Heya guys !

Here's the story I made. For a reason I made this story because I saw a fan made thing that is really kinda popular on Deviantart so yeah... I just want to do this but for me, it's kinda hard to find its title...

And yeah... lol. This story is kinda similar to 'MCSM Among the white eyes' by my friend, PurpleDoesArt or a Septiplier fan xD
Honestly, I don't know that story yet xDDD

And this cover, yeah I made this art xD I worked so hard on it xDDD and sorry for a few mistakes on this story lol still not good at english yet though,

And there will be a little Magnugaard in this story.
although Ivor is not here with the Order yet for a reason. You'll know it and he'll be here on some next chapters soon !

EDIT 3/26/2017: I fixed the grammars of these chapter 1 to 4 using Microsoft Office Word but I'm not sure that it was the best thing for fixing wrong grammars ^^; But I hope you understand these chapters I fixed

Hope you like this story

Read this chapter, please review, and have a nice day !


It was a nice Friday morning.

There was a beautiful girl, Ellegaard, who is sleeping in her room. She hadn't waked up yet.

When a voice came into her room, she freshly woke up from her sleepiness and opened her eyes. She slowly sat up, stretching her arms widely.

Then she heard someone's calling her name from the door until the door opened by someone. It was Magnus, her best friend but they're both best friends of each other.

"Hey Ellie, it's time for breakfast" Magnus said "Come on, our friends are waiting for you"

"Sure Magnus" Ellegaard agreed, yawning for a few seconds "I'm getting so hungry now"

Then Ellegaard and Magnus went to the kitchen. Honestly, I like those two together as their best friends in this story.

They made it to the kitchen, seeing their friends, Gabriel and Soren were already sat down in front of the table with their perfect delicious breakfast are ready.

"Hey guys I brought her here in the kitchen" Magnus told the two people

"Oh great" Soren smiled

"Come on guys, your breakfast is waiting" Gabriel let them to sit down on the chair in front of the table.

The two saw their breakfast were already prepare. They were eggs and bacons. The two both smiled since this is their favorite breakfast. All the people picked out their spoon and fork from the table, and were ready to eat.

A FEW MINUTES HAD PASSED OVER...

When they all finished eating their delicious breakfast, Gabriel suddenly stood up from the chair and went to get something on the kitchen cabinet.

After a few seconds, he went back to the table and brought something for his friends and shouts "WHO WANTS COOKIES ?!"

He handed out a jar of cookies

His friends amazed and shouted happily that they love cookies, especially Ellegaard. She really loves cookies so much.

Gabriel handed over each cookie to his each friend. Then he saw an only friend who hadn't get a cookie yet. It's Ellegaard

"Hey Ellegaard here is the cookie" Gabriel said as he handles over a cookie to his last friend, Ellegaard but she shook her head.

"No thanks" Ellegaard replied as she pat her belly "I think I'm full but I'll eat it later"

Silence. The boys stared at her for a few seconds before Gabriel speaks. I think she's going to have a diet since she doesn't want to get fat on this day though.

"Well fine" He agreed "I'll just put this jar back on the top shelf"

He walked away to put the jar back while his friends were out of the kitchen.

Suddenly, a strange guy with the white eyes saw through the inside of the window, seeing people in the kitchen. He was just spying them the whole time.

"Ooh ! I love cookies !" A guy smiled evilly "I really want to eat them. I'll just find the way to get them tonight"


Sorry it's too short... but don't worry. I think I have time to update the next chapter xD

If you're wondering who is that guy with the white eyes, probaably you know this famous guy from Creepypasta or Minecraft xD

The next chapter will be out soon