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Stay Sexy, Molly, xoxo

"Mum, when's Paul coming back home" Katie Lloyd asked her Mum

"I don't know sweet cheeks, Dad will be home from work soon though" Katie's Mum replied

Katie was bored out of her brains, she slowly plodded back to her bedroom and lay down on her bed, she lay in her bed staring up at the poster on her roof of her big brother Justin Gabriel. She missed him so much, they were very close and used to do everything together. She hadn't seen him for 4 years, the only contact they had was over Skype and by phone. It was coming up for her 18th birthday and and Justin was out for a year with and achilles tear. Katie was hoping he would come home to South Africa for the time that he had off for his injury.

Katie heard a knock on the front door,

"Hon, can you get that I'm on the toilet" Katies Mother shouted.

Katie rolled out of bed and walked out to the landing, she saw that her Mum had opened the door and saw her brother Paul Lloyd standing at the bottom of the stairs. Katie Screamed so loud that it almost burst their Mothers ear drums, she ran nearly all the way down the stairs before jumping into her brothers open arms, he caught her and swung her around, Paul put her down and they embraced in a hug.

"MANGAZA!" Paul said (Surprise)

"Did you know about this Mum" Katied asked excitedly

"Of course sweet cheeks, It's your birthday present from Paul" their Mum replied

Paul pulled Katies head in and gave her a hug,

"Ngiyakuthanda" Paul told Katie he gave her a kiss on the forehead

"I Love you too" Katie excitedly replied

Please let me know what you think and review and give me Ideas for the story I have no clue where it's going from here