I do not own Twilight, anything to do with it or its characters, I wish I did, but I don't!
OK, so here it goes, my first fanfic, I need need need feedback on this because to be quite honest, i'm not really sure what direction this is going to head, any help would be good help? constructive criticism? please? Take it easy on me?
This was just an idea that i've had for a while now and I really felt like I had to put pen to paper, I know this is only short, but hopefully its good?
Let me know!? =]
Prologue
BPOV
It just all happened so suddenly, it was like slow motion and yet I just couldn't stop it from happening.
All day I had just focussed on no drawing attention to myself, just keeping to the walls and staying quiet; but suddenly, all eyes were on me, boring holes that would need more than a band aid to heal, I couldn't believe I had been so stupid, so clumsy, everything and everyone, it seemed, had turned silent.
I looked up, realised I was still staring at the slice of pizza that slowly slid off of the black T – shirt in front of me. I slowly raised my head, changing through various shades of red, hoping that one would help me blend into the walls, they didn't. I finally settled on his face. He was beautiful, every part of him, from the dishevelled, unkempt bronze hair, to the chiselled jaw line and malachite eyes. I didn't know it was possible for someone to look this way; he was dazzling, beautiful, and absolutely fucking furious. I wasn't sure I was able to process thoughts that that moment in time, but I'm sure I heard Lauren Malloy snigger.
So, how was it for you?
