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I decided to go through and fix some of my mistakes sorry if I don't catch them all
The fire that stretched high in the dark starless sky provided the only light. The only sound that covered the breaking of wood and the sound of the new explosions each time the fire came across some dangerous liquid or flammable solid was the sound of the screaming and crying children. An old building was the scene of all this mayhem.
Outside many students where lined up most where scared out of there minds others shaking or crying. The teachers were running around and counting heads then running back and counting again trying to calm everyone down. Most of the younger students were clinging to the older ones who were in return holding just as tight back. Some had blankets wrapped around them others with just their pajamas on these where the ones who didn't even have time to slip on shoes.
Four students stood out from the others, they were calm and listening to the teachers panic trying to help keep some sense of order. The two guys where holding the girls to keep all of them some what warm, but one thing even shook them. The horrible sign that had finally come over the old building.
"The dark mark," a voice screeched. The crowd became even more unhinged. Two of the teens had to listen even harder to hear the headmistress beside them talking to a teacher in hushed whispers.
" There are still thirteen first and second year boys that are unaccounted for." Without a second thought one of the girls took off running inside the school followed by one of the guys. Teachers tried to grab them but it was of no use.
"Kristen, Kristen its to dangerous." The guy said grabbing her by the wrist as they entered the school.
" Then you go back Garrett," but he didn't he took off after her in the ever weakening structure looking for the missing boys. Then loud yells for help reached their ears.
" The potions room." They yelled in unison and took off the smoke making it harder to breathe and see with each passing second. Their screams of aguamenti did nothing for the water evaporated right as it was leaving their wands the fire was getting to hot they didn't have much time left. Though even if it wasn't this hot it probably still wouldn't have worked, this was a dark magical fire they where dealing with.
The potions room was down in the cellar and the fire had already took this room in its hold. Potions every where were heating up and exploding against the metal cabinets and desk that lined the room. There in the farthest corner sat seven very terrified boys cowering.
"There they are." Kristen yelled taking off towards them when there was a loud crack then two beams fell blocking her and the boys from Garrett. " Try moving them. I'm going to get the boys." The whole lot of them were screaming and shaking with tear streaks staining their faces." We have to go now come on." They didn't budge so she did the only thing she could carry them over to the gap that Garrett had created. She grabbed the first one and put him through five others followed she didn't realize that the others where there. " Here take this one I have to go back and get the others," but as she turned around she bumped into all of them or so she thought. Counting each one she only counted five then the first boy made six.
"Kristen come on I don't know how much longer the buildings going to last."
"Take them back there is still one here." By the time she made her way back to the potions lab the support beams were falling, but the little boy was underneath a steel table shaking. " It's going to be okay we're going to get out of here."
"I'm scared of fire it burned down my house and with my dad and dog still inside. It was like this one" The small innocent voice said.
" I know Kevin but we all have to fight our fears."
"What fears do you have?" He was shocked that someone as strong as her had anything to fear. She knew that precious time was ticking by but she also knew this was the only way he'd come.
" I'm terrified of water. When I was six my step mom took all of us to the beach to visit with some of her family. Well when we were in the ocean and one of the cousins thought it'd be funny to drag me by the ankles under water and hold me down. By the time he finally let me up I was barely conscience and they were all just laughing at me except my one step-brother Peter who was trying to help me. The only reason that he did let go, I found out later, was that I must have done some accidental magic and burned his hands. So are you ready to go."
"Yes." He still sounded terrified but who wouldn't. As they made their way out one of the support beams came crashing down. Kristen blocked Kevin from getting hit by pushing him out of the way, but because of it the beam ended up hitting her in the head and falling on her wrist as she slipped into darkness.
Luckily after Garrett took the others out he came back just in time to hear Kevin screaming for help. Once he got through the opening Kevin and himself moved the heave beam and carried her out. Once they got outside they were immediately bombarded with people. Garrett set her down far away from the school where the nurse started to try and heal her and he turned to go get the other boys when the structure completely collapsed in on itself.
By the nest day the news was everywhere in the magical world and at a small house in England called The Burrow a red-haired man put down the Daily Prophet that had on the front page a picture of two soot covered teenagers with the title:
'TEEN HEROS SAVE SEVEN'
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