Hey! Revising each chapter! Slowly but surely it's happening. Just that i've looked over it, and it really needs it. Maybe up to like 11 or 12. My writing as gotten better since, you know, two years ago, and it's something that just has to happen!

Reasons? Well one reason is that it might capture more readers. Even though it did just fine on how it was, I doubt it captures as much as it could because of all the grammer mistakes, the fast pace, and the lack of descreption.

I was going to get a beta to go over and fix everything then repost, but its more than just the mistakes. I think the story line just needs a tad bit more tweak to it also. So. Hopefully, I will reel more readers in.

DISCLAIMER - I do not own Naruto.


The pink haired teen leaned against her black and purple Charger, she loved that car. Waiting patiently for her bestie to make her way, slowly most likely, out of the school. The bell rang 10 minutes ago, which in that time Sakura said bye to Hinata, Kiba, Shika, Sasuke, AND able to talk to Naruto for a few minutes before saying bye to him, grabbing the homework she forgot, making it to her car, and still having time to wait for Ino. She didn't mind of course.

Sakura sighed leaned her head back a bit, but as she saw the clouds slowly float by, a smile played across her lips. If anyone was enjoying the weather, it was her. Spring wasn't too hot or cold and she absolutely loved the rain.

X

The pinked haired stood there and let the rain hug every inch of her body as it slowly soaked her. She smiled and raised her arms up, twirling around in a slow circle. She looked like a kid when fresh new snow slowly falls to the ground.

"Sakura?"

Sakura turned around to see her best friend standing there with an umbrella. "Ino! You came to visit me!" Sakura yelled louder then necessary, but the blond smiled at her act.

"I swear you're such a kid," Ino sighed out, shaking her head. She looked back to see a certain twinkle in the pinked hair's eyes. Her own eyes widened then, taking a step back in caution. "Forehead, I'm- I'm warning you," She stuttered in fear as her friend took a step toward her, "Saku! No! Come on! I JUST did my hair!" She whined, as Sakura circled around to the other side of her.

Sakura leapt for her, tackling her to the soft, muddy grass. "Forehead!" Ino yelled, but Sakura just smiled at her.

"Come on Ino, be a kid again and enjoy the weather with me."

Ino's anger soon seeped away, and all she could do was smile. "God your such a kid…"

X

She smiled at the memory, it was now a year later, and there renewed friendship was still going strong. They have gotten closer when they were at high school. They were juniors and had most of the same classes, all but maybe 3, and things were starting to look up for her. She's been much better since she got her old best friend back. She was so happy the day they had FINALLY made up, that she was convinced to do these classes with Naruto. Karate. At first she completely refused, but after a couple of months taking the class, she figured out that she was actually good at it, and it worked great for her anger.

Hell yes she had a very bad temper. She got into a lot of fights, but don't let the toughness fool you, she was brilliant. She was passing all her classes with A's, the occasional B appearing here and there. She had some AP classes, the ones she didn't have with Ino, but most of them were honors.

Sakura was also head of the basketball team, and when she wasn't doing basketball, she was doing track. She stayed tried to stay fit, and keep a on a bit of muscle. She had plenty of friends, mostly with the middle crowd, you know, the kids who aren't popular but not nerdy, and they can be completely cool and down to earth. Yeah, those people. But other then that, nothing was really special about her, makes her think how exactly did she get Ino as a best friend.

Ino, of course, was the drop dead gorgeous blond everyone loved. Girls would crowded her all the time, talking and joking. Sakura didn't like that too much, but she just pushed it aside. The guys though, they lined up to date her, all trying to see if they could even gain the chance. She always had a boy on her, which made Sakura a bit upset about that also, but despite all that, Ino was still a virgin.

She was the head of the cheerleading team AND dance team, schools most popular girl, everyone's dating advice, every girls dream, and every guy, well uh, dreamed about her, if you catch the drift. She was perfect in every godly way; she was fit, with a lean stomach and toned arms, she had shape to her body, curves, and boobs and ass that made guys drool as she slowly swayed her hips and bounced happily as she walked.

Her ears perked when heels clapped softly on the concrete road.

Sakura smiled, turning around, "Bout time I was-" She stopped dead. Her eyes grew wide, and anger pulsed in her veins.

Ino's cheek was bruised and her lip was busted. Red liquid was slowly seeping out of it., and clear liquid was running down her cheek. The pink haired junior rushed to her best friend, gathering her in her arms.

"Who?" She asked, in a low, harsh voice. She could have sworn if you listened hard enough, you could hear her growl deep in the back of her throat. For a good 30 seconds, Ino didn't answer. Sakura was impatient, "Ino. Who?" Sakura asked, a bit more demanding, and pulling away from her a bit to hear her reply.

"Stacy." She whimpered. This time, it was loud and clear, you could here the growl from Sakura.

The fuming pink haired girl headed inside of the school. Stacy, that snobby little trick, she never liked her. She was going to tear her limb from limb.

No one. Messes. With. Ino. Her inner self growled.

Fuck no they don't, she replied.

She rounded the corner, and saw her. She had her back turned and was talking to friends. Sakura walked towards her, with a sweet, fake, little smile on. "Hey Stacy," She called sweetly.

Stacy turned around, "What do you want los-" She was cut off, with a fist connecting cleanly with her face. Stacy stumbled and hit the locker behind her, sliding to the floor. Hm, those classes really did pay off sometimes. She made a silent note to thank Naruto. Her friends then ran away, so now they were alone, and she was going to enjoy it.

Sucks to be you, by the time this is over, your going to wish you hadn't messed with Ino.

Oh no sweet heart, she's going to be begging god to reverse time so she wouldn't do it.

She was just about to kick her when she heard Ino.

"Quit it Sakura, you'll just end yourself in trouble again."

Sakura breathed in deeply, trying to regain her breath, which she just realized were heavy and ragged. "Your right, the bitch isn't worth it," She said in a disgust tone, "But if you EVER try some shit like that again, believe me, you'll pay, and Ino wont be able to save your ass next time." Sakura turned around, and walked away, Ino quickly following.

Driving Home

"Look at my big bad protector," Ino said in a flirty manner. Sakura knew she was always like that, but couldn't help her heart skipping a beat.

"I can't believe the bitch would try something like that, I don't give a shit if she was mad you stole her boyfriend. Bitch is ugly, and after he got what he wanted he moved on," Sakura ranted, as she pulled in to the drive way of Ino's house. There was no car there, which meant no one was home, and for some reason, her heart lurched because of that reason.

"Down killer," Ino said in a sexy low voice, swinging her leg up and turning her self. The movement was so quick, Sakura blinked and Ino just appeared there, sitting on her lap, facing her. She leans in, and slides her lips right to Sakura's ear, "Don't bite anyone now."

Sakura's face heated up at Ino being so close, but she sighed, "Ino, one day your gonna have to let me show a bitch a lesson once and for all," She said, easing her back so she can get a good look at her friends cheek. She touched the bruise lightly and looks at Ino, "Killer over here doesn't like to be held back when someone's trying to beat on her master."

Ino smiles, "God Saku, your so cute when your being protective" Then she giggles.

All Sakura could do was shake her head, "Jeez Ino, you are impossible." Then she grabbed the girl with one arm, and used her other hand to swing the door open, she easily got out with her still attached to her hip.

Sakura stood there for a second…

"Ino?"

"Yes ma'am?"

"You can get off now"

No babe, you can stay as long as you like, as long as I get to pin you on a wall and-

Oh god, I'm some type of perverted.

It can't be helped! She's all over us, holding on with her legs wrapped around our waist. Just love to-

Shut up. Shut up! No thinking about that.

-suck on her neck, and slide my tongue right down her sexy stomach-

I'm such a fucking pervert.

It's not our fault that's she's so damn sexy. Oh wait look! She's talking to us.

"Sakura! Are you even listening to me?" Ino said, with a cute little pout on her face, waving her hands in front of Sakura's eyes. Sakura absolutely loved when Ino called her that nick name, but never told Ino that. For some strange reason though, Sakura felt like she already knew.

"Sorry, blanked on ya', what'd you say?"

"I said, what happened to the kid a year ago in the rain," She said with a smile, "Its like now YOUR oh so grown up and IM the kid,"

"I started to grow up when I realized I had to protect your ass," Sakura said with a shrug, truth was the kid was still inside of her, only at certain times, like in the rain.

"You love me," She states simply as she slides off Sakura. She walks towards the door, giving Sakura a good chance to watch her ass sway back and forth.

She does it on purpose. To tease us.

*Groans* That has to be the reason. Ever since we told her it's been like this.

"Saku," Ino calls in a sing song voice.

"Yeah?" Sakura calls back, blinking herself back to reality.

"When your done watching me walk away, are you gonna come in?" She says with a smirk and a wink, when she turns around and looks at Sakura.

Smoothly Sakura just rolls her eyes and says, "You wish, but yeah sure I'll come in," Heat though, as she can feel, rises to her cheek with a blush.

Hour later

Jai ho was blasting in Ino's room as Ino danced by herself, looking very sexy, while Sakura was trying to do homework, when she wasn't distracted looking at Ino dance that is.

"Jeeze! I completely hate History! It's so fucking boring!" Sakura cursed to herself, looking at her book.

Sakura didn't see Ino making her way to her, "Come on Sakura, dance with me!" she whined, taking Sakura's hand and pulling at it.

"I have to do my homework Ino." Sakura said, not budging as Ino tugged on her hand.

"Oh come on, just one dance." Ino begged with a pout.

Not like we can tell her no.

Sakura smiles as she gets up on her feet. Ino beams at her as she pulls her to the middle of the room. The song changes, and now its Break up by Mario. She lifts up Sakura's hand that she was holding over their head and she twirls around, her back facing Sakura. She slowly starts grinding on her to the beat, pressing her ass on her. Sakura's face burns light red.

Sakura leaned forward, still feeling embarrassed, as she whispered softly in Ino's ear, "This isn't dancing, this is you grinding on me."

Ino smiles and winks at Sakura, "I knew this song was next, so I tricked you." She grabs Sakura's other hand, and brings it low, then guides it as she slides them, slowly, across her thighs, then her inner thighs, then back up. She lets go of her hand to let them do the rest on there own, while she brings her hands around the back of Sakura's neck, straitening her back and sliding down a bit, pressing her ass a bit harder on her crouch and bringing herself back up.

Sakura starts to slide her hand down Ino stomach lightly, sliding it at her thighs. By now, she was going to the slow beat, moving with Ino.

Ino leans forward, grinding to the beat. The ticking of the song only makes her go faster and slightly harder, and when it goes away, she goes back to grinding softer and slower. She takes Sakura's hands back and brings them over her head as she continues and straightens a bit.

Ino continued until the song was over. Grinding and twitching her hips against Sakura's front without the slightest remorse. While she enjoyed herself, Sakura was left feeling the pulse surge through her to between her legs. Her breathing was uneven, her mind was fogged, and her eyes were slightly unfocused. But even through all of that, she kept her hands moving with Ino's, whether it was holding her hands or sliding them over her thighs and body. It truly didn't matter, because all the while Sakura was slowly losing herself. Piece by piece, she fell into the darkness.

But she was pushed back into the light as the song ended and Ino stopped moving. She straightened, her back still pressing against Sakura. They stood there for awhile, Sakura's hand frozen at Ino's waist, where it had been when the song stopped.

"Well," Ino said, turning around and wrapping her arms around Sakura's neck loosely, and swaying back and forth, "That was fun, huh Saku?"

God that was torture.

"Yeah, only you could make you grinding on me non lesbonic." Sakura spoke, trying to contain her croak as her body began to move on it's own. Her thumbs rubbed against Ino's waist absently, the smooth skin soothing her nerves. She was staring in Ino's eyes now, with little struggle unlike normal. If anything, she couldn't tear her gaze away from Ino's.

"You so made up that word," Ino said, looking right back into her eyes.

"Fuck yeah I did," Sakura said, whispered actually. She didn't know it, but she was moving closer. Ino's lavender scent caught her nose.

"And only you can make up a word, but still say 'fuck yeah' as if your still cool," Ino whispered back.

"But you love me," Sakura said, her shrug weak and hardly noticeable. Their nose was almost brushing.

"Of course, who else will love this idiot, if not me?" Ino teased, her eyes twinkling as Sakura moved closer.

"I don't know." Sakura mumbled in reply, her eyes flicking to Ino's lips and back up, "I'm sure some one would take killer in."

And that's all she said before her eyes were closed and she was softly kissing Ino. Blame it on the liquor by D. Brown was on now.

She didn't get a response, but she couldn't bring herself to stop. Ino's lips were so soft, hardly firm, they were unlike anything Sakura ever encountered. The new discovery is what caused her to keep going, not the flaring of feelings that were raging through her. The numbness of her mind is what made her ignorate to the fact that this was her best friend, not the fact Ino hadn't responded yet.

Ino…

Ino..Ino..Best friend Ino!

Everything became clear, especially when her eyes widened. "Fuck. Fuck fuck fuck." Sakura repeated as she avoided Ino's eyes, actually her whole body. "Listen, I'm just, uh, gonna go and, um, I'll catch you tomorrow." She was saying, grabbing all over her things.

"Wait!" Ino cried out, but Sakura ignored her. She got on her knees and started to search for her keys, "Sakura!"

"Damn it, where the hell are my car keys!" Sakura mumbled furiously to herself, hopefully loud enough for Ino to hear, to distract her from whatever she was going to say, because honestly Sakura didn't want to hear it.

Our friendship is down the tube now. What the fuck is my problem.

"Sakura."

"Mother fucker if I don't find those damn things," Sakura growled out, as she started to grab absently at anything that was under Ino's bed.

"Sakura!"

Fuck it, don't even need the keys I'll walk.

She stood, her back facing Ino, and grabbed her book bag and headed towards the door.

When Ino realized Sakura wasn't going to turn around, she quickly followed, "Sakura, don't. Ok." But Sakura just continued out the door, heading for the stairs, "What Sakura, you think I'm judging you right now?" Ino called after her, going down the stairs with Sakura, trying to keep pace.

"No," Was all Sakura said. When she spotted her keys on the kitchen counter, Sakura walked over and snatched them up. When she turned to leave the kitchen, Ino stood in the door way, the only way out of the kitchen, and ultimately, out of the house."

"Then why won't you even look at me?" Ino questioned, her voice hurt. Sakura's eyes squinted at the sound, but she continued to stay silent, "Why are you over reacting when I know about you! I know your bi, I don't care!"

"It isn't about the fact that you know I'm bi Ino!" Sakura argued.

"Then what is it?" Ino demanded, her arms crossing, "You're here trying to run out of this house, like I'm some type of plague, and there's no reason to!"

Sakura shook her head, gripping her keys and moving towards the doorway, "Just forget about, alright?" She even attempted to put on a fake smile, anything to leave the house, "It never happened, ok?"

Ino stood her ground, "Stop. This is so stupid, I mean I started the dance, so it was my fault."

"No, its cool, really, this didn't even happen. What are we even talking about, haha." She said, laughing nervously while she tried to find a way to squeeze past Ino.

But Ino just stood there, her arms slowly falling from the crossed position, "I don't care, Sakura. Really. So stop acting like this."

Sakura looked to the right, a frown on her face as she tried to concentrate, "Alright. Whatever. Just let me get out of here, ok?"

"Would you please just stay here and talk to me?" Ino asked softly.

But Sakura only got more frustrated, "Ino."

"Sakura."

"Please move." Sakura practically growled.

"No."

"Ino." Sakura warned.

"No."

"Ino!"

"Look at me, damn it!"

Sakura's eyes lifted slowly to Ino's, a slight frown on her face as she struggled not to look away, "What?"

"I just…" Ino struggled, "I was just really nervous. It's just that…I think…I could do better."

Sakura's eyebrows came together in confusion. But she didn't have time to comprehend, because Ino was already stepping closer and moving her face near Sakura's. She didn't even have time to breathe as Ino lightly grazed their lips together for a moment until pressing them fully, her lips moving slowly against Sakura.

Fuck yes.

Ino pulled back too soon, her cheeks red and she had a nervous little look on her face as she began to speak, "So, um-"

But she was cut off as Sakura lunged for Ino's lips again. The action had them both stumbling, Ino going backwards as Sakura stepped forward. Ino ended up against the wall, her hands pinned against the wall next to her as Sakura furiously kissed her. Ino's chest felt tight and pulses raced through her as she kissed back, her mind fuzzy.

When Sakura finally gave her enough time to breathe, she giggled, even while Sakura lightly kissed down her jaw line, "Down killer." She mumbled.

That only caused Sakura to come back up to her with a grin as she bit her lower lip.


See, just a tad fix here and there. Nothing BIG.

Dont worry, working on the latest chapters as we speak. I'm actually trying to make it really long for you guys because i've reached a 100 reviews! :)

Shycadet loves.

out.