SPYRO ETERNAL DARKNESS

Hey its my first fanfic so please be nice but tell me if you think it needs improvement

It was two days after the defeat of Malifor,the dark master.

It was a shining winter snow sparkled in the suns light,bare trees looked as if they had white leaves.

Cynder thought it was beautiful but not pretty as had purple scales gold under belly horns and tail tip

which to cynder looked like a dimond.

'' he looks so beautiful when he sleeps...''Cynder thought to herself.

It had been two short days after Cynder told Spyro she loved did he love her back? she was wondering

if this was true. when Spyro woke up .

''Hi Spyro'' She said in a loving like voice.

''Good morning Cyn.''Cynder blushed but loved this nickname and decided to keep it that way.

'' Do you like the nickname cynder''

''I dont like it-'' spyro lowered his head when he heard this. ''-i love it'' at this spyro raised his head and gleamed at her''

'' I'd better get us some breakfast''said Cynder as she dreamly looked at Spyro.

As she started to leave Sparx woke up, Sparx's Little ''sleeping area'' as he called it, was near the exit so all he saw was Cynder running towards him.

''SPYRO HELP DOOM-GLOOM HAS COME TO EAT ME IM TO YOUNG TO DIE !''

''SHUT UP Sparx ,said Spyro in an angry voice,'',just cause Malifor is dead doesnt mean the dark army isnt still around and looking around trying to avenge his death!'' geez is that all sparx does is make fun of Cynder? I feel bad for cynder everyone taunts her because of her past. spyros thought began to stray.. what about the 3 words she said in the core...

those three words were i love you but did she mean it?those words had giving him the power boost he needed to pull the planet back did he love her?as he thought of her image in his mind he couldnt deny it anymore. he did love her he planed to tell her as soon as she got back.

Cynder came in through the ''door'' as they called it looking quite worried

''what is it?'' spyro asked jumping up.

'' Its the-

sorry i hate cliff hangers too if i was reading this i said GOD DAM YOU MAKE ANOTHER ONE!dont feel bad i need a bets reader BAD PM me if interested

please review chapters will get longer i have chapters 2-4 planed already you wont have to wait long... and yes

SPARX WILL BE HUMEROUS pm me if you think i should make an improvment

and if you dont start reviewing ill wait another 2 day till i post the next one lol but im serious ;]