Disclaimer: I don't own any Naruto characters or the Naruto story! All credits belong to Masashi Kishimoto!

Authors Note: This is my first fanfiction. This story will be a femNaruto fanfiction and the story will follow the original timeline. Naruto's name will be Naruko or short Naru. The pairing will be KakaNaru in the end. But till then, Naruko will be loved/protected by many Naruto characters. I hope you like my story! :)

Thank you to my awesome beta-readers: Naruko7877, StudioDia29 and xxxxxborutoxxxxx. :3 Without these cutie pies, this story would be a lot worse.

Warning! : Some scenes will contain curse language or rape/ abuse!

'Normal thought…'

"Demon fox speech/ Kyuubi speech…"

''Normal speech…''

Jutsu name…


Chapter 1- Who is Naruko?


A long time ago a demon fox with nine tails appeared. With its powerful tails, it could smash mountains and could create tidal waves. A band of ninjas rose to defend their village from the attack. One great ninja was able to imprison the monster but died in the progress. This ninja was known as Yondaime Hokage! The nine-tailed demon fox was sealed inside a baby-girl, later know as Uzumaki Naruko. With that the story begins…

13 years later…

Uzumaki Naruko is currently running away from a bunch of Chunins. She has yet again pulled an incredible prank. Her mid-long blond hair in two pigtails, which was held by two orange ribbons, is blowing in the wind. She has big ocean blue eyes that currently are laughing at the bunch of ninjas, who are trying to catch her. Her bright personality set the village ablaze with light. She is wearing a bright neon orange jumpsuit; the jacket ends above her bellybutton and the shorts are just below her butt. Around her neck, she wears a pair of orange goggles. On her feet, you can find the usual blue shinobi sandals. Moreover, on her face is a large grin that curled her three whisker like marks on each cheek and compliment her tan skin.

'My newest prank surpassed all before!' Naruko thought happily as she ran through the streets, away from the angry mob of shinobis.

''Why did you do such a thing?'' One shinobi shouted angrily after her.

'Because nobody likes me and the whole village hates me for no reason. All I want is that people see me as who I am not as monster or something like that.' Her mood dropped a bit, but she didn't show that on the surface.

The hunt through the village of Konoha went on. In the view came the Hokage monument, newly redesigned. The Shodaime, Nidaime, Sandaime and Yondaime Hokage now looked more realistic and all of them have blood running down their noses.

Somewhere inside the Hokage office…

''Hokage-sama there is a problem.'' One shinobi stated nervously.

''What is it?'' The Sandaime comes in sight, he's currently writing kanjis. He sighed. ''Did Naruko do something again?'' He had a deadpan expression on his face. 'That girl will be the death of me! Why can't she just be like any normal child…oh…because she isn't a normal child. But that means…more evil paperwork for me…again!' He cringed.

''Hai, she climbed on the Hokage monument…and she vandalized and graffitied all over them!'' A random chunin shouted furiously.

The Sandaime sweat dropped. He looked at the Hokage monument and had to surpass his snicker. 'Looks like she found my orange books… and now she thinks all Hokage are perverts…' He sighed again.

Meanwhile, Naruko is still running away, now from jounin and anbu too. She passed a wood fence and an idea popped up in her mind. 'Those idiots will never find me!' She grinned evilly.

Just then, two jounins passed a normal wood fence. Suddenly, you can see a blanket, with wood prints on it like the wood fence, shuffle and Naruko appeared. She laughed. ''Those idiots will never find me!''

Just then a chunin named Iruka appeared behind her. ''OI, NARUKO!''

"Kyaa!" Naruko was so scared that she tripped over a rock. "How did you suddenly get here, Iruka-sensei?''

''The question is what are you doing here when you should be in class now?'' Iruka looked pissed at her.

''Gomen..." Naruko looked at him, embarrassed.

In the academy…

Naruko is now tied up so she can't run away. She pouted. 'Why is Iruka-nii such a buzzkiller? And why does he have to embarrass me in front of the whole class? I'm enough disliked by all of them….'

''Now listen, Naruko!" Iruka looked at her seriously. ''You failed the last graduation test and the one before that. This is no time to goofing off, you fool!''

She pouted. 'It's not like I failed intentionally. It's not my fault that the other academy teachers manipulate my tests, so I can't graduate…' She bit on her lip and blinked back tears.

Iruka sweat dropped at her mood drop. ''We will have a re-test on Henge no Jutsu! Even those who already pass will take it.''

''Whaaaaaaatttttt?!'' The whole class was enraged. Hateful glares were sent in Naruko's direction.

''That's all your fault, baka!" One of her classmates blamed her.

Iruka heard that and send a warning glare in the direction of that stupid kid. He doesn't hate Naruko, more so, he really likes her like the little sister he never had. But in class he should treat all as equals, so he can't help her. 'I hope you know why I can't help you here, Naru-chan.' He sent a short apologetic glimpse in her direction.

Naruko noticed the glimpse and she gave Iruka a small smile. A true smile not that fake smile she always wears. 'Don't worry, Iruka-nii…I know you can't help me now, but I'm grateful you see me as Uzumaki Naruko and not as a monster. However, you didn't have to go so far as to humiliate me in front of the class that was really mean!' Naruko began to pout again.

The test started. The first to begin was Haruno Sakura. She is a very girly girl with pink hair and green eyes and passed the Henge no Jutsu by transforming into Iruka almost perfectly.

''I did it!'' Sakura jumped into the air. 'Shannaro!'

''Did you see that Sasuke-kun?'' She looked lovestruck at the last Uchiha.

The next was Uchiha Sasuke. He is a very broody boy with a very big ego and he passed the exam over-average. Finally, it was Naruko's turn.

'Now I can pay Iruka-nii back for what he did earlier!' She grinned fake-innocent at Iruka.

''This is a real pain...'' Nara Shikamaru dropped his head lazily on his desk. 'Mendoukse!' He sighed.

''That's all your fault!'' Yamanaka Ino screeched at her.

'Like I care what you say, Sasuke fangirl Number 2!' Naruko looked at her annoyed. ''Yosh, let's go!''

In the background stood Hyuuga Hinata, a very shy girl, and encouraged Naruko silently. Naruko is Hinata's idol because she is so confident and Hinata hopes she can be best friends with her one day.

Naruko walked to Iruka. ''Transform!'' She did a single hand sign and her eyes twinkled mischievously.

'Oh no, that's not good…' Iruka noticed that glint, but it was too late. In Naruko's place stood an older teenager Naruko completely naked with curves just on the right places. As Iruka noticed that, he flew backwards with enormous speed and a nosebleed.

All boys in her class, even Sasuke, blushed or had bloody noses. She transformed back and sweat dropped at the sight. 'And I thought you were different Iruka-nii….so that means probably all men are perverts!' Naruko sighed. Then, she looked innocently at Iruka.

''How do you find it? I call it Oiroke no Jutsu'' She grinned proudly.

''YOU FOOL! STOP MAKING SUCH JUTSUS!'' Iruka screamed angrily and waved hysterically with his arms. 'Where did she learn such jutsus? When I find out who has influenced my sweet and innocent Naru-chan…let's just say, his family will not have enough of a body to bury properly.'

Then, Iruka noticed the boys of the class with blushes on their faces. 'Oh no, no, no, no, no, no! Back your hands away from my little angel! If I see that you are glancing at Naru-chan with perverted thoughts I will kill you!' He finally noticed that he leaked out a little bit of killer intent at the boys and stopped immediately.

After the academy...

Naruko and Iruka both stood in front of the Hokage monument. Naruko's punishment was to clean the Hokage monument from her paint. She pouted. 'What fun is it, if you have to clean it in the end?' She sighed.

Iruka frowned. He noticed that Naruko cleaned the same place for 10 minutes. 'What's wrong with her? Is she frustrated? But why?' ''You know, Naru-chan, I won't let you go home unless you cleaned all that up.'' Iruka looked at her.

''I don't care… there's no one home anyway.'' She answered him so quietly that he almost missed it. 'Naru-chan…' He thought sadly as he saw a tear slip her eyes. ''Naru-chan.''

''What is it Iruka-sensei?'' Naruko looked at him and tried to put her fake smile on her face.

''You know…if you clean up the mess, I will buy you ramen tonight.''

''Really, Iruka-nii?'' Her mood brightened and her eyes shined with hope.

''Yeah, really.'' He watched satisfied as a true smile lit on Naruko's face.

10 minutes later by Ichiraku Ramen…

Naruko and Iruka are currently eating ramen.

''Naru-chan?'' Iruka looked at her with a puzzled expression. "Why did you vandalize those faces? Don't you know who the Hokage are?''

''Of course, I do, Iruka-nii! I know they earned the title Hokage, because they were the best ninja of their time, right? Especially the Yondaime Hokage was a hero, who saved the village from the nine-tailed demon fox Kyuubi."

''Then why did you do that, Naru-chan?'' Iruka just looked more confused.

''Because I'll become Hokage myself and I'll be the greatest Hokage of all time! So that everyone will finally accept me. And besides that, all Hokages were pervs so they deserved it!'' She grinned cheerfully.

Iruka sweat dropped.

''By the way, Iruka-nii, I have a favor to ask.''

''You want another bowl?'' He guessed and sweat dropped again.

''Mmmh…no…Can I borrow that hitai-ate for a while?'' She looked at him with her best puppy-dog eyes.

He gulped and looked away from her. ''I'm sorry Naru-chan. This is worn only by those who have graduated from Ninja Academy. Tomorrow, you will...''

''You are so mean Iruka-nii!'' Naruko pouted, till an idea popped up inside her mind. Suddenly she yelled: ''One more bowl, please!''

''Whaa...'' Iruka screamed shocked. He cried anime tears in memory of his now-not-so-full-anymore wallet.


The next day…

''We are now about to begin the graduation test. When your name is called, proceed to the next classroom. The test is on the Bunshin no Jutsu.'' Iruka took a double look at his list and frowned. 'That's Naru-chan's weakest jutsu…I hope she can still pass.'

'Oh no! Why always that jutsu?' Naruko looked nervously around her.

She entered the graduation room. She saw Iruka-sensei grinning encouraging at her. Next to Iruka-sensei sat Mizuki-sensei and looked mischievous and beside him laid the hitai-ate's on a table.

'I will pass this test no matter what!' She did the right hand sign and gathered chakra. At this moment, unknown by Naruko and Iruka, Mizuki formed a hand sign under the table and grinned evilly.

''Bunshin no Jutsu!''

And with a large puff of smoke a very ill looking and instable clone appeared. Naruko's face was shocked and Iruka looked at the clone in disbelief, while Mizuki tried to surpass his evil laughter.

'I'm sorry Naru-chan, but I can't let you pass like that...'

''Disqualified.'' Iruka looked at her sadly.

Naruko's face looked like you have drowned a puppy. But she managed a fake smile. ''That's fine. I'll just try next time''. As Naruko got out of the door a single tear fell to the ground. Iruka noticed that and preferably he would go after her, but they have to control the other academy students.

'Gomen, Naru-chan, I'll buy you an extra big bowl of ramen later, I promise! ' Iruka looked at the door with a frown on his face. 'I hope you are alright till I can come to you, please stay safe and don't do something silly.'

Outside the academy…

Newly promoted genins were gathered outside the academy and chatted cheerfully with their family and friends. Naruko was sitting alone on the swing. She was depressed and wondered why her Bunshin no Jutsu failed so miserably.

''Look, look, I'm a ninja now!'' One of Naruko's ex-classmates hugged his parents cheerfully. Her eyes watered.

''You did well, son!'' His parents beamed at him proudly.

Naruko tried not to cry. Two women looked at her with hateful looks on their faces.

''Look at that one.'' One of the women looked at her hateful.

''It's that girl! I heard she's the only one who failed.'' Her friend answered with her nose held high.

''Hmpfh, serves her right!''

''Imagine what would happen if she became a ninja'' The second woman frowned.

''Isn't that the whore who is actually…''

''Hey, we are not supposed to talk about that!''

At that moment Naruko couldn't hold back her tears anymore and the tears slid down her face. Suddenly a person appeared next to her. She wiped her tears away and looked up…next to her stood Mizuki-sensei.

In the background, Iruka and the Sandaime stood next to each other and looked at Naruko and Mizuki with a frown on their faces.

''Iruka, we need to talk later.'' Sandaime looked at him seriously.

''Hai!" Iruka looked warily in the direction were Naruko and Mizuki stood just a minute ago.

On the rooftop of a house…

Mizuki-sensei and Naruko sat beside each other and looked over Konoha.

''Iruka-sensei isn't trying to be mean to you, you know.'' Mizuki looked at the girl with fake-concern. 'Considering that the girl is only thirteen and the Kyuubi whore, she looks pretty beautiful for her age...so exotic, I like that she has the right curves on the right places and that for her age is pretty amazing. Maybe I can have a little fun with her later, before I kill her.' Mizuki grinned evilly.

Naruko looked warily at him. 'Why does his grin look so mischievous? And I know that Iruka-nii is only doing his job and couldn't let me pass. But what's his point in that?' Naruko's eyes narrowed. Something isn't right with him and Naruko could feel it.

''You know, Iruka-sensei only wants you to become strong from the bottom of his heart. You both don't have parents.''

'What are you getting at?' Naruko can't help but feel suspicious.

''You know, I can help you…'' Mischief glinted in his eyes.

''Help with what?'' She looked at him curiously. 'Maybe I'm just paranoid and he just wants to help...'

''I'll let you in a big secret.''

Naruko's eyes widened. ''What secret?''

Mizuki smiled brightly with hidden evil in his smile, but Naruko doesn't notice it anymore. 'I finally trapped her in my lies!'

A few hours later, at Irukas home…

'Where is Naruko? Slowly I begin to worry about you Naru-chan. Where are you? You didn't wait for me here, like we arranged it. Did something happen? I hope you are alright…And wasn't Mizuki by your side the last time I saw you? Has he something to do with that? No Mizuki wouldn't…' Irukas thoughts were interrupted by a bang on his door.

''Wake up, Iruka-sensei!'' Sounded a voice from the other side of the door.

Iruka opened the door and was shocked to see Mizuki standing in front of him.

''What's the matter?'' He looked at Mizuki in surprise. 'Is something with Naru-chan?'

''Come to Hokage-sama immediately! I heard... that Naruko…stole the scroll of seals.''

''What?! The Scroll of Seals?!'' Iruka looked utterly shocked. 'Why would Naru-chan do such a thing? Something isn't right here…' He looked at Mizuki's back suspiciously.

At the forest edge…

Naruko sat on the ground and read the scroll of seals. ''Let's see…the first jutsu is…Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu? Mmhh…a jutsu I'm already not good at? Interesting! Let's go!''

By the Sandaime…

''Hokage-sama! We can't forgive her! This is not just a prank!" One jounin panicked.

''The scroll is a dangerous item that the Shodaime sealed! Depending on its use…It will be a major disaster if it's taken out of the village!'' Another agreed. Iruka and Mizuki arrived by the Hokage. Iruka frowned.

''Yes. Bring Naruko here at once!'' The Sandaime ordered and looked discreetly at Iruka.

''Yes, sir!'' All of them vanished.

With Iruka...

Iruka searched through the whole village to find Naruko. But he couldn't find her. 'Where are you Naru-chan? And why did you take the scroll? That didn't look like you… Something is obviously not right! Stay safe, Naru-chan! I will find you!'

With Mizuki…

Mizuki is on the way to his meeting place, where he will find Naruko. He laughed evilly and manically. 'I will tell everyone in the village about this and kill Naruko… but before that I will have a little fun with that pretty Kyuubi whore! And then the scroll of sealing will be mine too.' Mizuki grinned like he was getting the best present in the world to his birthday. His eyes gleamed with mischief. 'Maybe I won't kill that bitch and make her my personal whoreYeah that would be fun!' And again, an evil laugh escaped his throat. 'I can't wait!'

With Naruko…

Naruko laid utterly exhausted on the ground. She panted hard and looked like she was training for several hours. Suddenly a shadow formed above her. An angry and concerned Iruka arrived.

''Hey, Naru-chan!" He looked angry and worried.

Naruko sat up and looked pleased at Iruka-sensei. ''You found me…And I've only learned one jutsu, but that's okay, right, Iruka-nii?''

'She has been practicing a jutsu…? Until she became this dirty and exhausted? What's going on?!' A frown formed on his face as he tried to solve this puzzle.

''Listen Iruka-nii, I'm going to show you this amazing jutsu! You're going to let me graduate if I'm doing so, right? Isn't it true that I can graduate if I can do one jutsu written down here?'' She looked cheerfully at him but was clearly exhausted.

Iruka looked at her completely shocked, his suspicion became clear. ''Who told you that, Naru-chan?''

Naruko looked at him confused. ''Mizuki-sensei. He told me about this scroll and place…but you know that, right?'' She looked carefully at him.

Iruka narrowed his eyes. 'Mizuki did it! So, my suspicion was right!' ''No, I didn't know that.''

Naruko's eyes widened. She frowned. 'He didn't know…then why?' She asked herself that again and again, but she didn't find a plausible answer.

Suddenly kunai flew her way. Iruka pushed her aside and took the hits and because of that was pinned against a wall of a little cabin.

''I'm impressed you found this place.'' An evil voice sounded from above them.

''I see now how it is…'' Iruka looked furious.

Mizuki came in sight. ''Naruko be a nice girl and give me the scroll!''

Naruko was shocked to see her Iruka-nii wounded and bleeding. ''What's going on here?'' She asked with such a scared voice that shattered Irukas heart into pieces.

'She should never be this scared, I have to protect her! No matter what!' ''Naru-chan, never give him the scroll!'' Iruka looked calmly at her to soothe is little sister-like student. ''It's a dangerous object that contains forbidden Ninjutsu. It was sealed. Mizuki used you in order to get it for himself!''

'What? He used me?' Naruko was near tears. She hated it to be used like an object.

''Naruko. Don't listen to Iruka-sensei. He is only afraid of you holding that scroll!'' Mizuki grinned evilly.

Her eyes widened. 'Why would Iruka-nii do such a thing? You are a liar!'

''Naru-chan, don't let him fool you! I know you are smarter than you let everybody know and I know you are strong! Probably stronger than everyone!'' Iruka began to sweat.

''Hahahaha, I will tell you the truth.''

'What truth?' Naruko narrowed her eyes.

''Baka! Don't do that!''

''After an accident twelve years ago, a rule was created.'' Mizuki looked to her as he ignored Iruka.

'A rule? What rule?' Naruko's brain slowly felt like pudding by the words she didn't get.

''That's a rule everybody, but you, knows.''

'Iruka-nii too?' She looked shocked at Mizuki.

''STOP IT MIZUKI!'' Iruka panicked.

"The rule forbids anyone from revealing that you are actually the Demon Fox Spirit!'' Mizuki chuckled evilly.

''Huh?'' Naruko's world began to rotate. 'I'm the Kyuubi?' Tears gathered in her eyes.

"You are actually the Demon, the Nine Tailed Fox Spirit, who killed Iruka's parents and destroyed the village! You are nothing more than a demon whore!''

Now tears streamed down Naruko's face and over and over again the same thoughts came to her mind: 'I killed Iruka's parents, I killed Iruka's parents, I killed Iruka's parents…'

Mizuki walked towards her. 'Finally, she is trapped' Mizuki grinned and looked at Iruka. 'And Iruka is pinned to the wall. That's perfect! I can break her spirit by raping her and all he can do is to watch.'

Naruko still sat on the ground and cried, the horrible thoughts pinned her down.

'Why is he walking towards her?' Iruka narrowed his eyes. 'I have to do something, but I can't break free!' Iruka struggled. He has to go to Naruko now, before Mizuki reaches her. But it was pointless.

Now Mizuki reached Naruko. He laid a hand on her shoulder. Naruko looked up and her eyes widened in surprise as she saw Mizuki standing in front of her. Too fast for her to react, Mizuki grabbed her hands and pinned her with his body to the ground. Her eyes widened. She struggled, but he was too heavy for her. Mizukis face was only inches away from hers and she could feel his breath on her face. Chills ran down her back and you can see the panic in her eyes.

'No, not again!' She panicked as his lips touched her lips.

'You will get what you deserve demon whore!'

As Iruka saw that Mizuki pinned Naruko down and his face only inches away from hers, something inside of him snapped.

'He wouldn't do that would he?' Iruka was full of panic. 'He would never rape a child, he isn't a pedophile, or is he?' As then his lips were pressed on the lips of his precious Naru-chan, his little sister, he freaked out. He pulled the rest of the kunai out of his body in such speed and in less than a second was beside Mizuki and kicked him with such force that Mizuki crushed through a tree. He looked down at the frightened Naruko and felt his blood boil. Mizuki stood up and pulled out his big fuma-shuriken.

Iruka dashed at Mizuki, but he only grinned and threw his fuma-shuriken at Naruko, who was sitting on the ground still frozen in fear.

"DIE, Naruko!'' Mizuki screamed.

Naruko closed her eyes. 'So, this is the end…'

But nothing happened. She opened her eyes only to see Iruka standing above her with blood running down his mouth and the fuma-shuriken sticking out of his back. ''Iruka-nii…why?'' Tears streamed down her face.

''Because you and I are the same. After my parents died, nobody paid attention to me or gave me any support. I wasn't a good student in school. I was the class clown…because I wanted people to notice me. I couldn't get noticed through excellence, so I kept doing stupid things. It was so hard. Isn't that right Naruko?'' Iruka was now crying too.

''Don't make me laugh…Iruka always hated you because you killed his parents!'' Mizuki laughed.

''No…you are wrong! Naru-chan didn't kill my parents. She is my precious little sister, who I love so much! She is Uzumaki Naruko from Konoha, not some demon!"

Naruko's eyes widened.

''THEN DIE FOOL!'' Mizuki threw his second fuma-shuriken in Irukas direction.

'I guess that is the end of me…Gomen, Naruko' Iruka looked sadly at her. Naruko furiously kicked the shuriken aside and kicked Mizuki right in the face. Irukas eyes widened in surprise. Mizuki fell hard to the ground and Naruko appeared right in front of him.

'Naru-chan?!'

''You surprised me there, bitch!'' Mizuki froze in his way as he looked at Naruko. She looked furious. Her blond hair was out of her pigtails, floated behind her in the air and formed hair-like tails. [like her mother Kushina with her hair] She has a murderous and furious glare on her face and a stifling aura.

''IF YOU EVER LAY A HAND ON IRUKA-NII AGAIN, I'LL KILL YOU!'' She looked murderous.

''Shut up, I can take care of a kid like you with a single blow.'' Mizuki looked cheekily at her.

''Why don't you try then? I pay you back a thousand times!'' Naruko made a correct hand sign and grinned coldly.

''Let's see you try! Show me what you can do demon whore!''

''Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!''

Iruka was shocked. His eyes widened in surprise as he saw over a thousand furious Naruko's appear.

...And this was the day Mizuki learned an important lesson. Don't mess with furious women. With don't I mean NEVER! And if the woman is Uzumaki Naruko you should run for your life while you can still walk...

After Mizuki learned his lesson he was nothing more than a bleeding pulp and newly castrated. Naruko was a little bit embarrassed. ''I kind of got carried away, I'm sorry! Are you alright Iruka-nii?'' Naruko looked at him, concerned about his condition.

Iruka gaped in disbelief at the sight of Mizuki and what she had done to him. He shivered. 'Note to myself: Don't mess with Naru-chan when she is pissed!' ''Ah…Yeah…" He chuckled awkwardly. 'She is really something. Maybe it's true. Maybe she will surpass all Hokages.'

Naruko sighed. ''I'm glad that you are alright!'' She beamed happily at him.

''Naru-chan, come over here, I'd like to give you something.''

Meanwhile by the other shinobis…

''Has anyone found Naruko yet?'' One chunin looked around in concern.

''No.''

''Darn, this is bad'' Another shinobi panicked.

The Sandaime walked to them and smiled. ''There's no need to worry anymore. She'll be back soon.''

Back to Naruko and Iruka…

''Iruka-nii can I open my eyes now?"

''Yes, you can.''

As she opened her eyes a pleased looking Iruka was in her sight without his hitai-ate. She then realized his hitai-ate was around her head and her eyes widened in surprise.

''Congratulation…. on your graduation!'' He grinned warmly at her. ''In celebration for that, we'll have ramen tonight.''

Naruko was overwhelmed. She let a single tear slip down her face. Iruka wondered what was wrong when suddenly he was crushed into a hug. "Iruka-nii!'' They both fell to the ground and Iruka groaned in pain. As he opened his eyes, Naruko's breasts were pressed in his face. He blushed.

''Can you get off me, I'm still hurt you know...'' He could only hope that Naru-chan didn't notice his blush.

''Gomen, Iruka-nii!'' She jumped off him and giggled cheerfully.

He sighed. 'That was close! I don't want Naru-chan to think that I'm a pervert or something.'

''Oh, and Iruka-nii?''

''What is it?''

''You should learn to hide your blush better that was so obvious, you perv.'' She deadpanned.

Iruka turned red. 'Nooooooooo!' He sunk to the ground and cried anime tears. 'Now my little sister thinks I'm a pervert!'

Naruko laid laughing on the ground. Irukas eyebrow twitched in annoyance.

''Gomen, Iruka-nii that was only a joke, but you should have seen your face!'' After 5 minutes Naruko finally calmed down enough to stand up. She took Iruka's arm and dragged him with her.

''Let's go to Ichiraku's Ramen!'' She began to sing cheerfully. Iruka only sweat dropped and mourned silently at his soon empty wallet.


Thanks for all your reviews!

Special thanks to my beta 'StudioDia29', who looked through this chapter and fixed some of my mistakes. :3

Henge no Jutsu = Transformation Technique

Oiroke no Jutsu = Sexy Technique

Bunshin no Jutsu = Clone Technique

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu = Shadow Clone Technique

Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu = Multiple Shadow Clone Technique

Ninjutsu = Ninja Techniques

Reviews

'MakeOutTacticsVol.2' : Great first chapter, liked the structure of the chapter however just a little thing is the use of double and single quotation marks to distinguish speech and thought, however that is an easy fix and I look forward to how you progress this story :)

Thanks for the tip! I have edited all my chapters because there were really bad grammar/spelling mistakes. But now, everything is fixed. :)

'Guest' from 25.08.2017 : Good...I like so much ...please much

I'm glad you liked it! :) I hope you will enjoy the future chapters too.

'Goon' : Your fic is interesting... I love the fic fem naru

Thanks! I love female Naru too, that's why I began to write this story. :)

'iHateHotWeather123' : Have a FUCKING RAPE WARNING, YOU SICK, LAME FUCK! CLICHE and OVER-USED/UNCREATIVE storyline..

Wow...Thank you so much for your *cough* constructive criticism *cough*. And by the way, I have a rape warning in the first chapter...Oh and this fic isn't rated M for nothing, so if you aren't mature enough to read about something like that, why did you read this chapter in the first place and why did you write a review...?... You could have just clicked away...

'stamfordhighschool': I love it

Thank you! :3 I'm glad you like my story. :)

'Princess Peridot': Your grammar and pacing needs work. You could also work on not putting the anime into written text. Everyone here has seen it, you don't have to rewrite it. I'm not saying this to be mean. I'm trying to say that you could have spent the time to work on putting Naruko's motivations and inner thoughts in to words. Which you did, but you could have expanded upon them and not have left them as snapshot. Back peddling a bit to your grammar, you seem to have an issue with possessives and plurals. I don't know if it's just because you're lazy and don't bother, a crazy spell check function on your phone, a sticky keyboard, or that English is your second language. To cite an example you used womans in place of the correct plural women. You also forget to use an apostrophe to show possession. The work shown here is not bad, is actually pretty good all things considered. With the right proof reader, and a bit of work you could take this story from good to great. Please don't take me for some conceited fool or anything, I just want to offer some advice to help you grow as an author. Seriously, I really do mean all of this in the nicest way possible.

Thank you for your constructive criticism. :) I know I have some grammar and spelling issues, but I'm from Germany, so English is not my first language... Anyway, this is not an excuse to not check the spelling and grammar twice, I already did that, but I always miss something and I also want to write new chapters, so that means that in the earlier chapter are a few bad mistakes, I overlooked. To what you said about putting more work on Naruko's inner motivation and thoughts: It gets better with every next chapter, I have written. For example, in chapter 20-32 I think I have written some good interesting thoughts and did some changes to the anime. This chapter here, is pretty much the first thing I have ever written on fanfiction, so it isn't really good. Also, I already tried to get a Beta-Reader or proof reader, but from the over 20 people I made a request from, no one answered to this day, what I find a bit rude. (I wrote most of them over a month ago, so they could have at least written back saying they're not interested or something like that.) Oh, and I don't take you for some conceited fool. You're pretty nice and polite and only give me constructive criticism without curse words or something like that, so I'm grateful for your review. :) And maybe if you have time or want to, you can get a proof or beta reader of this story. (Just say if you're not interested, I will not be mad.) Anyway, have a nice day! ;)

'Kimimaro-Kun': I like this fic. Do you think Kimimaro can be added to the harem? If not just not killed? Definitely following.

Thank you~ I dont know yet, if I will add Kimimaro to the harem or what happens to him. We just have to wait and see how the story will progress. :)

'Darknight Silver': One of the best gender bents of Naruro I have ever read. Keep up the good work!

Thank you~ :3 And dont worry, I will keep working on this story. ;)

'Zabuza'sGirl': Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

Thank you. :D And I will update soon, don't worry.

'hellsparn': Can I make a suggestion for shippudden if you haven't reached it yet have naruko start wearing her hair in a short ponytail so it goes to her neck and have sai compare naruko and sakuras chest greatly pissing off sakura

Well first, thanks for your suggestions, they are very much appreciated. :3 And to Naru wearing her hair in a short ponytail, sorry but that will not happen. She will continue wearing her hair in pigtails. To the second suggestion: That is actually a pretty good idea. XD I'm really thinking about including this, it would be awesome. XD