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This is my first fanfiction so I am open to all reviews.

Chapter 1: Everything went weird.

As The Doctor and Rose stepped into The Tardis Rose drops to the floor. The Doctor runs over to have a look, he gets his gadget out and runs it over Rose's body.As sudden as Rose's collapse was the power cut of The Tardis. The Doctor is completely baffled. First Rose and now this, what was happening? Then he heard a tapping noise below The Tardis. It turned to a shuffling noise till finally a scraping noise. Whatever it was, was closing in on The Doctor and there was nothing he could do.

The dark escalated the problem to as The Doctor couldn't see what he soon would be facing. He nearly sobbed but he's not that kind of person.

"I am a Timelord the last of my race and I demand the respect of any man woman or beast the crawls in the depth of my Tardis." He informed the thing.

"Ahhh so it is you!" The unearthly voice cried. "I thought I may have had the wrong person, my friends describe you as a lot more macho and decisive, but they are all weak idiots anyway. I am a Detromenter unlike you I am a very common beast there are hundreds of thousands of us! We like to attack lone time travellers.That's whyI had to knock your friend out!"

The Doctor's forehead was covered in sweat, in fact there was almost a puddle of sweat were he stood. He looked around franticly but then his mind started to calculate, he would find the beast by were its voice came from.

"So you think that you a normal Detromenter can take on a Timelord. You are as common as space dust, but you think you're something special don't you? Well you're not I remember when I invaded your planet. Before I catch you and slay you though one question. How did you find me?

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