So this is short, and as I see it, crappy. But I haven't done any poetry for characters I love in a long time, and I wanted to do something for them.
In a time long ago, there was a spring
Concealed in the woods too deep to disturb
And by the spring there was a maiden
Her voice rang with her harp, and sang out her words
With dark hair that tumbled down
Sinking into the glassy pool so peacefully
With a smile that sang of an unheard sound
Turned to the one for whom she played
The ringing of her harp's threads
And the singing of her life's years
Called forth someone to watch her
Resting by the pool without fear
A woman of pain and despair
Found herself healing under the power of melodies
And fell in love with the loops of the maiden's hair
With her voice, her heart, everything she was and would ever be
The pool shimmered with the memories of both
And even as time slipped away in the weaving of songs
Dark to white, and age from youth
They stayed together their whole life long
Now if you go to that undisturbed wood
And to that moonlit spring
You may just hear the voices of two maidens
A ghostly harp to accompany those who sing
In the depth of quiet woods, a pure voice, resounding
Far back in the age of myth there was a spring where a goddess dwells
So, feedback please?
