This…wasn't my first idea, but the other storyline in my head is so complicated that I don't believe I have the skills to tell it right…so I'm using this idea ,which Is a bit more simple, to make progress as a fanfiction writer and then hopefully (maybe) I can carve my awesome ideas into this story… or something, if not I have a good idea where I can take this story… so here goes something…
Disclaimer: so ya'll aren't on my ass about it, I don't own Naruto nor anything else that may be intentionally or unintentionally implied
Naruto's Changed Life
Chapter one
First Suffering
"What's wrong? Hurry up and attack me!"
"But…Hey! What's with the book?"
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"I'll totally kick your ass!"
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"…A THOUSAND YEARS OF PAIN!"
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"A shinobi should be able to see what's underneath the under-"
"I know that!"
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"Sakura…"
"Sasuke-kun"
"Sakura…help me…"
"AAAAAAAHHHHHHH"
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"The village's most powerful clan, the Uchiha clan…This could be interesting…"
"Katon: Goukakyuu No Jutsu!"
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"All three of you should quit as shinobi!"
Everything was still. Sweat formed on Naruto's face. What was his sensei talking about! Did his hardships these last few years mean nothing and what of the other night? He took out a chuunin just the other day! Sure, Mizuki wasn't the best ninja around, but still. Everything he's done couldn't have been for nothing!
"What does that mean! Why do we have to quit as ninjas!" Naruto shouted struggling to get free from the rope that bonded him to his post.
"Because all of you are just punks who don't deserve to be ninja." Kakashi responded with disinterest clear in his voice.
At this Sasuke jumped at Kakashi but to no avail as he was quickly subdued with Kakashi sitting on his back stepping on his head. "That is why you're a punk"
"No! Don't step on Sasuke-kun!"
"Are you guys underestimating ninjas? Huh? Why do you think you were divided into teams and are doing this training? You guys don't understand the answer to this test. "
"Answer?" Naruto wondered.
"Yes, the answer that helps you pass this test."
"So when are you going to tell us the answer to the test?" Sakura asked frustration becoming more apparent on her face, she was the smartest genin fresh out of the academy, how could she not see the answer?
Kakashi's aura became serious at that moment and stated , as if it was the most obvious thing in the world, "It's teamwork. The three of you together may have gotten the bells."
Everybody's expression came to being shocked and frustrated, and Sakura came to the same thoughts she had earlier, she was the smartest genin out of the academy, how could she, Not, see the answer? Yet something still didn't add up… there were only 2 bells.
Kakashi, as if reading her thoughts, stated "This test was built to make you fight among yourselves; the purpose was to see if you could put your own interest away and successfully work as a team. Yet… you guys…Sakura! You were only concerned for Sasuke and completely ignored Naruto, and Naruto you were just running around by yourself…and Sasuke you assumed that the other two would only get in the way and tried to do everything yourself. The duties are done by the team, of course individual abilities are important, but what's more important is teamwork"
Kakashi at that moment decided to let out a small amount of killing intent "Individual play that disrupts the team can put your comrades in danger and even get yourself killed" He took out a kunai "For example" He whispered, then shouted taking the kunai and placing it on Sasuke's neck " Sakura kill Naruto or Sasuke dies!"
Kakashi had planned this from the beginning of his speech to make them realize that they could be killed at any moment but something happened that Kakashi did not predict.
Sakura's mind was racing she had never felt killing intent, (as where Naruto and Sasuke have) so to Sakura the situation was extremely dire. She had to make a choice: Naruto or Sasuke. As far as she knew Naruto was an orphan with no parents or relatives at all and many villagers didn't like his pranks and he wasn't a very great ninja. Sasuke on the other hand was the only living survivor of the strongest clan that Konoha ever had with him being liked by many of the people, including herself, and was the rookie of their graduating class, meaning he was an impeccable ninja. She didn't like what she had to do but the choice was obvious, the feeling she got from Kakashi… he was serious.
She turned to Naruto quickly pulling out a kunai and jammed into his chest. Naruto's eyes widened. Kakashi's eye widened. Even Sasuke lost his cool and his eyes widened.
Silence.
Then the sound of Sakura continuing to push the kunai into Naruto's flesh to the hilt. Naruto coughed blood onto Sakura. He didn't understand… Why was she doing this? She was like him wasn't she or at least she was when she was smaller, always ridiculed by others and he thought he could relate to her and she'd acknowledge him. Wasn't he what a good friend ought to be? Always happy, keeping the mood light, being kind defending her views…weren't theses things that people who love you were supposed to do? Naruto wasn't one of Sakura's loved one but he was trying to be something to her, if not a love interest than at least a great friend… because as far as he knew his only friends was Iruka-sensei and the Hokage along with his grandson…so why did Sakura do this so easily with almost no hesitation? He had tried hard to be kind to her. Why? Did she hate him too? For the same reason the other's hated him? Why? He tried so hard to be good. Why? Why! Why!
"SAKURA! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!" Kakashi roared.
The training area was then overfilled with killing intent. Chains then exploded out of Naruto's back enclosing the area and freeing him. He landed on the ground and pulled the kunai out.
'Chakra chains! There is only one person I know…knew…that could do that!' Kakashi thought in utter surprise to the boy being alive.
"Good thing she got right below the heart or we would have been in trouble, right Kushina?" "Naruto" stated. His wound seemed to magically disappear from existence. He looked at Sakura who was on the ground horrified.
'Did he say Kushina? It couldn't be…' Kakashi's eye started to re-widen.
The sight that Kakashi beheld was one of Konoha's greatest nightmares. Naruto his eyes completely red, his hair becoming wild and untamed, his canines elongate, giving him a feral demonic look.
"You! You hurt my son! He trusted you! He was loyal and completely devoted to getting your attention! You'll pay for what you've done!"
'Did he say son? What the hell is happening?Whatever it is I have to stop it!' Kakashi proceeded to uncover his left eye revealing his sharigan.
"Kushina it seems Hatake Kakashi is about to take action" 'Naruto' stated. "I have a few words to say to him to!" 'Naruto' shouted turning to Kakashi. "What the hell have you been doing for the past 12 years?"
"I advise we do not kill them…Not that I don't want to rip something apart"
"Yeah, Yeah"
'What's going on this is definitely the Kyuubi's chakra and I have no doubt that it has taken Naruto over, but it's like it has a split personality"
'Naruto' started toform hand seals.
'Shit!'
"We'll just ruff them up a bit and may be end that kunochi's career! Kokuangyou no Jutsu!"
Then everything went black.
Sasuke Uchiha wasn't scared of anything. Ever since that night he had resolved to become a great shinobi and of course great shinobi didn't get scared. So when he was told to quite being a shinobi he wasn't scared of attacking his jounin sensei. When he was pinned down he wasn't scared of getting hurt because he promised to survive. Kakashi's killing intent hardly even fazed him.
Sasuke Uchiha however did get surprised. He was surprised at Sakura stabbing their teammate especially after the fact they had a lecture from Kakashi on the importance of teamwork…and Sakura was the smartest genin out of the academy…psh…It was however sad, Naruto seemed like a potential rival definitely a potential ally and a potential shinobi for konoha so it was a loss…a small loss… but a loss all the same. Then the next surprises came. Chains ripped out of Naruto's back. His wounds completely healed. Kakashi had a sharingan. Naruto's was completely demonic. Well you know the gist of it. It had been a surprising day.
The killing intent from Naruto was also surprising. Sasuke Uchiha could not move at all… and the way Naruto had looked at Kakashi and Sakura it was horrific…And then everything went black…
Maybe Sasuke Uchiha got a little scared…sometimes…
'Paperwork, I hate paperwork, why can't something happen to get me away from this paperwork' Hizuren Sarutobi, The Sandaime Hokage, known as the Professor absolutely abhorred paperwork. Hell he'd even put up with one of Naruto's pranks to get out of doing this…Speaking of which the young boy was taking his test right now wasn't he? A thought popped up in Sarutobi's head? 'I was supposed to meet Iruka for lunch!' Sarutobi was glad that he got to get away from this boring paperwork, knowing Iruka he probably wants to talk about Naruto's new sensei. He pulled a drawer a took out a surprisingly light file of Kakashi's past teams…or not surprising 'did Kakashi ever have a team?'
That's when the old timer felt a huge burst of chakra. 'It can't be!' He quickly took out a square sheet of paper given to him by his former student as ANBU surrounded him.
"Hokage –sama we must hurry" An ANBU whom Sarutobi knew possessed the Mokuton Kekkie Genkai shouted. Without a word they all disappeared.
Naruto awoke already standing in an unfamiliar place.
"Where am I? What happened?"
His hand suddenly clenched his chest. No hole. What was going on? He took in his surroundings. He was in a dimly lit hallway filled with ankle high water, there seemed to be doors along the hallway but they all looked locked shut. There were rusty pipes along the ceiling where the occasional drop of water found its way out of. In summary it seemed to be a depressing place. There also seemed to be a steady flow of chakra flowing out of a deeper part of this place.
Naruto followed this chakra till he entered a huge room with a giant iron bars with strange markings on them and in the middle of this…cage… was a square sheet of paper that had the Kanji for seal on it.
"Hey Naruto-kun!"
Naruto jumped when he heard his name. He looked into the cage and right behind the bars was a woman with long red hair dressed in a grey-blue mesh zip up shirt, with khaki ninja pants.
"Well don't stand there like an idiot" the woman smiled " say hi to your mom and the giant fur ball behind me!" and on cue a pair of big red eyes and a demonic smile appeared behind the woman.
'What fur ball was she talking about? And wait…MOM!
Okay was I for exposition and grabbing interest it was a 7 out of 7.5 right, (right!) no that's probably a bit over exaggerated and I feel like that maybe it feels rushed but I dunno, ya'll tell me right? This chapter is a rough estimate of 1,700 words and I could have put more but I don't want to put in the effort for it to end up a failure, that would make me sad anyway this is rated T… for the moment… I don't know how explicit I want to get but if things start turning ugly or something someone will tell me to move up a rating right? Anyway Naruhina stuff should start next chapter! And please leave a good or constructive review for me so I won't have to kill you (because I can obviously do that)
I may or may not start previews down here it feels pretty empty ok short bits
"We all felt it! you should have killed him!"
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"So you are our new teammate? Don't hold me back"
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"Thanks, I know I can get strong enough if you support me"
Ok so guess who says those lines in the next chapter
Later…
