Chaos Revised

I do not own Bleach or Naruto or any of the characters or storylines used during the anime. I do own Rin Zaiaku and Kaosu Shouken , the changes to any of the main storylines, and the unique powers that any of my oc have or original characters.

Chapter 1: Request for Future Aid from the Past

A young man worriedly looks down at a piece of parchment scroll sitting on top of his desk that he has been reading and re-reading for the last few hours. "I think that this scroll will do the trick and now all I have to do . . .," the blonde started before a white spikey haired older man jumped through the luckily opened window onto the floor in front of the young man's desk.

"Ah ha, I knew that I would probable find you here, Minato! What could possibly be so damn important that it would keep you away from your very beautiful, very emotional pregnant wife?" the strange man exclaimed shaking Minato out of his stupor.

"Oh it's you, ero-sensei! I am doing some special work that will hopefully help out when the time comes for Kushina to give birth to our son here in a few days, especially considering her other 'condition' that could cause a lot of damage to the village if something was to go wrong while she is giving birth!" Minato proclaimed while giving his former sensei a look to try and make sure that he understood not to go into too much detail about what this 'condition' was considering what could happen if too many people found out about it.

"Oh, that condition! But what could that parchment scroll have to do with anything that could possible help if something went wrong during Kushina giving birth, I mean it looks like the only person that has written on it was you?" the older man went on.

"Well let me answer that question with a question of my own. Do you remember telling me and the rest of the team about the connection between the summons had with the place known as the Soul Society?" he asked trying to look at the expression on his sensei's face to see if he could figure out what he was getting at.

"Yeah, the summons are some of the only connections between this world and the soul society, or the place that the people rest after they died. They can travel from their land to either world and carry messages between them, but only if the person had a strong enough connection to them to get them to cooperate with such a request. But still what does this have to do with anything that we are talking about, especially Kushina's condition?" Jiraiya asked after finishing where his former student started.

"Well, what do you remember that was special about the way that Kaosu and Rin died? I mean really think about it!" Minato told his sensei after laying down the foundation for him to figure out exactly this conversation was going.

"Of course I remember what happened to Kaosu and Rin, especially Kaosu considering the only reason that we are still alive today is because he sacrificed his life so that we could get away from the Kyuubi no Youko on that faithful day that we were returning to Konohagure. While I don't know any specifics about what happened to Rin while she was on that solo mission from the Hidden Cloud, but from what I heard it had to do with the . . . Oh!" Jiraiya suddenly exclaimed out loud after figuring out where his student was going with the conversation.

"Exactly! I was asking permission from the Head-Captain in charge of the Gotei 13 to allow the two of them to travel back to the Land of Fire to help during Kushina's final hours of her pregnancy. Who better than those two to face off against the Kyuubi no Youko, especially considering the two of them have fought against two separate bijuus on their own? I think that the experience gained from fighting against the bijuus, especially considering that Kaosu fought against the Kyuubi no Youko before he died, and whatever training that they may have received during their time in the Soul Society Academy will help us put an end to the thread of the Kyuubi no Youko, if not forever until we can figure out a better strategy! Minato explained to his sensei before going through a series of handsigns that allowed him to perform the 'Kuchiyose no Jutsu' to summon a medium-sized toad that carried a pair of swords in a x-pattern on his back.

"What can I do for you, Minato-sama? Oh, hey there Jiraiya!" the toad called out while saluting to the Fourth Hokage and acknowledge the toad sennin that stood behind him.

"Gamikichi, I need you to take this message scroll to the Head-Captain of the Gotei 13! This is really important you need to make sure that if he agrees to the request on this scroll that you take back the people that he will send back to the Land of Fire!" Minato explained the situation to the younger son of Gamabunta.

"So I need to make sure that if he agrees to the request that they have a way to get the people that you need to be sent here, here! Does that mean that I need to wait for the answer before coming back here?" the toad asked.

"Yes! We need to make sure that whoever has to make this decision, either just the Head-Captain or a council, know that this request needs to be answered as quickly as possible!" Jiraiya threw in after noticing that all Minato did to answer his question was to nod.

"Ok, but I need to make a stop in the Land of Toads to make sure I know exactly where the Head-Captain resides within the Seireitei!" Gamakichi called out before disappearing within a puff of smoke back to his home.

"Well now that problem is settled, I think that it is time for us to go check on Kushina and Tsunade at home and make sure that no serious property damage has been done to our house or any of the neighbors considering the temper that the two of them have, especially with what kind of mood swings Kushina has been going through since the start of her pregnancy!" Minato exclaimed before standing up from his desk and walking out of the office with Jiraiya in tow.

As soon as Jiraiya and Minato left the office, a figure stepped out of the shadows to stand near the desk that Minato just left. "So the Fourth Hokage has started making plans to put a stop to the Kyuubi no Youko from being released during his wife's pregnancy, but no matter who is sent from the Soul Society there is no one that can put a stop to my plans for the future destruction of Konohagure! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!" the figure proclaimed with an evil laugh that seemed to last a few seconds after he disappeared in a swirl of leaves.


Gamikichi arrived back in the Land of Toads a few minutes after leaving the Fourth Hokage's office with the mission scroll. He immediately headed toward where he knew that his father and the toad council would be at this time of day. Let me think where exactly would I have to go inside of the Seireitei to find the First Divison Barracks where I pretty sure that the Head-Captain is located . . . Oh well I think that I will just go to the Toad Council Area where my dad should be and make sure that I know exactly where I am supposed to go! That reminds me I might need permission to bring two other toads with me just in case I need to bring all three of the soul reapers that are requested at the same time, especially considering I have to make two stops because I am sure that my father will want to talk to Kaosu and Rin again, Gamikichi thought as he spend up to make it to where the toad council usually meet to get permission to use the secret path that most toads use to travel to the soul society.


Four combatants stood in a barren area surrounded by sparse trees and feudal Japanese style buildings, each of the warriors had katana style samurai sword that was either placed on their back or by their sides. Two of the warriors had the appearance of being twins, or to be more specific perfect clones of each other down to the perfect detail, with both having a buzzcut style haircut, deep light blue eyes, and being about 5'9" in height. They were dressed in dark pants with a tribal style fox detail on both sides, a dark blue sleeveless t-shirt that had a spiral design in the shape of a leaf on it, visible mesh sleeves that could be seen from underneath the shirt, fingerless gloves, and many pouches that hung in various places along their body. The only female of the group had long, wavy, blonde hair with dark highlight running throughout, cerulean eyes, and about 5'3" in height. She wore a similar outfit to the twins except she didn't have any mesh underneath her t-shirt, but had her arms wrapped up to her elbows and a tan trench coat that went down to her waist. The final male in the group had brown eyes and long, crimson hair, which was kept in a high ponytail and the parts of his body that you could make out, had tribal tattoos. He wore the traditional clothes of a shinigami outfit, which include some headgear that covered most of his forehead. "So what, if any, rules are we going to have to follow during this little battle, Kaosu?" the blonde woman asked one of the twins.

"I say that we battle until either one team gives up or is unable to continue, does that work for the both of you!" he answered back, only to receive a nod of the head of acknowledgement, and then went into a standard battle stance with both hands in front of him to be able to counterattack quickly. He then looked at his twin next to him and nodded his head to indicate that he can go ahead and make his move, which he immediately did by forming several handsigns for the 'Yami: Shadowsneak Jutsu!' As soon as Kaosu noticed that his twin finished the handsigns, he charged forward toward the redheaded man and the blonde woman drawing his sword in the process. The redheaded man drew his sword right before Kaosu could slash him with the initial attack; the two men started exchanging slashes and thrusts against each other, until the woman decided to stop being just an observer in this battle and fired off a slash of pure energy. Kaosu noticed the bright bluish-green flash a second before it was coming toward him and his opponent, he immediately began to form handsigns for the 'Yami: Shadowbreak Jutsu!' to cover his sword with a shadow crescent slash of his own (similar to Ichigo's main attack except for it being completely black with no other colors) to try and overpower her attack. The two continued to compete against each other until the woman gave a signal for the redhead to charge Kaosu since he was preoccupied with her attack, but he never got a chance because the entire time that Kaosu was attacking the duo his twin was setting up his jutsu that he had started. The attack moved across the ground looking exactly like a normal shadow until it made contact with the redhead's feet and then he stopped his charged completely unable to move.

"Damn it, I completely forgot about him starting that jutsu and now I stuck! Sorry Rin, but it looks like all I can do for now is support you using my limited skill with kido and this," the redhead exclaimed before running his hand along the edge of the blade from the handle to the tip and yelling," Howl Zabimaru!" His sword began to change from an ordinary katana into several single tooth pieces (similar to a chainsaw blade) that he started to swing around like a whip around his body.

"That's okay, Renji! You're not the only one that got caught up in Kaosu's charge, but I think that if we can get rid of that clone than he can double team him! Do you think that you can reach that clone from where you are?" Rin asked while still fending off the shadow infused sword that was still clashing against her energy infused sword.

Renji just nodded before swinging Zabimaru toward Kaosu's clone, he knew from his limited knowledge about this attack that the clone could not move very far without freeing him from the jutsu. The clone knew that he was stuck and that only a few slashes from Zabimaru would destroy him, but he also knew that he couldn't do any other jutsu while this one was still active. Renji's attack flew toward the clone who tried to block the attack with his sword, only for Zabimaru to switch direction to go around the clone and slash him across the back along the side to his front. As Zabimaru began to return to its normal size, Renji noticed a puff of smoke where the clone used to be and that he could move again. "Well so much for your clone, Kaosu! I'm coming Rin and then we can show him what we are really made of!" Renji shouted before continuing his charge against Kaosu.


After several hours of in the Toad Council Meeting, Gamikichi and two other toads finally arrived inside the Soul Society outside of the West Gate. "Gate Guardian, I wish permission to enter the Seireitei to finish my dual mission for the Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze of Konohagure and my father the Toad boss, Gamabunta!" he yelled to the giant of a man that guarded the west gate.

"Very well you may enter!" the man stated in a gruff voice before lifting the heavy wooden gate made out of several rounded pillar sized post with wooden planks near the top and bottom. Gamikichi and his companions entered a few minutes later and began to look around to get their bearings of where exactly they are.

"Where are we heading exactly, Gamikichi?" a pink toad with a kami style weapon on her back asked the team leader.

"Well according to the council and boss, the First Division Barracks are located near the middle of the Seireitei and should be exactly due east of the west gate, Gamidena," he explained before looking toward the direction of their destination.

"Well then what are we waiting for, let's get moving so that we can get this mission over with!" the last toad yelled with a lazy sigh. He was blue and carried a single broadsword on his back that was bigger than both of Gamikichi's swords put together. The other two toads nodded and then the three of them began to move due east toward the Head-Captain's office.


Renji charged toward Rin and Kaosu looking to finally put an end to this sparring match, but at the last second Kaosu deactivated the shadow aura that surrounded his sword and dodged to the side allowing Rin to move forward with her attack which moved her in position to run headlong into Renji. When Rin and Renji collided, Renji was cut from his left shoulder to about the middle of his chest and Rin was cut from her right hip to about the middle of her chest. Kaosu used the distraction to begin making handsigns to for the 'Doton: Kouka Jutsu!' that created a dark sheen across his body to allow him to take more attacks and then followed up with handsigns for the 'Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu!' which he used to disappear underground and began to plan his next move. It took Rin and Renji several minutes to realize that Kaosu was gone from the area, they immediately knew that he had figured out a new jutsu using his shadow chakra or that he had used an earth jutsu to disappear underground.

"Well what do you think Renji? Is he underground or just using a new jutsu that he created using his shadow chakra?" Rin asked while performing a few handsigns to protect the two for the 'Reiki: Energy Shield Jutsu!' that formed a protective barrier around them made out of energy chakra.

"I don't know but at least the first attack will fail now that you used this shield to protect us! Let's just hope that he doesn't have a backup plan that he can execute before we can counterattack!" Renji stated before he noticed that a few meters away from them the ground began to shake slightly indicating that someone was right there," Hey Rin, can you open up a hole in this shield big enough for me to fire off a kido spell?"

"Yeah I think so, just don't make it explode inside of the shield or we will pretty much lose this match!" Rin warned before opening a 2 foot hole inside of the energy shield.

Renji decided that the best way to go about this attack was to forget trying to recite the chant, but to just announce the hadou, 'Hadou 31: Shakkaho!' which fired a large red ball of energy toward the spot that Renji noticed the ground shaking.

Suddenly Kaosu shot out of the ground and fired off his concealed jutsu which was a condensed ball of shadow energy that was named 'Yami: Shadowball Jutsu!' that collided with the attack of Renji. At first the two attacks seemed to be completely evenly matched until Kaosu started to perform the handsigns for 'Yami: Shadowball Jutsu!' again which when he fired it at his first shadowball merged them together and made them more powerful and started to overpower the red ball of energy.

"Oh I don't think so," Rin yelled before beginning the handsigns for 'Reiki: Energy Pulse Jutsu!' which fired a pulse of pure energy chakra toward the 'Shakkaho' and started to move the attack back toward Kaosu. The attacks continued to hang in the air until the three noticed the appearance of a hell butterfly speeding toward them, Rin was the first to notice it and yelled," Hey guys, I think one of the captains are trying to get ahold of us! Kaosu it might be a good idea to use your shadow chakra to knock these attacks into the air, so that we can see what the hell butterfly has to say!"

Kaosu immediately began doing the handsigns for 'Yami: Shadowclaw Jutsu!' that formed a claw out of his shadow that he then used to knock all four attacks into the air where they finally exploded causing a huge shockwave throughtout the Seireitei. "I don't know guys maybe we got a little carried away this time, Hah! Anyway what did the hell butterfly have to say, Renji?" he asked when he walked back over to his friends.

"Well apparently we have been summoned to an emergency captain meeting in a hour and that we need to be ready to go out on a mission that could last up to a few weeks, but it doesn't say what kind of mission!" Renji stated after relaying the message.

"Let's go and get ready then I don't know about the two of you, but after that spar I need a bath! Looks like you got lucky Kaosu because there was no way that you could have beaten us if I was able to perform my next move, but I guess for now we will have to call this a draw!" Rin exclaimed before disappearing in a swirl of leaves.

"Yeah right! Well are you ready to leave do you want to use shunpo or want me to use our special ninja technique?" Kaosu asked to see how his friend wanted to leave the area.

"Thanks but I would definitely rather leave on my own!" Renji stated before leaving the area using shunpo.

"Whatever!" Kaosu shrugged before disappearing in a swirl of leaves himself.


End of Chapter 1

Well that is the first chapter of the Revised version of Chaos, please let me know what you think especially if you have read my first version of this story (which will still be up on at least until I get farther with this story than in that story). Just to let anyone that had read the first story, Shuhei will not be in this story at all because I have decided to create an original character that was apart of Team Jiraiya. I think either at the end of Chapter 2 or 3, I will include a character bio of my two main characters to let people know a little bit about them. * Question: Does anyone know that name of the move that Kakashi uses whenever he leaves the area?- the move that I have used at three time in this one chapter, I want to say that it is something like shuinsui or something but for the life of me I cannot remember!

Jutsu List

Kuchiyose no Jutsu- summoning jutsu that allows the user to summon a specific species of beast that you have signed a contract for

Yami: Shadowsneak Jutsu- specific jutsu of Kaosu; similar to the jutsu of the Nara Clan, except can not only keep the enemy from moving, but can also use the shadow to throw the opponent to where a teammate can take them out; also can keep opponent from using handsigns by surrounding their hands

Yami: Shadowbreak Jutsu- specific jutsu of Kaosu; fires a crescent slash of condensed shadow chakra from Kaosu's zanpakuto or from a kunai; can also be infused with the zanpakuto and kunai to empower that weapon

Doton: Kouka Jutsu (Hardening Jutsu)- technique allows the user to channel earth chakra around their body to make them more resistant to attacks

Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu (Mole Hiding Technique)- this technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight; allows them to avoid an attack or travel underground

Reiki: Energy Shield Jutsu- specific jutsu of Rin; can form a shield of pure energy chakra that can protect Rin and a group of people from any attack; Rin is able to make holes within the shield to allow attacks out or surround (trap) an enemy inside of the shield and allow an attack to enter to maximize damage potential

Yami: Shadowball Jutsu- specific jutsu of Kaosu; forms a ball of condensed shadow chakra that can be fired to block a projectile or jutsu; can also be used for a long range attack against opponent

Reiki: Energy Pulse Jutsu- specific jutsu of Rin; fires a beam of concentrated energy chakra; similar uses as shadowball jutsu that Kaosu uses

Yami: Shadowclaw Jutsu- specific jutsu of Kaosu; forms a claw of concentrated shadow chakra used for long range attacks or to gather items from a distance

Other abilities

Shunpo (Flash Step): let the user cover a vast distance in a split second with a single step

Hadou 31: Red Flame Cannon (Shakkaho)- fires a ball of red energy at a target; can be used by chanting a phrase which will make it more powerful or just by saying its name

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