Hello! Thank you so much for giving my story a chance=]

Well this is my second story, please review and tell me if you like it or not

Also please check the first story I wrote, It's kinda crappy but it was my first try, please check it out.

In this story the girl speaks French but I am not sure that many people will want to read so many French words, so I have decided to underline when anyone is talking French.

Thank you...


I awoke to another bright morning, the sun shining in my face. It seemed that was how i awoke every morning now. A knock came from the door

"Enter" I shouted, and my maid came in. She opened the door and stepped inside, she was a pudgy women, not very tall, not young either, but she was loving, the only women who I have ever treated like a mother.

She smiled at me "Get up! There is much to do today". When I got up she walked to me and started giving me all the things I had to do for the day. We walked into the big walk-in closet, I picked out clothes that would look nice, shoes, accessories. Elsa, my maid went on but something she said made me stop dead in my tracks

"My father? He has returned?" she shook her head and explained that he wanted to talk to me, I kept walking and whatever else she said was blocked by the thought of talking to him. Once she left me I started to try on all the clothes, there was a sun dress that was white with green diamond patterns along the side of the dress, another which was blue with stripe on the top and bottom, there were more that I tried on, but I settled with a light purple sundress with a black belt along the waist, some heels that were not to long with the same color of the dress, and simple jewelry. I walked to the mirror and started brushing my long brown hair, since it was warm today I had decided to put it into a ponytail. There was never really a fondness of make-up for me, but since today there was going to be lawyers, there was always lawyers when it involved talking to him, maybe it was wise idea.

The minute I had finished breakfast, Elsa rushed me down into the conference room, where my father was sitting at his desk with a bunch of men wearing suits. They were laughing about something, glass in their hands, too early to drink I thought. My father stood up once he saw me and walked towards me giving me a kiss on my cheek. He told them I was his daughter, they greeted me, and I greeted back. My father was in too good of a mood, to the world it would seem normal, but to me it's just a bad sign.

"You have a beautiful daughter" one of the men who was taller than the other said, the smaller one added with a shake of his head. My father took pride in that. He did say I was the greatest achievement he ever did, not just because I am his only daughter but because with my help he gets to use the beauty that my mother gave me to his advantage. Is that why he wanted to see me, to close another deal? I sighed and my father looked at me, he was getting worried that I would ruin whatever he was planning. He laughed trying to cover my boredom. He went back to his desk and offered the men to sit again. Once they did my father directed me to the couch on the side of the room.

My father looked at me softly and faced the men. The smaller man turned and grabbed a briefcase "shall we begin?", my father replied with a nod, he had a weird look on his face, must be from all the drinking in the morning. "Mr. Kiaba will be here in a moment" the taller one said "but he has allowed us to begin without him". My father nodded in agreement, Kiaba? why did that name seem very familiar? Maybe it could be... no that's impossible. Its been so long since I've seen him, what business would my father have with him? My father sat in his chair unpleasantly, why was he so fidgety? Then all the men started talking in Japanese, "I believe everything is set?" the tall one asked. "As promised, I will give you what was agreed upon" my father said. The tall one spoke again "then all you need to do is make her sign this" he handed my father a few sheets of paper "and you sign these" more papers. My father checked all of them and smiled, what was he planning? It seemed like he didn't need me at all, so why was I here anyway?

After more signing and talking things out he called me to his desk "Victoria, come here" so I went and when I asked why, all he said was "nothing just sign this, it isn't important"something felt odd about it but I soon brushed off the feeling thinking that it was just something that said I was a witness for this meeting. Once I was done I asked if I could be excused since I was not needed anymore. As I opened the door, there was a man standing in front of me who was a head taller, he had brown hair, and some gorgeous blue eyes. He stared at me coldly and walked inside the room without saying a word "I expect everything went smoothly" was the first thing he said, all the men got up and welcomed him. "Everything is signed and concluded" said the tall one, my father handed all the papers to the smaller one. I couldn't contain myself "Papa?" I asked "what is going on?", all my father did was give a pained expression and look away.

"You mean you haven't told her?" said the man in Japanese "told me what?" I asked in the same language, he walked towards me and looked me straight in they eye with his blue ones, all I could do was stare back "You are now my wife" he said.


Well how was it? Good or bad? Please comment, I really want some feedback. Thank you.