Hey all this is the journey coming at you with my new fic Whole again ( title will be explain in time )

Now some of you might like this fic some not so much

If you don't like it don't flame just don't read

i got this idea off of watching the series and reading the story

Eternal Sin by Radiant Demon

i have talked with him and he has agreed to let me use some parts i thought were good

Now that doesn't mean i will be using a lot of that story just bits and piece not much

Oh and before i forget this is an anthro story

oh and those worried about me abandoning this fic or putting it up for adoption don't

i already have the first 5 chaps planned out i just need to put them down in writing

Oh and BTW if you don't like Yuri then leave

Now as a finally warning if you don't like leave don't flame ( holds up sign ) " Flamer's will be shot on sight " This means you … yeah you know who i'm talking to

Ok everyone good? … you in the back. what do you mean your not good?

. Well sorry but i aint stopping ONWARDS TO GLORY!

Speaking " blah blah blah "

thinking ' blah blah blah '

Magic / overlapping voices " blah blah blah "

Disclaimer : i own nothing

Chapter 1. The Stranger

It was a bright day in ponyville.

The birds were singing.

The Critter's grazing in the fields.

There was a nice breeze coming in from the west.

We see to the east a Beautiful yellow pegasus feeding her animal friends.

There was a Rabbit. Two Squirrels. At least a dozen birds all singing in harmony on the branches above her. Finally we see a swarm of butterfly's all around her.

The Pegasus was smiling. All the while humming a little tune to herself. She was wearing a green shirt. A long blue skirt. The shirt hugged her figure of an impressive DD-cup breasts. Her hair was a which reached her lower back was pink and covered one eye. Speaking of her eye's. Her eye's where a light green that shone with happiness and joy.

She smiled to her little animal friends and spoke up. " Alright everyone feeding time. "

When these words left her mouth. The Rabbit Pounced. " Hehehehe Angle it's ok. You will get you'r food in a second. " The poor yellow pegasus should not have said that. The rabbit now identified as Angle was not having any of that. He not was bouncing all over the place. He wanted the Pegasus to put down the food and very badly at that. The pegasus decide that maybe she should put the food down quickly before angle hurt himself. As soon as she set his food down it was gone in an instant. She knew by now it was already in Angle's stomach.

" Hey Fluttershy! " The pegasus now identified as Fluttershy turned around. There she saw one of her friend's. This pony was a unicorn. She had purple fur. A long purple with pink strip mane. The mane went down to her lower back. She wore a blue strap top with a star on the front. She also wore a pair of black jeans. Fluttershy smiled at her friend. " Good morning Twilight. "

The now identified Twilight run up to her friend in a hurry. By the time she reached Fluttershy she was out of breath. She took a few moment's to regain her breath. " Have you seen Rainbow dash around? She was suppose to help me collect some flower's for Zecora. " Twilight said looking around. Trying see if she could see Rainbow dash anywhere. " Uh … No i haven't seen her. Hey Twilight what day is it? " Twilight looked at Fluttershy wondering why she asked that. " its the 31st of august why? " Realization hit Fluttershy like a train. " oh dear it's that day already? "

When these words left Fluttershy's mouth. Twilight looked confused. She was about to ask Fluttershy what she meant. When Fluttershy started to walk away. " H-Hey! Fluttershy where you going!? " Fluttershy answered her without turning back. " I know where she is …. but i have to do this alone." " What? why? " Fluttershy turned Twilight saw her something in her eye's. A determination she never seen before in her eye's " Please Twilight … i need to do this alone. " Twilight looked hesitant but agreed with a nod. Fluttershy nodded her thanks and left.

Twilight stood there for a little while. She starting to leave after about five minutes just standing there. As she started to leave. She couldn't help but wonder what was going on. ' I wonder what is going on here? maybe i should go ask the other's? ' With that she was off to talk to the other's

( Scene Change - outskirt's of ponyville )

We are a few miles away from Ponyville. We see a cloaked figure walking a dirt road. A path that headed to Ponyville. The Stranger's appearance was covered in a brown full body cloak. Strapped to his back was a completely Wrapped in cloth sword as long as he was tall. he stopped when he caught sight of ponyville. ' So that is ponyville huh? it's nice and quiet here. Truly wonderful. ' The stranger started walking again while thinking to himself ' i really hope she don't aim lower then the belt. ' and with that he continued down the road.

( 10 minutes later - edge of ponyville )

We see our stranger walking into ponyville. He was looking Left and right looking for his target. He could not see here anywhere. As he walked along he could not help but fall in love with this place. The ponies here were so nice. The vegetation looked beautiful even more so then it was in Canterlot. He would have loved to group up here But …. No matter what he would never trade his place of birth. He shook his head he was getting distracted. He couldn't afford that right now not until he found her. The first thing to do was to find out everything he could about his target's location. So he went over to a stand that sell's apple's. ' I guess i'll try here first. ' He thought as he went up to the stall. " Howdy partner! " …. ok that voice all of a sudden might of scared the shit out of him. ' How did she sneak up on me? No one has ever done that! ' He turned around to be greeted by the sight of and earth pony.

The earth pony was female. She was orange with a blonde mane. The mane went down to her shoulder's. She was wearing Tight jeans and a dark green top. She wore a brown jacket on top of that and a cowboy hat on her head. She had what looked like Emerald green eye's and an infectious smile. " howdy my name's Applejack. " The stranger just stared at her. " Aren't you gonna intrude yourself? " Applejack asked. A little annoyed that he didn't give his name. He looked up to the sky and said. " Not really. " To which prompted a face vault. Applejack got back up and dusted her self off. " Well what can i help you with? " The Stranger looked at her and she could tell he was being serious.

" I'm looking for someone. " When he said this she became completely serious. " Who is it you are looking for? " He looked around seeing if he could spot her again. " im looking for a blue pegasus. " This Made Applejack tense. She started to think if it could be who she thought it was? " I'm going to need a name pal " " i thought i said i didn't want to say my name? " Que another face vault. " NOT your's! " She stated impatiently. " Ok Ok no need to bite my head off. " There was something about this guy that really annoyed her. Almost like it was Rainbow dash she was talking to. " i'm looking for the one known as … rainbow dash. " When he said this her heart stopped. ' What does this guy want with her? whatever it is i don't think it will be good. ' She thought eyeing his sword ( not that sword you pervs! don't deny it you know who you are! )

" I have never heard of her. " As she lied through her teeth. The stranger knew she was lying but didn't call her out on it. " Hmm i see well thank you for your time. " With that he started to leave. ' Hehehe wow she has some great friend's. Lying straight throughout there teeth like that. now where should i search …. if there's anything i know about her it's that she love's to spend time in secluded area's …. i think i know just the one around here.' With that he was off.

As he was leaving Applejack was eyeing him. She didn't like that he was here to. ( in her mind ) ' see ' her. ' i got to go tell the other's. ' She put up a closed sign and put away her apple's. Then she left to find the other's.

( Scene Change - With Twilight )

As she was walking along the dirt road back to ponyville. Twilight kept trying to figure out whats was wrong with Rainbow dash? ' Hmm maybe i'm over thinking this … maybe she is just sick? Hmmm no rainbow dash wouldn't let something like a sickness from doing stuff. ' As these thoughs raced in her head. She didn't realize she was being followed by a familiar pink pony until.

" HEY TWILIGHT! " " AAAAAAAAHHH! " We now find a pink pony laughing her ass off. Above her a Shaking Twilight cling's to a branch. She slowly turns her head and glares at the laughing pink pony.

" Pinkie Pie! " When The now identified Pinkie Pie heard the Dangerous voice. She immediately straightened up.

Pinkie pie was a pink fur pony. She had Hair that was WAY puffy. She had a blue stripped shirt on. She also had a pair of skin thigh jeans on. Her eye's were Sky blue. Last but not least. She almost always had a huge smile on her face.

" What's up Twilight? " Twilight seeing she had Pinkie's attention asked the one question on her mind. " Hey Pinkie do you know if something is wrong with Rainbow dash? When i mentioned the day to Fluttershy. She started to act all weird saying she needed to do this alone. Why is today so important to those two to not tell us? " When she finished she looked at pinkie and saw something she never thought she'd see. She saw a horror stricken Pinkie.

" T-T-Twilight what day is it? "

" August 31st why? " Pinkie looked around in Panic " Not good not good not good. " She was interrupted by Twilight " PINKIE! what is so horrible? "

" Ummm well .. uh … Let's go to Rarity. She can explain it better then i can. " and with that she took off. With Twilight right behind her. They were off to see Rarity.

( Quick Scene Change - with Stranger )

' Damn It! not here either. Where could she be? ' The stranger was getting really mad now he looked everywhere for her. There was only one more place to look left. The Everfree forest.

' Damn i really don't want to go in there. I get lost like 98% of the time. ' So the stranger Trudged on. He hated this place so much.

( Scene change - rarity's Boutique )

As both Pinkie and Twilight ran into the Boutique. They stopped only to catch their breath from all that running. Pinkie Pie was the first to recover. " RARITY! where are you!? "

* CRASH *

At the sound of Crashing Pinkie and Twilight headed into the back. What they found was at least 20 boxes full of Sowing things on top of a dizzy Rarity. Twilight responded first " Rarity are you ok? " Rarity shaking off the dizziness Rarity sat up. She then Turned to pinkie and glared. " PINKIE! What could be so important that you had to yell! "

Rarity a white Unicorn with a purple mane. Her mane came down to just below her shoulder's. She wore horizontal strip dress pants. She had a coat that mated her pants. She finally had a white shirt with purple collar. The shirt she wore showed off a ….. generous amount of her D-cup bust

Pinkie looked a little scared when Rarity got like this. " R-r-rarity don't you know what day it is? " Rarity just looked at her confused. " Uh… tuesday? " Que face vault. " No it's August 31st! " When Pinkie said these words Understanding entered Rarity's eye's " Hmmm no wonder i haven't heard rainbow dash all day. " At these word's. Twilight had enough. " WILL SOMEBODY TELL ME WHAT'S SO SPECIAL ABOUT TODAY!? " PInkie and Rarity both filched at the level of voice she was using. Rarity turned back to Pinkie.

" You didn't tell her? " Pinkie had the decency to look sheepishly. " Well that's why i brought her to you. You can explain it better then i can. " Rarity gave Pinkie a look before nodding. She turned back to Twilight. " Twilight Today is a should be a happy day for Rainbow dash. It is not thought. " As Rarity said this Twilight's brain went into over drive. ' What could it be? ' She was broken out of he thought's by Rarity. " Twilight today it Rainbow dash's birthday. "

Twilight looked shocked. " W-WHAT!? Then why is it a bad day? she should be out here celebrating! " Rarity Spoke again. " she doesn't want to celebrate …. not on this day at least. " Twilight couldn't help but wonder out loud. " But why is this such a bad day? " Rarity was unsure if she should reveal this …. but she couldn't keep this away from Twilight. She need to tell her so she could better understand Rainbow dash.

" You see Twilight …. Rainbow dash doesn't like this day …. cause it reminds her of the parent's she never had. " When these words left her mouth. Twilight went into a state of shock. " w-w-w-What? What do you mean you Never had any parent's? " Rarity took a deep breath breath before continuing " Twilight Rainbow dash is an orphan. That's why she doesn't like this day. " Twilight looked like she wanted to talk some more. that would have to wait though.

* SLAM *

" Girl's where are ya!? " Said a frantic voice they all recognized. " Where in the back Applejack. " said Twilight. " HEY that rhymes! " " Not now pinkie! " As rarity was scolding Pinkie about timing. Applejack came rushing into the back. She was completely out of breath from all the running. " we …. go … hel… " She couldn't talk she was so out of breath. " Applejack take a deep breath honey and then begin. " said Rarity trying to understand what Applejack just said.

Applejack did just that. " We got to go find Rainbow dash girls! There is someone here looking for her. I don't think he has good intention's. " when she said this the other's tensed and looked worried. " OK here's what we will do. Apple jack you take the south half of Ponyville. Pinkie the east. Rarity the west and ill take north. " Twilight got a nod from the other three. " ok let's move out we got to find her quick." With that they were off.

( Time Skip 1 hour later - XXX mean going back and forth between Stranger and girls )

The Girl's had been searching for an hour. They looked everywhere and still couldn't find her.

" What are we gonna do? She aint nowhere in Ponyville. " said a little frantic Applejack

" Calm down we have to think. She has got to be here somewhere. " Said Rarity worried for her friend

" But where could she be? " asked Pinkie joining the conversation

" I think i know. " said Twilight thinking of one place.

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" DAMN IT! " This was heard in the Everfree forest. We find our Stranger standing in a clearing surrounded by corpses. At least 3 dozen corpses.

" Damn Timberwolves. I don't have time for this! " He said this as he cut down the last timber wolf.

* Sigh * " I have looked every where ….. well but one place …. I just wish i would never have had to go back there. "

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" The one place she could have gone is… "

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" The place i never wanted to go to again …. "

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" The castle in the everfree forest. "

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The other three ponies were in shock, " w-w-WHAT!? you think she went there? …. By herself? " this came from Rarity

" It's the only place we haven't checked out yet. " Pointed out Twilight. " So we set out now. "

" UGH! I hate that forest! " this came from Applejack.

" I do to … But at least it is to help a friend. " this strangely enough came from Pinkie Pie.

" Alright girls it will take us 20 minutes to reach the castle. Let's move out! " With that they were off to the Everfree Castle.

( Scene change - Everfree castle 18 minutes later - the stranger )

There it was the one place he never wanted to return to. " Everfree castle ….. you bring to many memories …. some good some bad. "

The stranger was standing in front of the main doors. He noticed that the door's were open. He started to walk forward. He got to the door and was about to go in. He then felt a shiver go down his spine.

' something tells me i should not go in. ' He thought about it for a second. Then he shrugged off the feeling and pushed the door open. It was dusty as hell in here. That was also a good thing for he saw hoof prints on the floor many going straight and into the tower's …. while two sets went to the right an into the garden.

' Hm It seems that she is not alone. ' with those thoughts done he followed the one's into the garden.

The garden was ' to say the least ' over run. The grass was almost to his knee's. ' I wonder why the grass is not taller. ' The columns ( Spell check? ) were covered in vines that you couldn't see them. The great tree was somehow still the same as the day he last saw it. At least 1 hundred feet high The garden was at least two hundred by two hundred. All in all its was still a beautiful place.

' Now then where are you? ' As he finished these thought's he heard something. ' Is that? Is that moaning? … OH hell no! ' he looked around for the source of moaning. He heard it coming from behind the great tree. He walked over to the great tree. and walked around it. What was thee had shocked him.

There siting on the ground were two mares. One was sitting on the other's lap. The one sitting on the other's was topless. She was only wearing a bra. The one being sat on had her left hand on the other's ass. She had her right hand groping one of her breast's. Both mare's were making out.

' W-what the hell? ' He saw both mares stop and look over at him. An awkward silence followed after that.

…..

…..

…..

" Awkward. " The stranger broke the Silence. A second later the mare being sat on exploded.

" DAMN YOU! how dare you interrupt my time with Fluttershy! " Said The that was being sat on. The other had gotten off to allow her to stand. The one being sat on was a pegasus. She had blue fur and rainbow colored mane. The mane came down to her shoulder's. She was wearing skin tight pants that hugged her figure. The pants came down to her calf's. She had a no sleeve jacket. The jacket was blue and white. The white part starting just above her breasts. Then going around them and down to her stomach. On each of her arms was fighter's tape. They started above her bicep's and ended to just bellow her elbow.

This was his target. " Rainbow Dash " The now identified Rainbow Dash tensed when she heard him. " How do you know my name? "

The Stranger just stood there. " ANSWER ME! " She didn't know why but for some reason. She was really mad at this guy. Not just interrupting her time with a now fully clothed and blushing Fluttershy. She felt like for some reason she should just deck this guy.

The stranger opened his mouth to talk. Then he heard it.

" TRA LOK SHO " (1)

With that the stranger was set flying through the air and into the side of the castle. He hit two Columns on the way. A huge dust cloud formed upon impact.

" Rainbow dash! Fluttershy! " The two ponies turned. They see their friends rushing to help them. " You two ok? " This coming from Applejack.

" yeah were fine. " Rainbow dash was the one to respond. " What is going on? " They all looked at her. " we were hoping you could tell us. He is here for you after all. "

She shook her head. " No i don't know at all. " At this point Pinkie Pie cut in. " Who care's we got him! " said Pinkie The other's nodding in agreement. Then they all heard something than made them freeze.

" Hehehehehe you thought that weak attack would stop me? " They all turned to the sound of the voice. The dust cloud had settled. They saw the stranger standing there like nothing had hit him.

" W-What!? " Twilight asked seeing him brush of her attack. " How? I put a lot of power behind that attack! " The strange just chuckled. " S-e-c-r-e-t. " At this Twilight fumed.

" Alright girls lets work together and take him down. " The other's nodded to what Twilight had said. All except Fluttershy since she wasn't really a fighter.

Both sides waited for the other to move. It was Applejack who moved first. She grabbed her rope and rushed him. He just stood there and let the rope rap around him. What he didn't expect was for a pink Blur to appear in-front of him and give strong drop kick to the gut. He went flying back from it but stopped do to the rope. He was pulled in and given an uppercut to the jaw by applejack. The hit sent him flying face first right into the waiting feet of Rainbow dash. He hit the ground hard enough to make a crater. As he was getting up her heard something.

" SOLK ME'TIRE " (2)

He saw what looked like purple Crystal's come at him at high speed. When they hit a cloud of smoke formed. To finish it off Rarity levitated the columns. That had been knocked down earlier over to just above him. She then proceeded slammed them down upon him. The columns mast have weighed at least three hundred pounds each.

" Did we get him? " asked Applejack. There was no movement from inside the dust cloud

The other's thinking they beat him let down their guards ….. big mistake. " You think that was enough to beat me? " When these words were done. There was a massive pull on the rope still in Applejack's hand. She went flying along with it. She let go of the rope … but at a very bad time. As she went flying she didn't realize she was heading towards a column. Lucky just before she hit a Magic surrounded her and kept her from being hurt. The strange thing though was it was any color she had seen before. She shook her head and got focused back on the fight.

They saw the stranger climb out of the crater. He looked like he didn't like he was even a little hurt. " It will take a lot more then that to hurt me. " They Seethed at this. He was playing with them? Rainbow dash moved over to Twilight. She leaned over to her to whisper. " Hey Twilight what do you think? Should we use the Elements? " Twilight looked at her. ' What should we do? Should we? …. i think the elements might be our only hope. ' She turned to the other. " ok girl's let use the Element's. " The other girl's looked at her for a second before all nodding there heads. They each touched there neck line. When they did on each of their necks appeared a necklace. All except Twilight a crown formed on her head. On Fluttershy a golden necklace a crystal butterfly appeared. On Applejack's was an apple. On Rainbow dash's was a red lightning bolt. On Rarity's appeared a purple diamond. On Pinkie pie's was a blue ballon. Twilight's tiara had a six pointed star on top of it. ( the rest is to hard to explain for it. ) There was a huge build of magic. The stranger feeling the amount of magic building reached for his back.

There was a flash and a rainbow of magic came flying at the stranger. He grabbed the blade on his back. When the magic reached him he pulled the blade in front of him and did something that shocked the now tired girls.

He deflected their magic almost like it was nothing. Now though they could see his blade. It was a long dark cross blade. The blade was completely black. " I never though you would make me draw yoru. " (3) The girls were in shock. Someone had beaten the Element's of harmony? Twilight was panicking ' He beat the Element's? … We have no hope against him. ' As she was having these thought's. The stranger put away his blade. This confused the mares paying attention. Rainbow dash nudged Twilight. When Twilight looked up and saw what the other's did. ' why did he put his blade away? ' He just stood there. " i don't need this. " When he said this Rainbow dash looked like she was going to kill someone.

" You … You dare not take me seriously!? How dare you! " Rainbow dash exploded she took off in a burst of speed. Everyone was shocked. The girl's cause they had never seen her move this fast. The stranger was shocked cause he knew exactly what was happening. ' I didn't think this would happen so soon. ' (4) With those thought's done she was already upon him.

The stranger felt a jaw Shattering right hook hit him. then he took off flying.

When the hit landed something shiny fell off the stranger. While everyone was cheering thinking Rainbow dash beat the guy. Rainbow dash went over to check what he dropped. She picked it up to see it was Half a necklace. When she saw it she felt it was familiar. Then it hit her. She reached into her shirt and pulled out a half of a necklace. ' No it couldn't be. '

" W-what? " The other's came over to see her. " Hey Rainbow dash what do ya got there? " Said Applejack looking over her shoulder. Rainbow dash turned around. They saw she had the two piece's of a necklace.

" What is that Rainbow dash? " Twilight asked as Rainbow dash stared to shake. Rainbow dash looked up at them then back down at the pieces. She brought the two piece's closer and closer together.

Closer

Closer

Closer

When they finally touched each other. They fit together perfectly. They heard a noise and turned. The stranger was back up. " i would like my piece back now. If you would be so kind. " Rainbow dash just closed her hand.

" Where did you get this? " She asked in a strained voice. The stranger didn't answer. " I said WHERE DID YOU FUCKING GET THIS!? " She screamed at him. " * Sigh * I have always had it Rainbow dash. " she shook her head at " Th-that can't be. " She looked at him. she were his eyes " Who … are you? How do you know my name?" The stranger heaves a huge sigh then grab's his cloak and throws it off. What they saw shocked them.

( its to hard to describe what he is wearing so think Alucard from hellsing when they are in rio with alucard's hat but shorter rim and finally hawkeye mihawk's coat )

The stranger was a pegasus with blue fur. He had a blond mane that went down to his shoulder blade's. He had 3 scars on each cheek. His eye's where different to say the least. The right eye was a bluer then the sky blue. The left eye was the same purple as rainbow dash. " My name Rainbow dash is Naruto Uzumaki Silverwind. (5) The reason i now your names. I am the one that gave it to you. " when these words left his mouth everyone stood in shock.

" F-Father? " He nodded

When he nodded he was tackled by her. She reared her hand back and gave him a hard right hook. She did this five more times before she spoke again. " Why? … Why did you leave me at an orphanage? Where were you? Didn't you and mom love me? " she said as she looked up at him. He could see she was very close to crying. " Me and your mother loved you very much. I had to for your own protection. " When he said this she got even madder. " What do you mean Protection? " " I mean i had to protect you from all my enemies. If they found out you were my Daughter. They would stop at nothing to see you dead. I made a lot of enemies during the great griffon pony war. not to mention all my other enemies. … you know no matter what. I made sure you had a good life. Even though it was from the dark. Did anyone tell you who put you threw flying school? " When he said this she shook her head no. " They only told me it was a mysterious benefactor. " He nodded to this. " good they kept there word. No matter what. I made sure to do things for you from the dark. All those present's on your birthday. Your flight schooling. ….. Look i know your mad … I know it will be a very long time. That you might not ever forgive me. I swear that i was only trying to make you happy. Me and your mother saw how happy you were. We saw that you had so many friends. We waited until you were strong enough to defend yourself from our enemies. Then we would take you back. This way you could defend your self. Until then we set up everything. We paid off your house. we bought you birthday present's everything. "

" so that was all you? " Asked Rainbow dash still sad and mad at her parent's " yes it was us … my favorite birthday present was that stuffed fox we got you. I remember you called him mister huggykins " They both Hheard some snickering behind them. " mister huggykins? " This came from Applejack " SHUT UP! " said a very embarrassed Rainbow dash. " hehehe …. Look rainbow dash we never ment to hurt you… i know we did but i only wanted you to be safe. The only other reason we didn't keep you is cause of the massive Security breach. " They all looked at him Confused. " security breach? " This came from Twilight " I will get to that later …. First Rainbow dash can you get off me? " She saw she was still sitting on him so she stood up. She saw a bruise was starting to form on his cheek. " S-Sorry. " He looked towards her. " For what? " " The bruise " " Ah don't be i kinda deserved it. Don't you think? Besides it an easy fix. " As he finished that sentence. His hand ignited in blue magic. He brought his hand to his cheek and healed the bruise. The other's were shocked. " WAIT! your a Pegasus how can you use magic? " It was Twilight who asked this. " Pegasus? … oh right the hat. " Naruto reached up to his head and took off his hat.

They were all shocked. More so then they had been all night. There on his head was a horn …. This was an Alicorn. " H-h-h-how? Princess Celestia and Luna are the only Alicorn's in existence! " He looked a Twilight. " I will explain everything later. For now… " " WAIT! " He turned to Rainbow dash. " How am i your daughter? I'm not an Alicorn! " He smiled at this. " Or are you? " He reached up to her head. When his hand laid down on her head. There was a flash of light. When it cleared everyone was about to have a heart attack. There on her head was a horn. " how? " " It's simple to make sure no one made the connection. I made a power illusion around your horn. Then sealed your magic. " At this point it looked like everyone was about to faint.

' I hope she take's this good…. This will be the biggest shock. I just hope she takes it ok. Although she will not like being knowing that she knew her mother all this time and her mother did nothing to contact her….. Although she took it pretty well with me. ' (6) He cleared his throat getting their attention. " Ok girls listen up. This will probably be the most shocking thing of all tonight. " Rainbow dash scoffed. " What could be more shocking then fiddling out my Father is alive. That he is an Alicorn, AND that i am an Alicorn as well? " He Chuckled nervously " finding out who your mother is. "

She straightened at this. She was dying to know who her mother was. " Well there is no easy way to say this so ill just say it. Rainbow dash … your mother is my lover … Celestia. "

Silence … Then all the girls fainted.

" well thats went pretty well "

( Five minutes later )

The girls started to wake up " Ugh what hit me? " Said Rarity

" I feel like i've been hit with a baking sheet. " This came from Pinkie Pie

Rainbow dash was the last one up " Ugh it must have all been a dream. "

* You who whistle *

They all turned to find Naruto. Siting there watching them " So it wasn't a dream? "

" Yeah …. tell you what you all go home …. Rainbow dash when you have gotten some rest. When you want to talk ill be at Raging River inn alright? " She nodded to him and held out her hand. The hand with the necklace piece in it. He shook his head. " Keep it …. It's tradition to pass that necklace onto the next generation. " She looked unsure but nodded. They turned and started to walk away. " Oh and Rainbow dash, Fluttershy Sorry about walking in on your make-out session earlier. " Every pony froze at this. The other 4 mare's looked at him. Then at the two caught and very embarrassed Pegasus. " MAKE-OUT SESSION!? " The other mare were starting to hound the two for question's. Rainbow dash shot her father and angry look. " What i didn't know that you hand't told them. " said a sheepish looking Naruto. With that Naruto vanished teleporting away to his inn.

END

So what you guys think …. and remember no flaming

1 - think Ki blast from dragon ball z

2 - Arcane Missle from world of warcraft

3 - Hawkeye Mihawk's blade

4 - Her magic boosted her speed

5 - i wanted to add a name to it

6 - he thought she was going to take it a lot worse

The reason fight was so short was cause he just to powerful for them right now. Now everything i didn't explain in this chap will be explained in next one

Alright ill see you all next tim