
"Hello Son, how's your training going?" Shadow asked.
"It's going good Dad. How's mom doing?" Zeon asked.
"She is doing fine missing you." Shadow replied.
"Hey Swift how's Alexa?" Sonic asked.
"She is good dad, how you and mom doing?" Swift asked.
"We are doing just fine. We are glad to see you two again." Sonic said.
"We are glad to see you guys as well Dad." Swift replied.
"Swift, Zeon where are you guys?" Alexa hollered.
"We got to go, talk to you guys later." Zeon said before hanging up.
Alexa arrive at the tree and saw Zeon and Swift. "There you guys are. What are you guys doing here? Aren't you guys suppose to be ready for the Grand Galloping Galla?" Alexa asked.
"Yeah we'll be there. Come on Swift I'll race you back to Rarity's bouquet." Zeon said.
As they left the tree a dark emerald falls from a tree branch toward the tree. The emerald glows and a hedgehog forms out of it. He smiles as he looks at the tree of elements.
(Later at the Canterlot Castle)
Zeon, Swift, and Alexa stood around the castle watching every pony have fun at the Grand Galloping Galla.
"Hey Zeon, I've been meaning to ask you. Do you think I should ask Trixie to dance?" Swift asked.
"Dude, you should ask her to dance, after all you guys been getting close for the last 15 years since we've been here." Zeon said.
Swift looks at Trixie, and starts to get so nervous that he backs away.
Zeon grabs Swift's shoulder. "Dude you need to man up, I mean I'm sure your father has gone through this when he wanted to ask your mother to dance." Zeon said.
As they chat an explosion was heard and the ceiling of the castle falls and a dark blue hedgehog wearing white gloves, light blue sneakers, a rainbow bolt bracelet on his right wrist, an apple shape bracelet on his left wrist, a diamond shape bracelet on his right ankle, a balloon shape bracelet on his left ankle, and a butterfly shape necklace around his neck.
Zeon looked closely at the hedgehog and realized who it is. "Who are you, and what are you doing here?" Celestia asked.
"Heh, I'm Nazo the God of dark chaos, and I'm here for the last Element. I believe you know where it is." Nazo said. Twilight backed away from Nazo, but Nazo floats toward her ready to grab her crown.
Just as he reaches for the crown Zeon comes close to him and kicks him back.
"You're not getting, that element Nazo." Zeon said. Nazo rubs his lips and smiles as he floats back up to the sky.
"And who are you Worthless hedgehog?" Nazo asked as he crossed his arm and smiles.
"I'm Zeon the hedgehog, son of Shadow the Hedgehog and Rouge the bat, and I'm going to stop you." Zeon said.
Zeon jumps and tries to hit Nazo only to be swatted away like a fly. Zeon crashes to a pillar. Zeon gets up and looks at Swift and Alexa.
"Guys protect Twilight, I'll take care of Nazo." Zeon said as he does a homing attack at Nazo sending him toward the door.
"Be careful Zeon, Come on Alexa let's get Twilight out of here." Swift said. Alexa nods and they both run with Twilight out of the hall.
As they head to a room with a horseshoe shaped mirror Zeon and Nazo burst through the door, Zeon starts to try to get the elements off Nazo one by one each element goes through the mirror. Zeon accidentally bumps into Twilight knocking the crown into the mirror. Nazo pushes Zeon to the wall and flies into the mirror. Zeon gets up and looks at the mirror, but before he could run in after Nazo. Swift stops him and holds him there.
"Zeon wait you can't do things on your own. You have friends that can help you. So please don't do this alone." Swift said. Zeon looked at his friends and sigh.
"Your right Swift, let's do this together. Alexa you stay here and guard the Princesses in case Nazo returns before us." Swift said.
Zeon, Twilight, and Swift step up to the mirror and jumps in being ready to face whatever is on the other side.
Well I hope you all enjoyed that chapter. the next Chapter will be updated soon.
have a nice day everyone.
