Hello again. So I guess you will be seeing a lot of my stories 'cause I just love writing. But I was told by a user (who shall remain unnamed) that asking to review is displeasing. Is it? I'm not sure. Like I said I'm a newbie. I'm open to constructive criticism. Soul?Maka? Disclaimer?
Maka&Soul: Angel Evans Melody does NOT own soul eater. Anime or manga.
Me: thanks guys lets get to it then.
Maka P.O.V
Soul and I were walking down the street. His bike broke down and we had no other way to school. He was complaining that cool guys didn't NEED to go to school. I had it up to there, even if he was my boyfriend, he was starting to irate me.
"Soul come on stop complaining." I said putting on my pouting face .
"Aw come on Maka," he said pulling me close to him "can't I complains little?" Oh my death wow, he is so, perfect.
"Well..."
"Mama!" Mama? What the? I turned to see a teenage girl. Probably no older than the age of 13. She had very snow white hair that fell down her back In a loose braid. She had forest green eyes. She really looked like someone I knew.
"Did you just call me 'mama'?" I asked the teenage girl.
"Erm...no I said 'Maka' it's a very common mistake. "But I was wondering could you take me to see lord Death, I really need to talk to him and I'm new here."
"Ya of course. By the way what's your name?" I asked.
"Mira." She smiled.
'Oh Mira! What's cute name! How adorable! That's the kind of name I would name my kid, it's actually perfect!' I thought with glee.
"Well lets go then!" Giggled Mira "lets go!" She took the hands of Soul and I and dragged us all the way to school.
When we got there, with Mira walking between us smiling, giggling and telling little jokes. While walking down the hall, whispers filled the hall.
"Oh wow, she looks like them."
"She has Maka's eyes and Soul's hair, oh!"
"Do you think she has Soul's teeth?" I turned super red, as I looked ver it seemed so did Soul. I reached over and took his hand, I felt him relax a little.
Finally we reached the huge door that marked Lord Death's room.
"Here we are, we have to go now, are you ok on your own?" I asked
"Um,actually you guys need...I mean should come with me, please?" Mira begged. I don't really think I cold resist her, so when the door opened and Mira walked in, I dragged Soul with me.
"Why does she look so familiar?" Asked Soul, I gave him my biggest 'duh' face.
"Because she looks like you and me baka!" I stage whispered.
"Oh man," his face blanched "you're right..."
We stopped at the platform were we saw the goofy mask of lord Death.
"Hey-hey wazzup? Mira? What are you doing here? You should be back home." Lord Death stated in his goofy high pitched voice.
"Um, ya that's the thing, we're kinda in trouble. He...he's finally awakening. I needed to come here to kill him before it gets worse." Mira answered
"And your meister?"
"He's coming around tomorrow or Wednesday."
"Ya-ya, and your parents? How are they?"
"Heh, dad's okay, he's worried that I might get hurt, but that's doubtful and mama,well, she's keeping papa in line with her chops." She smiled and gave a wink. Whoa wait chops? Like my MAKA chops?
"Why don't you talk to your mom and dad about this situation. I think they will wanna know, you know?" Asked Lord Death.
"Your right," sighed Mira. She turned on her heel to face us and took a deep breath.
"Maka Albarn, Soul 'Eater' Evans, i'm your daughter, Mira Kami Evans. From the future."
Ok that's chapter one done, I want to make a second one. But I would like another opinion, so how about it?
Soul and Maka: we have a kid?! O_o
me: ha yep! Enjoy parenthood!
*SMASH*
Soul and Maka: MIRA!
Mira: oops, sorry mama, papa...
me: uh ya *steps outside closes door* so, I'll probably update,but that's for you to decide. Thanks much!
