This is my first fanfiction. . .please don't kill me. I know it sucks. Just. . .I know. But don't troll that it sucks.

Disclaimer: I don't own RWBY or any characters. Or Garnet. . .Got him from a cool picture on deviantArt. But I am using him *Evil Smirk*

Garnet: God why me. . .On with the story then. . .

All Garnet wanted to do was tell his sister that he was alive. That he had been kidnapped by the infamous Roman Torchwick and trained to be a killer since age 5. Despite his countless attempts at escape, Roman always caught and stopped him. Usually beat him afterward as well. So, at age 15, He stole into the armory, Stole his knives that turned into pistols (Beam Magnum) and his Dual Blades (Shadow Vigil) then continued on his merry way. He stole down hallways, his feet not making a sound on the marble floor. His silence paid off and no one noticed him. He quickly jumped the wall and escaped the White Fang compound. He then continued to use luck and skill to make his way home so that he could tell his family that he was alive. He knew that Roman had made them think he was dead and he wanted to show that he was fine. He made it home, only to find that his mother and father were dead and that his sister had gone to Beacon Academy. "Off I go then" Garnet muttered as he started making the trek to the airship station.

I wish Garnet was still alive . . .well, one more reason to be a Huntress. Protect the people. Ruby thought as she lie on her bed, supposed to be doing homework. "Ruby! You know you should be doing homework right?!" Weiss said loudly so that Ruby heard her. "I know I should but I was just thinking about some stuff" Ruby said from the top bunk. "What Stuff" Weiss said, genuinely interested. "Well, I guess I could tell you. Its a sad subject though. I used to have a twin brother named Garnet. He and I were very, very close and He went for a bike ride when we were five and he was body was found a couple days later in a ditch along with his bike" Ruby said, tears springing to her eyes. "Oh. Wow Ruby. That must have hit you hard. Do you want a hug or something" Weiss said, feeling sorry for the petite girl. "A hug would be nice but he is one of the many reasons I decided to become a huntress" Ruby said, jumping off the top bunk and was about to hug Weiss when the some guy in a red cloak crashed through the window into their room. Weiss and Ruby quickly had their weapons trained on the newcomer. "Who are you and why are you in our room" Ruby demanded. "Alright, why don't we put down the weapons so I don't get my head blown off." the man said with a slight chuckle in his voice. "Not until you tell us your name" Weiss said, switching Myrtenaster's chamber to fire dust, the blade gaining a red aura. "Alright, Alright, my name is Garnet Rose, looking for Ruby Rose, please don't kill me" Garnet said very quickly, flipping back the hood of his cloak, his eyes wide with fear. He then smirked and said "You wouldn't happen to know her would you?" Ruby fainted on the spot, hitting the ground with a loud thud.

So how was the first chappy? A total failure? Suggestions on how to improve my writing are appreciated. R&R