Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars(though I wish I did).
All I own are my characters, Jared and Fajo Enroc, Bis'Hal
Yosan and Nath Aun and my system, the Kresyac system.
Star Wars
The Two Brothers
Fajo and Jared Enroc were brothers. The
Force was very strong in them, strong enough
to rival that of some Council members. Although
Fajo was far too old, they were trained,
and they learned remarkable fast.
After having been a Jedi apprentice to his
brother for nearly a decade, Jared suddenly
disappeared. No Jedi knew anything about
the young Padawan's strange absence.
Disturbed by his brother's disappearance, Fajo
searched for Jared himself. When he turned up
nothing, he decided to go to Jared's best friend....
Fajo walked soundlessly to the resting chambers of the Jedi Knight Bis'hal Yosan. He pressed the comm button and waited for a reply. "Who is it?" came a young voice."It's Fajo," he replied. "Do you want to talk to my Master?" inquired the voice. "Actually," said Fajo, "I want to talk to you." "Really?" said the voice. "Well, then come in." Fajo entered as the door slid open.
Bis'hal's Padawan, Nath Aun was Jared's best friend, so if anyone would know about him, Nath would. "Nath," began Fajo, "I assume you know about Jared's disappearance, am I right?" Nath nodded. "Well, then, I came here to find out if Jared said anything to you within a week before his disappearance." "Yes, we talked at least once a day, everyday," Nath said. "That's how I knew that something was wrong." "He didn't get in touch with you?" asked Fajo. "Uh- huh," said Nath. "Jared didn't call me at all that day." "What was the last thing you heard him say?" inquired Fajo. "Well," said Nath, "He said he was leaving for a some secret mission." We didn't have a mission that day, thought Fajo, We had just gotten back from one. "Did he say or do anything related to that mission?" asked Fajo, rather intrigued now. "When I went over to your quarters to talk to him, he was reviewing maps and muttering about 'places to hide', or something like that," said Nath. "Did you get a look at those maps, Nath?" asked Fajo. "Yeah, they all showed the middle- class section of the city surrounding the Temple, and most of them had hotels or private residences on them," said Nath. "Thank you very much, Nath," said Fajo. "You're welcome, master," said Nath. "May the Force be with you," said Fajo. "May the Force be with you," replied Nath.
Fajo searched all the hotels and private residences in the middle section of the city surrounding the Jedi Temple. On his last trip of the day, he noticed that in the hotel he went to, sixty-seven room keys were off the wall, but the clerk at the front desk said there were sixty-six rooms checked out. "Which rooms are checked out?" asked Fajo. The clerk handed him a printout. "These," he said. Room 209 wasn't on the list, but the key was gone. It must be Jared, thought Fajo, because he never carries enough credits to rent a room. "Perhaps I could look for the missing key," said Fajo, nudging the clerk's mind. "You could look for the missing key," said the clerk. He gestured to the rooms to his left. "Go on back," he said.
Fajo walked to room 209 and tried to open it, but it was locked. Fajo
stepped back and focused on the locking mechanism. The door clicked and slid open. He walked in to find a note laying on the bed. Fajo picked up it. It read: "Fajo, if you are reading this note, I have left the hotel and am boarding a transport. I have discovered very important information. I dare not tell you my exact destination, for reasons I'd rather not say. I did not come forward and tell anyone, for they may have been the one who I'm looking for. I need to discuss this with you. Meet me at the site of our worst mission.
-Jared
Fajo and Jared's worst mission site was the time they encountered a snakelike species. It caused its prey to go into convulsive coughing with a gas, then constricted it while it coughed, which worked well, because with each breath it only got tighter. They only escaped because Jared was congested and could barely breath, so he wasn't affected much and could kill the creatures. That was on the first moon of Kresyac, in a region unexplored because of legends of unspeakable monsters, which, ironically, happened to exist.
Of course he wanted to go there! If the legends didn't scare off people, the guards usually would. The forests were always guarded by their best soldiers, for the villagers did not wish outlanders to go into the forest and bring the curse back to their towns, should the outlander happen to return. But with his Jedi talents, Jared could've slipped past. Only someone with extreme persuasive powers and the nerve to go into the region would go in.
With the permission of the Jedi Council, Fajo took a Jedi starfighter and jumped into hyperspace. Upon arrival, Fajo released from his docking ring and sped off towards the first moon of Kresyac. Fajo was glancing back a rear display panel when something caught his eye. Turning farther, he saw what it was. His docking ring was being attacked! Fajo turned back and sprayed laser fire in the general direction of the source of the enemy fire. Several bolts struck something invisible. It ceased its fire on the ring and resumed fire upon Fajo.
Fajo ducked and swerved, trying to avoid the incoming bolts while firing some shots of his own. Something exploded, and the ship uncloaked, giving Fajo his first look at his enemy. The ship was unfamiliar to Fajo, a dagger-shape, but the Archives might shed some light on it. It was blood- red, but it was not painted that way. Where his laser bolts had struck it, there were scars in the hull and he could see the red metal was about two meters thick. It was some kind of sheilding, but obviously wasn't laser or missile, because his own relatively weaker lasers had torn through it without much difficulty.
Turning on his holorecorder for the records, he focused it on the ship and proceeded to fire his lighning. What happened next shocked Fajo. The lightning bolts rained heavily on the ship, but they poured off the ship's sides. Only the gouges where his lasers had torn through to gray durasteel were affected. It was Force sheilding! Trying his time slowdown, he found the ship turned and manuevered just as nimbly as he could. Without warning, the ship jumped into hyperspace, leaving him alone. Fajo considered pursuing, but he needed to find Jared, the ship could have changed course, and his docking ring was all but destroyed. All he could do was go down to the planet. Besides, now, he needed what Jared knew.
Ok, there you go! This is only the first
chapter of my first fic, so please be kind
and review my story.
All I own are my characters, Jared and Fajo Enroc, Bis'Hal
Yosan and Nath Aun and my system, the Kresyac system.
Star Wars
The Two Brothers
Fajo and Jared Enroc were brothers. The
Force was very strong in them, strong enough
to rival that of some Council members. Although
Fajo was far too old, they were trained,
and they learned remarkable fast.
After having been a Jedi apprentice to his
brother for nearly a decade, Jared suddenly
disappeared. No Jedi knew anything about
the young Padawan's strange absence.
Disturbed by his brother's disappearance, Fajo
searched for Jared himself. When he turned up
nothing, he decided to go to Jared's best friend....
Fajo walked soundlessly to the resting chambers of the Jedi Knight Bis'hal Yosan. He pressed the comm button and waited for a reply. "Who is it?" came a young voice."It's Fajo," he replied. "Do you want to talk to my Master?" inquired the voice. "Actually," said Fajo, "I want to talk to you." "Really?" said the voice. "Well, then come in." Fajo entered as the door slid open.
Bis'hal's Padawan, Nath Aun was Jared's best friend, so if anyone would know about him, Nath would. "Nath," began Fajo, "I assume you know about Jared's disappearance, am I right?" Nath nodded. "Well, then, I came here to find out if Jared said anything to you within a week before his disappearance." "Yes, we talked at least once a day, everyday," Nath said. "That's how I knew that something was wrong." "He didn't get in touch with you?" asked Fajo. "Uh- huh," said Nath. "Jared didn't call me at all that day." "What was the last thing you heard him say?" inquired Fajo. "Well," said Nath, "He said he was leaving for a some secret mission." We didn't have a mission that day, thought Fajo, We had just gotten back from one. "Did he say or do anything related to that mission?" asked Fajo, rather intrigued now. "When I went over to your quarters to talk to him, he was reviewing maps and muttering about 'places to hide', or something like that," said Nath. "Did you get a look at those maps, Nath?" asked Fajo. "Yeah, they all showed the middle- class section of the city surrounding the Temple, and most of them had hotels or private residences on them," said Nath. "Thank you very much, Nath," said Fajo. "You're welcome, master," said Nath. "May the Force be with you," said Fajo. "May the Force be with you," replied Nath.
Fajo searched all the hotels and private residences in the middle section of the city surrounding the Jedi Temple. On his last trip of the day, he noticed that in the hotel he went to, sixty-seven room keys were off the wall, but the clerk at the front desk said there were sixty-six rooms checked out. "Which rooms are checked out?" asked Fajo. The clerk handed him a printout. "These," he said. Room 209 wasn't on the list, but the key was gone. It must be Jared, thought Fajo, because he never carries enough credits to rent a room. "Perhaps I could look for the missing key," said Fajo, nudging the clerk's mind. "You could look for the missing key," said the clerk. He gestured to the rooms to his left. "Go on back," he said.
Fajo walked to room 209 and tried to open it, but it was locked. Fajo
stepped back and focused on the locking mechanism. The door clicked and slid open. He walked in to find a note laying on the bed. Fajo picked up it. It read: "Fajo, if you are reading this note, I have left the hotel and am boarding a transport. I have discovered very important information. I dare not tell you my exact destination, for reasons I'd rather not say. I did not come forward and tell anyone, for they may have been the one who I'm looking for. I need to discuss this with you. Meet me at the site of our worst mission.
-Jared
Fajo and Jared's worst mission site was the time they encountered a snakelike species. It caused its prey to go into convulsive coughing with a gas, then constricted it while it coughed, which worked well, because with each breath it only got tighter. They only escaped because Jared was congested and could barely breath, so he wasn't affected much and could kill the creatures. That was on the first moon of Kresyac, in a region unexplored because of legends of unspeakable monsters, which, ironically, happened to exist.
Of course he wanted to go there! If the legends didn't scare off people, the guards usually would. The forests were always guarded by their best soldiers, for the villagers did not wish outlanders to go into the forest and bring the curse back to their towns, should the outlander happen to return. But with his Jedi talents, Jared could've slipped past. Only someone with extreme persuasive powers and the nerve to go into the region would go in.
With the permission of the Jedi Council, Fajo took a Jedi starfighter and jumped into hyperspace. Upon arrival, Fajo released from his docking ring and sped off towards the first moon of Kresyac. Fajo was glancing back a rear display panel when something caught his eye. Turning farther, he saw what it was. His docking ring was being attacked! Fajo turned back and sprayed laser fire in the general direction of the source of the enemy fire. Several bolts struck something invisible. It ceased its fire on the ring and resumed fire upon Fajo.
Fajo ducked and swerved, trying to avoid the incoming bolts while firing some shots of his own. Something exploded, and the ship uncloaked, giving Fajo his first look at his enemy. The ship was unfamiliar to Fajo, a dagger-shape, but the Archives might shed some light on it. It was blood- red, but it was not painted that way. Where his laser bolts had struck it, there were scars in the hull and he could see the red metal was about two meters thick. It was some kind of sheilding, but obviously wasn't laser or missile, because his own relatively weaker lasers had torn through it without much difficulty.
Turning on his holorecorder for the records, he focused it on the ship and proceeded to fire his lighning. What happened next shocked Fajo. The lightning bolts rained heavily on the ship, but they poured off the ship's sides. Only the gouges where his lasers had torn through to gray durasteel were affected. It was Force sheilding! Trying his time slowdown, he found the ship turned and manuevered just as nimbly as he could. Without warning, the ship jumped into hyperspace, leaving him alone. Fajo considered pursuing, but he needed to find Jared, the ship could have changed course, and his docking ring was all but destroyed. All he could do was go down to the planet. Besides, now, he needed what Jared knew.
Ok, there you go! This is only the first
chapter of my first fic, so please be kind
and review my story.
