I'm trying to make a fic in English. It's from my poem in Indonesian that I translate to English. Just read and don't forget to review, nyaa!!
Title : ARE YOU AN ANGEL??
Pairing : GrayXClaire (REALLY!! I LOVE THIS PAIRING SO MUCH!!)
Category : Poetry/Romance
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Have you ever seen an angel??
I have.
The first time I saw her.
Her blonde hair.
Her blue-sky eyes.
Her so-captivated smile.
Her perfect figure.
She was so charmed.
I thought I met an angel.
I proved that I was wrong.
She didn't have wings on her back.
Or shining circle above her head.
She was an ordinary human like me.
She looked so weak and fragile.
As though she could be crushed if hurt.
Again, I proved that I was wrong.
She was so amazing.
She brought a dead farm to life.
She gave colorful live to this town.
She had a hidden power too.
A power that made me changed.
She made me to be a better person.
I'm so happy be with her.
Now, I'm sure that she was an angel.
An angel that God sent for me.
An angel who stole my heart.
Claire, my angel.
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So, what do you think?? Give me review, so I can improve my writing skill (O,O)v
